Movies and TV Across the Heavens: Starting in Sicily

Author, this comment is really not to criticize your poor writing. I just want to advise you that you should write what you are best at. If you can't write plots with high IQ layouts, don't force yourself to embarrass you. It's been more than 60 chapters and I've seen the protagonist arrange the great powers of various countries obediently. , And also shaped Marlena to become a female godfather and fight against the mafia. Maybe you, the author, wrote it so well that you almost climaxed, but as a reader, it is really embarrassing. Author, I would like to advise you to write what you know how to write, so as not to embarrass everyone and affect your grades.

Stop writing, you are not this material.

Sensible, only the author who understands what readers want to see and writes about it can have a future😏😏😏

You can't even follow it as written! Take a closer look at the film and television world traveler, the same golden finger, the same task, the writing is fascinating, you...

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 17. Not to mention things that are obviously against the Western Chinese family, the biggest pain point is the penicillin process. To put it bluntly, a master can flatten you and make you round. The protagonist who has no strength can honestly fall in love and don't pretend to be sophisticated. Moreover, in the ten chapters or so, either the protagonist said that my layout was too slow or that my preparations were almost ready. If you want to write a witty novel, if you don't write down the details clearly, it would be embarrassing and pretentious, which would be more discouraging than a novice novel. The writing style is not a big problem, but the logic is really flawed.

Is there Si Teng? . . .

Bosses, if you have any copy you want to see, please leave a message, and the bandits will consider it as appropriate. Ahem... Note, just thinking~

World War II, in Italy, Chinese family. Funny

I have read more than 30 pictures, and the author is a bit perfectionist. In fact, the writing of Zhutianwen does not need to be perfect, as long as it does not abuse the master, it can be read. Zhutianwen can be written well as long as it understands a principle. What is the purpose of traveling through the heavens? Isn't it just to change the life you want? Just be happy, don't worry about evil and justice, and be an egoist

Monica Bellucci