The Cannon Fodder Master Became the True Boss of the Sect

It's too wordy. The author's writing skills are not good.

It's really too long-winded. I was originally very interested in this content, but after reading dozens of chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt it was a bit nonsense. The children of several years old are all mature, steady and thoughtful, while the Jindan Yuanying are childish, stupid, impulsive and talkative. Is the author doing this on purpose or is it just for fun? The dignified Jindan monk knew that a certain child might threaten his life in the future, but he didn't immediately kill him in the hope of changing his fate. The pig's feet might not be the stupidest among stupid pigs.

It's a bit long-winded, and sometimes too detailed a description can make people feel very long-winded! For example, if you meet a female cultivator who is a casual cultivator, you would describe the entire history of the cultivator, which would be very cumbersome! Just like when you eat a bowl of rice, you would describe how many grains of rice were used, how much water was used, how much time it took, how it looked, how it tasted, and you would even describe the entire history of the growth of a grain of rice, from germination to delivery to the table, so you can feel that you have missed the point! Not streamlined enough!

Due to restrictions, I was exempted from reading twenty chapters, and I was convinced. I have read hundreds of novels, and this is the first time I have seen such a long-winded novel. Everything has to be said eight times from various angles, as if everything has been slowed down eighteen times, making people look bald. The monks also have no fairy spirit at all, especially the heroine, a golden elixir monk, who struggles with trivial matters all day long, is afraid of things, and has all kinds of nagging thoughts in his heart. . .

This novel is really too wordy! It will affect people's viewing experience! I have to say one thing over and over again several times, let's accept a second disciple. I said it before setting off, and it was divined to determine the fate of master and apprentice, and then I repeated it twice again, because there is a fate of master and apprentice, and so on. A bunch of psychological activities! He repeatedly emphasized that he came to the rescue because of the fate of master and apprentice! Is it really necessary? It's so tiring to watch!

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I would like to ask again, is the heroine golden elixir several hundred years old? I watched it on men's videos and found that most golden elixirs are several hundred years old, and if a genius is almost a hundred years old. I hope the heroine is calm, steady and wise.

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