Players Trapped in the World of Jianghu

The author wanted to write the protagonist as Chu Liuxiang and Lu Xiaofeng, a sentimental and intelligent romantic young man, but when he saw that Ye Liangchen didn't feel romantic or intelligent, he was always being led around, and he could only take advantage of the protagonist, often making mistakes after the fact. Moreover, the Beiming Divine Art practiced by the protagonist is too weak compared to the original work. Hitting the Central Plains with even a little red will hurt you.

After reading Chapter 14, to be honest, I gave up on the story of the fat man in the future. Is this fat man the father or mother of the protagonist? He deceives and molests the woman of the protagonist. The protagonist still has to worry about going back. This is not how intelligence is reduced, and it is easy to disgust people.

Well, this protagonist has no heart. He abandoned his wife and abandoned his family for 20 years, but he came back for another woman. He left his hand as a shopkeeper and returned to being chic. Romance is a diversion. Where is the responsibility? The protagonist goes to play, and the heroine memorizes everything, including central air conditioning. She seems to be affectionate, but she seems to be ruthless.

What the hell? Earlier, I said that the protagonist is unparalleled and has achieved such a great reputation, but then I turn around and say that the protagonist's martial arts are all initiated by the system. The martial arts he uses cannot be used without the system. If he cannot upgrade, he will not practice martial arts by himself. Then he and Ouyang Feng almost died together How did you manage to do this before?

What is the level of a max-level player? Are you considered a top expert? According to Jin Guli's level, a thousand top masters can build G, right?

After reading a few chapters, I feel like I am deliberately trying to suppress the protagonist. The protagonist has been in the game for 20 years and has risen from level 90 to at least level 92 or 93. But in the end, he needs to be injured to defeat him. I don't know what to say.

When you see Chapter 19 of Volume 2, please comment. First of all, this is an original martial arts novel with a skin. Time starts directly from twenty years later. Twenty years can completely allow the time traveler to integrate into this world. Things have changed and people have changed. The development of the past twenty years is not to be described in detail but to be skipped directly. It is a very correct choice. There are still many keyboard pointing masters. The writing style of the novel is smooth and flowing, which is very comfortable to read. It should be a little bit thin and should be a little thin. The foreshadowing also makes people feel comfortable to read. The connection between lines is well established. The emotional scenes are not described in depth, which makes people feel comfortable to watch, because there are many novels that make people question how well the emotions are described.

I really like this book, and I hope more people will like it. The author writes it very well. No matter what aspect, the design is very smooth and natural. The author must have put a lot of effort into it, and he has written it very carefully in many places.

This style is neither fish nor fowl, and painting a tiger is not the opposite of a dog.

To be honest, the more I read it, the less it felt like it was good. The beginning was really good and it got better and better later on. . . . . Alas

I don't know why, but I always feel a little frustrated and frustrated watching it.

This is the first time I have seen a novel with such an annoying male protagonist. Everything else is good, but the male protagonist is too...

The more I look at it, the angrier I get. It's easy to call it carefree, but it's almost as good as troublesome.

When I was reading the book, I felt a sense of disobedience and suffocation. I forced myself to read it, but as a result, I was injured when I hit the Central Plains. It took another 20 years to reach the full level. I was really useless and slipped away.

How should I put it? The protagonist written by the author is very aggrieved. This book will screen readers. Those who like it will feel that it is a good book. Those who don't like it will greet the author. This book will not be very popular.

The writing is OK, I recommend strengthening it

If you want to be a player, you can sign up on this floor and leave your name, gender, identity and martial arts practice. I will make certain modifications according to the development of the plot and try to write it in at the right time! Of course, the main thing is to see whether the character fits the plot of the book. If it is too unrestrained, forget it!

It's been several chapters, and we haven't said that the main character is the one who wants to save the girl?

This novel gives me the feeling that there are too many details

I originally thought that martial arts people were dead. I didn't expect that I could still breathe. Much better than most martial arts movies I have watched in the past two years. Come on, author

It's very well written. I haven't found any bad points yet. Why are there so few comments?

Indeed, this book is serious and pretty good. Why are there so few comments and messages...

Now the book has been updated with dozens of chapters, quite a lot, and it's ready to be slaughtered. Friends who keep books, don't let them go anymore, it's easy to keep the books to death! I hope you all can come out and have fun, read books, and leave comments when you are free. Of course, I am also grateful to the brothers who have been with me. I will try my best to write it well, thank you all!

It's a bit like the one I've read before, where the players and the natives are fighting. The protagonist also has this kind of personality, and the boss is among the players.

How many heroines does the author have? Are there Zhou Zhiruo and Zhao Min? Thank you for informing

Please, write faster, it's better to make a big splash. Not enough

Come on, author, I've been praising it for several days, but it's not enough, so hurry up and update it! !

There is still Long Aotian in 2022

The name is useless, the word "Xiaoyao" has been thrown into disrepute and I suggest it be changed.

From my personal experience, the content of this book is very good. Come on.