The Strongest Lord: Rising from the Knights

It is well written and brilliantly written, and it vividly reflects the difficulties and dangers of Gaia, the pirate king, who goes over mountains and ridges to find the Dragon Balls in order to rescue Tang Monk who is trapped under Mount Buzhou.

I wrote it myself, no matter how rubbish it is, I still have to cheer for myself 😁

Don't use Chinese names when writing Western fantasy, it will look very funny.

It is understandable that the writing is not good, after all, he is a new author, but some of the writing is not so good that it makes sense. It is just like playing house with a child. Do you think sticks and candies can be used at any time? What is the state of the servants in the baron's family? They are traitors. Don't say that they are ignorant and innocent. Learn about the Middle Ages. The most unbearable thing is the maid. As a maid, don't you know your dignity? Then how did she survive in the baron's house? Let alone she is a magician's apprentice. She is hidden, so a sinner maid who has not shown her own worth can talk back to the winner at will, and promote her to the position of (similar to) housekeeper. I don't understand.

The pace of this book is too fast, and many places are very deliberate. The villains are like children, easily angered, and like to cause trouble. Sometimes I can basically know what is going to happen next just by looking at the chapter names, the dialogue between the characters, etc.

A maid actually made her master swear, which made me laugh.

It's a bit poisonous. I don't know why. Most of the protagonists in all the hegemony novels have insufficient IQ and a virgin heart? 90% Of the Mo family who were killed first were ordinary people. The protagonist thought their relatives killed them and let them go, so they wouldn't retaliate? Even if it doesn't succeed, it will definitely be fine if it causes some losses.

It's well written, don't write it again.

In other words, it is suitable for beginners to watch. Bookworms, don't drink this bowl of chicken soup.

It is recommended that the villain have a higher IQ. Originally, the system's troop explosion flow developed quickly. No matter how mentally retarded the villain is, he will be worthless. The son of a knight is a bit low as the initial villain. You can write a knight to seek a title for his son.

Please let the author stop letting the protagonist pretend. He always says that he has a backer to support him. I just want to ask what the meaning of this kind of thing is. Dignity does not depend on others, but on oneself. He keeps writing a bunch of fake and powerful things. It is really uncomfortable to watch. He also bothers to come out to recruit people every time. If he recruits people earlier, there will be no trouble at all. This is another unnecessary move.

As long as the author makes a boy look like a sweet dog, or writes a girl so that when she sees him, she wants to fall in love with him or become a boy, it will be especially good for all girls! ! ! And the plot of the love story is less. We are looking at the mainstream, so your book is considered a good book. I recently discovered that the mainstream leaders have harems, all kinds of slaps in the face, and there are many poisonous points. They don't have gold coins to change soldiers' jobs, but they have to buy equipment for the heroine! ! ! This is because there are two poisonous points, one is that there are no gold coins, and the other is that the gold coins are very important in the early stage, and they can beat those rich people by a long way

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Knights are too low, and in the eyes of nobles they are no different from commoners.

I haven't read it yet, but now different world, farming, lord, and system texts are no longer popular, mainly because it's too easy to have combat power off the charts, which makes it boring to read. Personally, I still prefer to read the kind of system lord article that only strengthens oneself, and then uses the remaining time to develop the territory or something. Because I haven't read it, I don't know if there is such a situation, that is, many authors like to substitute modern culture into their novels, such as a single female protagonist, or a eunuch directly. There is also the matter of equal development. Modern society is no longer equal and it is enough for other worlds to insist on it. Tsk, boring.

In fact, I like this setting, but the plot is not good and the dialogue is very white.

Finally found a fantasy novel that is not indescribable and understandable 😭

In your novel, the plot, plot, and character dialogue all have the feeling of following the routines of novels written more than ten or twenty years ago. I don't know if I have the motivation to continue chasing after seeing what's behind me.

The writing is a bit poor, but I can understand it since I'm a novice author. Come on!

The Three Golden Chapters is too white, and most old bookworms can't stand it.

Can you post the cover?

😤 How many novels have the protagonist met Lin Chen at this starting point? . . .

I would like to recommend a book called "A Riding and Cutting System with You"