I, the Agent of the Evil God

The writing is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡The ideas and settings are very attractive. Of course, it would be better if the author's writing style was more sophisticated 😁🌹

Take a look

This is tj, if you go out to buy groceries, the prices will go up!

I really took it, and the beautiful seedlings suddenly became tj. I took it, and it was really uncomfortable and annoying. I didn't dare to read this kind of thing in the future, so I started writing this.

Writing a book teaches you to only look at immediate benefits (laughs), but professional writers don't tell you that. Want to eat. I have raised several good guys, but they are not pure breeders. They all failed.

Bubble

Come on, author! Grammar itself is a niche subject, and running groups are even more niche within niches. It's rare to come across a novel with running group elements. I beg the author, please don't give in ()

I saw that the author was going to cut it off. As a reader who has been following along, I would like to say: The book is actually well written and very tense. The gradual invisibility of the titular protagonist is indeed a bit uncomfortable for readers. Will the author consider overhauling it and replacing the protagonist with Xu Lin?

It doesn't have that feeling. It would have been better if it was more gloomy and dark, or more restrained. The heroine's performance was too bright, which brought down the feeling of the book. If a perfect girl said something to save the world among a pile of rotten flesh and deformed filth, I would give you a monthly vote for this tone.

I was able to go to Daily Detox, and it turned out to be pretty good reading... It was so twisted.

The main reason is that the protagonist and the world are too cleanly separated and there is too little interaction. The book is still good, but sometimes you lose more if you withdraw it too quickly. He who goes up the mountain in one step pays the price at the foot of the mountain.

It's a pity, this book is quite to my liking, and as long as the protagonist wanders around a little more, spreading some pollution, or like the indescribable diary, monsters will come out, wouldn't it make sense? It's a pity

For Cthulhu texts that are above the qualified level, it is recommended that the author not read the comment area and update it carefully. If you read the comment area and write it, it is not Cthulhu text. After all, most people have only heard of this name and have not even read the original work. This is the case with all kinds of weird texts in the starting point. It doesn't make any difference to replace the weird with ghosts. I only know what it is, but I don't know why it is.

Let me tell you, I only speak for myself. It's not more uncomfortable for the person watching, so in order to make me feel less uncomfortable, I decided to block you from now on. I'm sorry.

Bubbles

After reading so far (Chapter 41), there is nothing outrageous about the plot, so it's worth reading. The angle is novel, at least it is rare to see books with this angle. But there are some worries: dealing with the protagonist's family problems. As of now, the adoptive father of the protagonist will probably not be able to escape in the subsequent plots, so here comes the question. Although the protagonist is not an ordinary person, but a certain god, he has not yet awakened at this time, and he still values ​​​​family affection. When a family member is in danger during an incident, they should take action. At this time, you need to consider how to write to avoid the situation where the protagonist's family will not get into trouble or die. Some people will not like either situation. A little worry, in short, the author writes very well, come on 😚

Every book club should have this picture

It's a bit outrageous for Yogurt to claim that he can destroy Naiya. According to the genealogy, Naiya is a direct descendant of Azathoth and Yogurt is born from the nameless mist. Doesn't it generally recognize their power? And except for Azathoth, who thinks that the Ke family is the strongest, it is not necessarily Yogurt. Original work Azathoth has his contemporaries And to refute the rumors, Azathoth did not create the universe, nor did he create the world in a dream. It was the demon-slaying universe, and it was not his body. He just said that the musicians surrounding him brought eternal melody to the universe

I have a suggestion How about we lock the author in a small dark room, give him a piece of bread (toast) after reading each chapter, and deprive him of sleep until he writes 20 chapters a day. Wouldn't this happiness just come?