Zhutian: Starting from Maoshan

You can watch Fairy Sword One before. Although Mao Shan was written as a swordsman, the writing is still readable. I don't want the plot to change too much. On the one hand, he was prepared to be single for the rest of his life, so why did he suddenly get married when he arrived in Xianjianyi? It was so contradictory. Also, the plot is too smooth, with no exciting ups and downs at all.

There are too many typos! Outrageous

Did the author have some misunderstanding about God? He was still weak for half a month and consumed a year of his life. In the movie, the four-eyed Taoist priest continues to kill zombies after asking for help from the gods. It's nonsense at first glance to spend one year of his life.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. When the protagonist is not planning to get involved with women, don't describe the names of the women around the protagonist, and don't write about what the protagonist thinks. I just want to see how the protagonist behaves. When writing about a supporting actress, you have to talk a lot, for fear of being misunderstood. The reader is not your wife, so you don't need to explain to the reader that your interaction with the supporting actress will not cause misunderstandings. It is just disgusting!

Maoshan, who is the real Eight Classics, calls himself the Shangqing sect, which includes pondering, persuading, swallowing fluids, chanting incantations, wearing talismans, fasting, rituals, external elixirs, precepts, receiving urn... Fake Maoshan, calling himself the Maoshan sect, invites gods to possess people, exorcise corpses and refine them, summon spirits and control ghosts, witchcraft and curses, hate victory, distinguish yin and yang according to feng shui, poison techniques, etc.

The setting is not pleasing! The journey through the heavens is a process, a way to achieve an end, not the end itself! If the world has no effect on the improvement of the protagonist, no matter how well written the plot of your time travel is, and no matter how awesome the writing style is, it will still be wrong! Furthermore, the author likes to set prices! Pay the price of all kinds! Little did he know that cultivation and transcendence were such inconvenient things! Including the conservation of energy in reality. If the extraordinary cannot break the conservation of energy, is this extraordinary still extraordinary? Conservation of energy is just an "ordinary" theory!

Stay your claws and recommend a world gift package [Note: Many authors now write about Zhutian film and television, but the actual number of viewings is really unflattering and seriously lacking] ←TV series list:→ ←A:→"Crime Scene" ←B:→"Eight Formations", "Immortal Forensic Medicine", "Lotus Lantern", "The Book of Boba Fett" ←C:→"The Legend of Chu Liuxiang" "First Marriage", "Wreckage", "The Twelve Hours of Chang'an" ←D:→"The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty", "Strong Woman Du Fengshun", "Everything Is Very Good" ←E:→ ←F:→"Win the World", "Fengshen Bang", "Copy" and "The Wind Rises in Luoyang" ←G:→"Middle Game of the Antique Game", "The Wonderful Ancient City of Ghost Blowing Lamp", "Ghost Blowing Lamp of Longling Cave", "The Man in the High Castle Series" ←H:→" The Blacklist Series" "Hannah" "Golden Eyes" "Ode to Joy" "Black Robe" "Black Sails Series" "Monkey Ticket" "Peacemaker" ←I :→ ←J:→"The Two Prides", "Memory Detective", "Jack Ryan" ←●Supplement●→ "Zombie", "Elite Lawyer", "The Man in the Game", "What If...?" "Cross World Series" "Zombie Campus" ←K:→"Kangxi Private Interview Series" "The Beginning" ←L:→"The Deer and the Cauldron", "Green Arrow", "Bright Sword", "Soul Ferry Series", "Mr. Love", "The Deer and the Cauldron 2020", "The Neighbors Are Crazy" and "Husbands' Private Money" "The Falcon and the Winter Soldier", "Loki", "La Brea" ←M:→"The Magic Phone Series", "Doom Patrol" ←●Supplement●→"Magu's Birthday", "The Mandalorian Series", "Aim", "Grave Passage" ←N:→"Supergirl", "Angry Xiangxi" ←O:→ ←P:→"Across the Ocean to See You" ←Q:→"Celebrating More Than Years", "The Master", "Under the Dome Series", "Gun God", "Brothers" and "Love in the Courtyard" ←R:→"In the Name of the People" ←S:→"Heroes of the Sui and Tang Dynasties", "Water Moon Cave", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "Young Bao Qingtian", "Water Margin", "Agents of S. H. I. E. L. D.", "The Flash", "Life and Death", "Myth", "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", "The Sword of the Three Young Masters", "Warehouse No. 13 Series", "Mountains and Seas", "Upload New Life", "Storm of Crime" and "Who is the Murderer" ←T:→"Dragon", "Number One in the World", "Genius", "Iron Teeth Ji Xiaolan", "Librarian Series", "Sweet Home", "Peach Blossom Luck", "Gold Rush" ←U:→ ←V:→ ← W:→"Oolong in Love", "I am a special soldier series", "I am a zombie", "I have a date with a zombie series", "Wulin Gaiden", "Agent/Whiskey Cavalier", "The Pretender", "Resident Alien", "Wanda and Vision" ←X:→"Little Fish and Flowers", "Swordsman", "The Legend of Xue Rengui", "The Walking Dead" "Iron Evidence", "Legend of Sword and Fairy", "Journey to the West", "Xiao Shiyilang" ←●Supplement●→ "Psychic Forensic", "Westworld Series", "Little Husband", "Sisyphus", "Happiness 2021" "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" ←Y:→"The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying", "Yang Family General", "Moon Hotel", "The Imperial Gift of Xiaowu", "Eden", "Yunnan Worm Valley" "Also Ordinary" "Eagle Eye" ←Z:→"Six Groups of Serious Cases Series", "Warrior Series", "The Little Monk of True Destiny" supplemented by "Ultimate Notes", "Sister-in-law", "Legend of Jupiter" Novel: "Starting from Scratch" Game: "Detroit: Become Human"

When I saw the chapter name "Mid Stage of Foundation Establishment" and then when I saw the chapter name "Battle against Li Mochou"... I immediately lost interest.

He is from a Taoist sect and he has a Taoist nickname. Why not just use the Taoist nickname? Ye Jian feels that it is not clear and sounds good

This writing style is a bit flattering to even a novice. When I looked at it, I was transported back to the 2000s. I couldn't figure out how to enter the homepage. I haven't seen such bad writing on the homepage in many years. It's hard to swallow.

The tomb robbing chapter is simply a dissuasion, and it doesn't help the protagonist's strength at all. The most disgusting thing is to give the treasures in the tomb to Tianzhen and donate them to the museum. Is this a special time travel to work as a nanny for Wu Tianzhen? Those who are not sure think there is something wrong with the protagonist's sexual orientation 😅

A supreme elder was bullied like this

If you have to pay such a price to please God, it will not be spread at all, and it will be worse than the lowest level.

Produced by the studio, garbage among garbage

Let's put it this way, Maoshan Shen Dao is an authentic Taoist sect. It is the ability left by the ancestor to eliminate demons and defend the Tao. Specifically, it is "power training". When you encounter a demon that you can't defeat, you call the ancestor to fight on your behalf. You still use your own strength. But can the king operation of the ancestor be the same as your bronze operation? As for being weak after using the magic blow, that's normal. You have 100 strength, but you can only use 30. The ancestor has experience and can give you 120 at once. Bang bang, beat the monster to death with two punches. Can you not lose your strength? As for the cost of harming one's body and shortening one's lifespan, that's nonsense! The Patriarch came down to cover you and still want your three melons and two dates? Do you understand what the value of Taoist righteousness is? As for those who say they harm the body and shorten their lifespan, they must be heresy! Either you are attracting wandering evil spirits, or you are worshiping evil gods in obscene ways! To put it bluntly, it's just like Brother Jiaqian. You have to pay whether you do something or not. If you don't pay, you will be killed! It's not even as good as adding money, just eat both ends together! Otherwise, even if you can invite the Immortals to come out to worship the five great immortals, it is a dignified and authentic Taoism, but it can't compare to the Demon Immortal Contract? How about practicing the Hammer Way? One more thing, God's Fighter is not just for use! First of all, you must be a disciple of Maoshan who has entered the roster. Being on the roster does not mean that I just write my own name and arrange it. It must be written by the teacher, enter the Maoshan ancestral court, and then report it to the ancestor! (That is, burned to the ancestor) For example, Uncle Jiu in the movie belongs to the orthodox Maoshan disciples. Those who are on the roster are not counted as Qiu Sheng's literary talents. If they are not on the roster, they can only be said to be lay disciples and first-class outer disciples. Then you have to make offerings and praise the Patriarch every day. To put it bluntly, you are on good terms with the Patriarch. If anything happens, you have to protect me! For example, if Taoist Master Four Eyes has cultivated the Divine Strike, he can call the Patriarch. If Uncle Ninth Master has not cultivated it, then even if you are on the roster! Furthermore, the magic attack is a unique skill that is the best in the game. It is left to you by the ancestor to save your life. If you can't beat a little zombie, the ancestor is too lazy to pay attention to you!

If you are sick, build your foundation and cultivate immortality, and then travel to martial arts, is this going backwards? There is a lump on the skull

Tell the truth about this book. . . The protagonist, a time traveler, is simply speechless. This may be related to the author's basic understanding. The protagonist is simply a fool.

Hey, when Hong Qigong mentioned the golden elixir of martial arts, I laughed to death. Well, when he, a guy with no innate talent, said the golden elixir of martial arts, I laughed to death.

Why are many Zhutian novels like this? At first, the protagonist seemed to be polite to women, thinking that he was a dedicated seeker. After traveling through several worlds, he began to accept women. Once you start taking in girls, keep taking in girls. Because now that we have started to accept girls, there are so many beauties in each world, and if you don't accept them, readers will force you to accept them. Then there is the Crystal Palace. The difference is that some male protagonists of Zhutianliu are just old perverts from the beginning, while some male protagonists have to pretend to be serious at the beginning.

It would be great if Qidian could provide a rating system and a small function for blacklisting

It is normal that this book is not popular. The first copy was directly dismissed.

The biggest poisonous point of Zhutianliu is to set a time limit for the protagonist. The purpose of issuing tasks is to obtain rewards. Whether and when to return should be decided by the protagonist himself.

，，， . . But it's too novice. . .        ，，，，，，，，，，，， . . Don't talk about harmony or anything like that. . . As long as you write a little bit, the theme of the novel will improve a lot. . . Secondly, can the protagonist not be too close to the protagonists in other worlds? They have only known each other for a few days. . . The world of the divine eagle is the most speechless. There is no mention of the Song-Yuan war. If you have the strength, you will not help Guo Jing. You will travel all day long and don't want to know how many of your friends will escape alone when Xiangyang is destroyed. . . Alas, heartless. . . Fortunately, you helped Hong Qigong break through. . . In fact, it is better not to help, the ceiling is covered with golden elixirs, the martial arts world, and the court are still the settings in the Divine Condor, which is quite awkward to read. . .

Cao, can't look straight. Yoyo🪀

The writing is awkward, and the protagonist's personality is a bit baffling

It's so talkative The idea is okay but the writing style is not.

There are some contradictions in the writing, such as: I know, Ye Jian said. Why do I need to add the word "said" to what I have already said? I feel so conflicted when I listen to the book. Too watery

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The author doesn't have a long memory. We are not interested in time travel into modern society. To be precise, we are not interested in modern society where the protagonist improves his strength. Didn't he write about the world of spiritual cages earlier, which made people feel ordinary? He also wrote

Hey, is it over like this? Keep writing. . . If you are invincible in the real world, you can consider taking Uncle Jiu and Master to ascend to the fairy world together! Invincible in the fairy world ascends to the divine world! Traveling through other worlds can cover the sky, change the stars, and devour the starry sky. These worlds with high combat power can definitely continue to be written! It's so rare to come across a good book that I can't bear to part with it. . . It feels like an old friend has parted ways.