Holy Canglinzun

The author has a good understanding of the routines, and the writing is also of a relatively concise type. From the opening battle scene to the portrayal of male and female characters in the process, as well as the different styles of dialogue between the characters, the author shows his relatively mature writing skills. Highly visible.

Learning swordsmanship, body refining, elixir refining, and formations, the secret books are in front of you. This is an opportunity and a challenge. This process is difficult and unimaginable. It requires a person to allocate his time reasonably and develop his potential infinitely.

The sense of substitution is super strong and the writing is good. Keep up the good work and work hard together.

In the past, there was a crazy visitor, who called me an immortal. The pen falls in the storm, and the poem becomes the weeping ghosts and gods. From then on, his reputation spread rapidly. The literary talent is extremely rich and will be spread unparalleled. (Dream talk)

🤭🤭🤭🤭Great writing! ! !

I am also a high school student I hope we can both read the works and learn some experiences. What you wrote is good.

Fight when you come up 🙂

"The Chosen One" I have heard a long time ago that those who are chosen by God to save the common people are destined to be unfortunate! Because he wants to abandon all comfortable and self-interested ideas to help many people he has never met, and even sacrifice his life for it. Destiny gave me a bitter kiss, but I responded with songs! This sentence is perfect to describe a hero. As a reader, I always like to watch the protagonists constantly transcend their own sufferings and develop a strong state of mind, so that their passion will not be dampened by reality. I always hope that I can be like a knight, possessing unique skills and traveling around the world. If you must say why, it must be because: worshiping heroes is human instinct.

"The Chosen One" I have heard a long time ago that the person who is chosen by God to save the common people is destined to be unfortunate! Because he has to abandon all comfortable and self-interested ideas to help many strangers, and even sacrifice his life for it. Destiny gave me a bitter kiss, but I responded with songs! This sentence is a perfect way to describe a hero. As a reader, I always like to watch the protagonists constantly transcend their own sufferings and develop a strong state of mind, so that their passion will not be dampened by reality. I always hope that I can be like the knight, possessing unique skills and traveling around the world. If you have to say why, it must be because: worshiping heroes is human instinct.

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That's awesome, look up, look up, call me when you get popular

In a few years, Qidian will spread your legend

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It's a fantasy novel about magic, but its connotation is still of the royal kind. The scenes are vividly depicted, and the writing is very good, easy to understand and easy to read, but I wish there could be more description of the heroine, especially the heroine. Try to keep the pace slower, I'm really tired of reading stallion stories. It's best to save the character introduction, it's a bit difficult to just imagine it out of thin air. And what kind of ability is that sword technique? After watching it for a long time, I don't know where it is so awesome.

Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The heaven and the earth are so vast that all things are like dumb dogs. Long Lin was still young, his clan was destroyed, and he fell into the human world. The hope of the Shura clan has dimmed its light, and with the help of everyone in the Xuanjian Sect, it has grown into its prototype. We can't be sure when hardship will come, but what we can do is face it positively and not give up.