Swordsman in the Worlds Beyond

This is blatant poisoning! To be honest, this book is an improvement over your previous ones, but in "Twin Dragons," you first sided with Yang Guang, and then when Li Xiuning arrived, you switched allegiance like a stupid dog. Even a traitor who served three masters showed some restraint, but you shamelessly offered yourself up.

The protagonist, having practiced martial arts for less than a month, can already rival others who have spent twenty years, and dares to challenge others everywhere. This either indicates that the martial arts level in this world is too low, or that the protagonist's talent is exceptionally extraordinary. So, in this world, does the protagonist reach their limit after only one year of cultivation?

The protagonist's familiar tone, familiar movements, and familiar expression reminded me of the book two years ago.

Your biggest mistake was defecting to Li Xiuning. You initially allied yourself with Yang Guang, but Li Xiuning deliberately made things difficult for you, exposing your identity and putting you in danger. You could say Li Xiuning was your enemy. And then you defected to Li Xiuning. Even a traitor who served three masters wouldn't do this. You're even worse than Lü Bu.

I simply couldn't continue reading this book. Why insist on finding a master? What good does that do for your cultivation? A swordsman—what is a swordsman? Does the author even know?

I have no idea what this is about. The world changes so quickly and hastily. The protagonist has no emotional journey. He sleeps with Yue Lingshan, has a son, and then leaves. How can someone like that cultivate righteousness? It's ridiculous. I strongly suggest the author write short stories; you're writing a novel, not an episodic drama.

Your injury wasn't inflicted by the Sand River Gang, it was by Sha Wujing, right? A bone fracture that couldn't be healed even after three worlds, the Sand River Gang is truly formidable!

Huang Feihong's practice of swordsmanship in the world was somewhat unethical.

Is this what they call: You have the superior and medium sword skills, but you insist on learning the inferior ones. You have the bronze and iron swords, but you choose to use the silver one. After years of dedicated practice, he finally achieved the state of oneness with the sword and became a legendary swordsman.

The protagonist is a modern person and yet so awesome, instantly understanding classical Chinese after transmigrating? Fine, then translate the Nine Yin Manual into classical Chinese! I'll believe you then! The Way of Heaven diminishes the excess and supplements the deficiency; therefore, emptiness overcomes fullness, and deficiency overcomes excess.