Everyone Plays: in My Second Life, I Changed My Destiny Against the Will of Heaven

The first story is well written. But the author didn't grasp the second story well, it was too floating. Not to mention that the protagonist is worth tens of billions, but the father actually went to the river to commit suicide for 80,000 yuan and learned that the protagonist had a brain tumor (although it may have been murdered by the Jin family), but it was really frustrating to watch. So why didn't you tell your dad that you were rich earlier? This is a poisonous point! Also, one month we create a food delivery platform, one month we create a short video platform, then one month we create Pinxixi, and then one month after that, and then another. Good guy, author, are you serious? This is the second poisonous point! Finally, I ran to find my mother, and then I met my mother's husband in the mountains. It turned out that he was a descendant of Zhuge. He was also capable of seven stars and so on. He stayed for 49 days and his life was extended for 12 years. Good guy, the nice city has turned into a fantasy. This is the third poisonous point. Actually, the first story is really well written, but the second story seems like a different person. I hope the author's subsequent simulations will be more rigorous and exciting. Finally come on!

Acting is different from simulation! Since it is an acting role, how can it break the original trajectory? Now that it's broken, is it still called acting? It's not the same line as the original! Is that called acting?

When I saw 29, the protagonist was a billionaire who didn't even give 80,000 yuan to his father, and even died for 80,000 yuan. An extremely poisonous and annoying protagonist.

I can't ask for a heroine who plays the role of the main world. Maybe that performance will be a bad one.

I'm giving rewards just for one question. I've read three novels with almost the same plot, and everyone is confused.

I feel that this book is not considered poisonous, but it collapsed very quickly. I felt that it had already begun to collapse in the later stages of the first simulation. When it was not modified, it gave people the impression of an ancient time. Then I wrote ten pictures until my sister went to Haicheng Women's College, which made it feel like modern times. You said this is okay, but suddenly the Japanese were beaten again, and the book changed. It folded very quickly, and there was no foreshadowing at all. It is a very easy mistake for new authors to make. Not to mention the subsequent simulation, I really can't understand it. The previous writing was obviously OK, not to say it was good, but at least it was readable. But somehow the system began to collapse, and the transition was very abrupt. This is really a writing problem.

I am Shennong, non-toxic, just like tea. It can last for several days.

Name: XXX Experienced events: 1 year old... 3 years old... Brothers can follow this format and write down the life you want to see!

What can I say, the writing is pretty good, but why is the protagonist so miserable? If I brought the protagonist's point of view, I'm afraid I'd go crazy.

That part of the fight felt really poisonous

No one is watching today? , I think they are all third now

I just saw that there are relatively few discussion posts here, so I came here to comment on this article or two The progress I have seen so far is Chapter 22 First of all, I want to ask the author a big question, that is, when the simulation obtains a long lifespan or immortality, will the protagonist want to return to the main world? I think it should be that although life in the simulated world is better than the main world, there will always be times when I feel disgusted, but the author is not sure, so I will look forward to it anyway. Next, let's talk about the writing style. The subject matter is relatively mediocre, but the writing style is still very good. I hope the author will not ruin the plot (although from the first simulation, I can vaguely see that the protagonist is a bit lustful, which is unpleasant). All in all, this is a very interesting novel with potential. Good luck, author!