
Evolving from a Saltwater Crocodile
从湾鳄开始进化
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 472k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- High-Martial World
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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225Chapters
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If you can't stop being ruthless, don't write about alien beasts. I can't tell my position clearly, and neither side is pleased with it.
Alien beasts, do the justice that belongs to the alien beasts, and stand on the right side. Cancel the description of human beings, or describe dead people euphemistically. Those who report killings when they see them have nothing to do, and the novel about exotic beasts is not suitable for you.
I saw the latest chapter, and I feel that the author's previous writing was pretty good, and he also handled many aspects quite well. Then someone in the comment area said that taking care of three little crocodiles and helping people is very toxic. I don't think there is any problem. The protagonist takes care of the little crocodiles in front of him to help him. The three little crocodiles in the front play their role in digging holes or protecting the protagonist's evolution. Regardless of whether they are animals or humans, after being together for several months, they will definitely have feelings. It can also alleviate the loneliness of the protagonist who has transformed from a human to a beast. Then there are those who say that helping people is poisonous. In fact, I think it's not bad. The several times the protagonist helps people and catches bandits are all done safely without exposing himself to any risk. As a normal person, if there are no big problems with the three views, and it does not harm one's own interests, he will definitely help if he can. Alien beast writing is not dark writing. It is difficult to become popular in the Alien Beast genre because there are many pitfalls in it. First of all, there should be no flaws in basic beast knowledge, otherwise you might not notice it at first, but there are a lot of popular science in the comments, and it will be very hard to find mistakes. Then there is the issue of getting along with humans, especially after the increase in strength is exposed. The official attitude of humans towards the protagonist must be reasonable, and it is impossible to be highly trusting and dependent or very alienated and hostile. The protagonist's attitude should not be too licking or intimate, but it is also best not to be too brutal and murderous. The balance in between is very important. After that, there is the issue of combat power. After the world mutates or the spiritual energy is revived, the changes in the strength of the protagonist and others are very important. They cannot rise too fast, otherwise they will easily become invincible. Compared with other alien beasts and humans, it would be easy to get boring if the protagonist kept crushing them. But the protagonist has a golden finger. The reason why other things are equal to or even slightly stronger than the protagonist is very important, and it cannot make readers feel that the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's strength... That's about it. I feel that the author has written quite well at the beginning, without any flaws or poison. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's really poisonous. After taking the pig's feet, there is only one nanny, who will take care of those crocodiles.
Humans need to torture and kill animals to prove that they are human beings, and alien beasts need to torture and kill humans to prove that they are alien beasts. Excuse me, is that correct? What is right and what is wrong. What do I need to add?
As long as the protagonist is not a human, then the villain must not be a human. I want to ask why, you are a crocodile, your enemy can be a bird, a tiger, or a dragon, but why can't it be a human? Are these animals any different from people? If you think about it from your standpoint, isn't that a group? Outsiders, go ahead and attack outsiders. Do you still need a reason? My brother is still settling accounts. If you help him, you are not afraid of farmers and snakes.
If I were an alien beast, I would not be seen by others when I was weak. When I was strong, humans would have become extinct. For alien beasts, they do not need humans.
Ahem, brothers of the Alien Beast Style, the atmosphere at the starting point is like this. Shark Man may be banned, but the author may really be a novice. The protagonist is indeed a bit licky, and his behavior is relatively normal, but this mentality. . . . . . . The author may still not understand that the Alien Beasts stream in Qidian is supported by a few enthusiasts. I hope the author can figure it out.
By the way, I'm thinking about how the author should write about the later period. In your modern society, the front is fine and you can write about natural combat, but the level in the back is high. How to solve it? Should you follow the old routine of spiritual energy recovery, or use infinite map transfer, or mutation, right? The first one attracts the most people when it comes to firearms and cannons that stand up to human beings. The second one is that you didn't do any foreshadowing. It's too abrupt to insert it suddenly. The third one is even worse. The protagonists have been portrayed as law-abiding citizens before. You are in conflict with human beings. Shield, how to solve it, is An Xin being dissected and studied, it would be okay if the protagonist is an ordinary crocodile, write about the life flow, and bring some plots about living in harmony with humans, which is pretty good, but you are a crocodile with force, and also add some, ordinary people have to be controlled by the state if they have force value. When an animal that is not a human has mastered the force that can threaten human beings, just thinking about it, you know what humans will do. I really think that the current position of human beings as the hegemon of the earth is peaceful competition???
If you lick humans like this, why don't you turn yourself into a crocodile bag?