The Cycle of Occult Arts

It's a mess, and it's the extraordinary literature of the East being colonized by the West. Technology used to be too powerful to defeat humans, but now even from the starting point there are Eastern extraordinary beings that cannot defeat the West. There was a corpse stitcher in the beginning, and even with this background, he jumped into the street.

I hate this kind of beginning the most. I've written half the book. Don't tell me there's stuff in the back. I can't even read the first three pictures, and I'm still reading the back.

I just read the first half of the chapter, but not the rest. The writing is quite solid. However, the main character's name is not distinctive, and the age setting is only 14 years old. These two points put me off. I couldn't imagine the image of a 14-year-old kid using ghost magic with a calm face. The age is set at around 20. He is a thin and bespectacled man with an ordinary appearance, which makes people feel much more comfortable.

To be honest, your entire fantasy Taoist background, get the power level of Western fantasy magic, and then add bronze and silver. This is really awesome.

It feels weird. I started with an Eastern background and Eastern abilities, and a mercenary came back. The levels were divided into silver, gold, crystal, etc., Which gave me no sense of immersion at all. It was so weird.

After reading a few chapters, let me share my thoughts. I feel that what you wrote is not a new book, but like a book with the first section removed.

How should I put it, the pace is too fast, as if a big part is missing. Then the purpose is a bit unclear, as if something is chasing the pig's feet, but the author did not explain it. So when I was watching, why were the pig's feet so anxious? Completely confused.

I don't like to watch a clone series. The protagonist has no strength but insists on participating in the brawl between powerful people, so I create a few clones, and then I am wretched behind, and then I write about the clones throughout the article. This book is downgraded at first glance!

The protagonist talks about creating his own power, has he created it? The beginning was so boring and not exciting at all.

No wonder it's so frustrating, the world setting is too big and I can't grasp it. The protagonist doesn't feel immersed either