Naruto: The Strongest Lightning Release

This world owes nothing to anyone, but don't resent someone just because they don't teach you what to do. It would be boring to write like that.

Return to Lightning Escape, didn't you know that the original work had thunder properties?

Chapter 4: The two had a duel. After the failure, they couldn't eat for 3 days. The protagonist was held down and beaten by Haruko, until he was beaten to death. At this time, the cheat was turned on. The protagonist said, "Enough fighting, it's over." The protagonist begins to doubt himself again: "Why do I want to kill a girl who wants to kill me"... Was this written by a human?

Bad enough. . That kind of environment and compassion

It's unreasonable that the protagonist is immortal and Konoha The protagonist was originally an orphan from the Land of Rain He was captured by Konoha and put into a cannon fodder ninja school (the author made a second set here. The second generation Hokage made two ninja schools, one is from the anime, and the other is One is dedicated to catching war orphans as cannon fodder) In the beginning, I set up a Madonna character (Mother is not a derogatory term) Then I rescued a little girl who went to the cannon fodder school together. The little girl was killed by the Konoha instructor, and the protagonist killed the Konoha instructor. The protagonist showed his blood inheritance limit and was sent to Konoha Hospital. The third generation appointed Tsunade to treat the protagonist. The protagonist asked Tsunade if she could be his teacher, but Tsunade refused. What happened next? Then the protagonist turned dark inexplicably. I'm not flattering on both sides, it's not very good at writing. The protagonist, Our Lady, turns dark, which offends people who like to see positive characters. The protagonist turns black inexplicably, and people who like to watch darkening also find your writing inexplicable. Because Tsunade refused to accept the protagonist as her apprentice, she turned black and was a genius.

A few things about the eunuch who became a daily drug addict after two months 😏

Stop writing about sympathy. If you write about Dark Wood Industry, don't write about sympathy.

I was still optimistic about your subscription, but as a result, you went to the palace directly. Are you writing books to make money or to dream? If you want to support your family, find a job and use the money you earn from writing books as pocket money, rather than being a pure writer. Being a eunuch is the most annoying thing

I feel that the results of Konoha's Strongest Lightning Release will be better than now. I don't want to click on this Lightning Release when I look at it🥱

There is a reason why no one reads it. You bring yourself into the plot of some Chinese novels. That's okay. The key is to write a Japanese fan novel and bring other people into the plot of a Chinese novel. This is too much. You have to write about being bullied for no reason, then defeated, and the other person's family comes to help, and then gets slapped in the face. Did you feel comfortable writing it?