Start into the Abyss

The second-generation disciple didn't feel very happy after accepting him as a disciple. The benefits of being accepted as a disciple are not highlighted, and the skills are given but there are no resources. There is no difference between the skills and Fengxian's. Six middle-grade spiritual stones in one year make it look like a low-level sect in Novice Village. The enemies are set to be much stronger than the male protagonist. According to the upgrade progress, they have to be restrained and endured for a long time. The villains and immortals who appear are all like that. They are frustrated and frustrated, and overall it is not as enjoyable as before.

The protagonist is the first to practice fire. Because water overcomes fire, he cannot practice water. But if fire overcomes metal, how can he still practice gold?

Having read it word for word, I feel somewhat qualified to comment on it. Seeing this, the biggest feeling is that the protagonist is changing from a time traveler to a native. Of course, there is nothing wrong with this. After all, a different person has experienced so many things and must have changed. But to a certain extent, the identity of a time traveler is basically useless (although I know the author has foreshadowing in this regard), and can be completely replaced by other identities. Then there is the golden finger. First of all, the protagonist's talent is equivalently exchanged. This thing is his own talent as a magic fetus (it's called this). The golden finger is just a panel. So far, there is no function other than displaying information. This has led to a problem, that is, this gold finger is not pure enough. , Which in turn causes the protagonist to become stuck in levels, making it difficult to defeat enemies that are much stronger than him. Then he needs to rely on some methods that are not provided by Golden Finger to become stronger, such as several exercises set by the author. This will reflect a kind of powerlessness, and it can also be regarded as a good pavement for the protagonist's personality change. After all, this is indeed very frustrating. So, a question arises here: is this book really a good book? Is it really invincible? Is there any point in still hanging this label? I have a very magical feeling when reading this book. Obviously the writing, ideas, and sometimes used jokes are all things that are only available in 2022, but I read a taste of eight years ago. After thinking about it carefully, I found that, for example, the process of this book (I mean the process, not the plot) is very similar to books like "Swallowing the Stars". The protagonist is indeed very strong and invincible at the same level, but it always gives people There is a kind of misconception that "the protagonist can't do anything", "the protagonist can't beat this one, but can't beat that one", "the protagonist is being plotted over and over again", and "the protagonist knows the plot but still can't do anything". The goal of the protagonist of Devouring Starry Sky is [to protect his family and mankind, and stand up for mankind among all races]. This book feels that the goal is [to protect the ones you love, kill the unjust immortals and demons, and find a way out for mortals (this is how I understand it)]. Are they similar? I mean in essence. As a result, your book is actually a high-intensity upgrade flow, which is not comparable to the invincible flow. In other words, it can match it a little bit, but not much, and it does not provide enough exciting points. Even the things written in the introduction are actually somewhat unworthy of the name. Many people Maybe I was attracted by the introduction and the first few chapters. For example, when I visualize the scene, I can visualize some awesome things because of the experiences of past life time travellers. After I got to the later part, this kind of plot basically disappeared. It was just a problem that caused this article to have no big features. A good book must have some characteristics of its own. To give some examples (all of which are books I have read that can be called "good books"), the characteristic of Super Mechanic is that Technician Han can use the game panel to quickly break through the limitless limit, and also create plots; the biggest characteristic of Lord of Mysteries is the truly written counterattack. Yifeng; this game is too real and focuses on players in the wasteland. Although it has stronger power, there is no sense of frustration at all; my senior brother is really too stable, playing in a funny style, and subverting the traditional serious style of painting; as for Thriller Paradise, it has too many features, and Brother Jue himself is the biggest feature. In fact, there are many, many more. The few examples I gave include games, unlimited streams, and prehistoric streams. Their coverage is relatively narrow, but their popularity is relatively high. I did not give examples of other types of books, but I am sure that those other types of books, as long as they have good results, will definitely have their own obvious characteristics. In your case, [obtaining stronger skills by visualizing super scenes] itself can become a main feature, but as far as I can see so far, this feature seems to have been abandoned. The data panel is not unusual, and the ability of equivalent exchange has been written in many similar ways, so it cannot be an obvious feature So the way you write the plot of your book is very similar to the kind of white text (let me say it first, the white text here is not sarcastic), such as Swallowing the Starry Sky, Coiling Dragon, Illustrated Book of Destruction, and even Yuan Zun etc., The technique is similar, the writing is definitely not bad, it can even be said to be very good, but it just doesn't arouse interest. It is nothing more than various complicated settings, hierarchies, confusing relationships, complicated protagonists and the life experiences of the people around the protagonist. The protagonist suffers from great hatred and works hard. The first one I wrote is very exciting to read, but after writing too much, I will get tired of aesthetics. The final problem is that it still lacks its own characteristics. Your other writing skills can actually become your characteristics. However, some people have relatively more of these characteristics, so they write more novels. Some people even continue to rest on their laurels and use these characteristics to make readers' aesthetic fatigue more serious. Under the general environment, today's novels are required to have their most distinctive characteristics. So, author, your writing is first-rate, your worldview is first-rate, your plot structure is first-rate, and your character descriptions are first-rate. However, for the look and feel of the entire book, if it gets a perfect score of ten, I can only give it seven points at most. The early sacred books are probably in the middle stage now. It cannot be said to have collapsed, but the quality has declined significantly. In other words, the appeal to readers has begun to decline significantly (in my personal opinion). So I guess the performance of this book must be good, but it cannot be said to be very good. You can tell from the number of monthly votes. It can be ranked 230th on the starting list. To be honest, this is the cream of the crop. So far, I have not lost my enthusiasm for reading this book. After all, the author's way of shaping the characters is really wonderful. Oh, by the way, there is one more thing I forgot to mention. The author is very decisive in recruiting girls. This is different from most novels nowadays. The same, but as I said before, it is very similar to those online articles eight years ago. It has a different reading feel from the current harem flow (for example: 🐔 Da's article) and stallion flow (for example: Li Eunuch's article). It is very retro, but the writing method is very new, which makes me quite entangled. All the above are just personal opinions. If the author is angry after reading it, then I would like to apologize. I cannot represent all readers. Maybe it is just that I have different ideas. Ps: Damn, this thing took me 30 minutes to write, and I cracked, and it was still at three o'clock in the morning Ps2: I have finished reading all the updated ones. The fire makes the protagonist feel a little like a time traveler, but the overall situation is still the same as what I said in this article Ps3: As of Chapter 303, the quality seems to be on the rise, but the problem still exists

I even threw in two coins to complain about this name. Am I the only one who sees this as a starting point for getting into the abyss of getting married?

Damn it, I said a lot of sensational things and deleted them all. Forget it 🙂. To sum up, I have forgiven you many times. I have said good things to you and told you that I will never read your books again (but you changed your account and tricked me again). Ahem, you ended up messing up again 🙂, that's all. I will forgive you one last time. If something goes wrong again, I will never see you again! !

I finished it in one go, and it was pretty good~ Compared with the previous weird style and depressing plot, which was further reduced, Shuangwen's design is more convenient. The Golden Finger, which has no threshold for practicing skills and increases in power, looks a bit rough in the early stage, but the stronger the strength, the greater the effect, and the more enjoyable it looks. Just pin it to the top and add it automatically, wait for the update~

How could such a good novel not contain idioms Let me start with one The Resurrection of All Things

At the moment, I am very satisfied with it. The protagonist is flesh and blood, not a saint, and will have lustful thoughts. I hope it can continue to be relaxed and relaxed, not too tight, and occasionally relax the plot. In addition, there must be female protagonists, not necessarily female protagonists, but there must be women, which is good now. Nowadays, novels, especially time-travel ones, how should I say, are particularly fake, such as the kind of books that keep killing and killing, the kind of bitter hatred, or daily love dramas or brainless stallion novels, etc., Which are too extreme. Now I think this book is very good. I won't go into details. People who understand it will naturally understand it. Try not to let book reviews affect the main plot. You can improve it but don't affect your outline. Come on.

Good looking

Compared to Sister Bai, I like Ning Ning better, maybe because in Sister Bai I see that most people in reality have never had the truth, kindness and beauty, while Ning Ning is more like a corner among most people. She has the wrongdoing and stupidity that we should spurn, rather than saying that she is not familiar with the world. Rather, it would be better to say that she is like most people in reality, she has some standards, some contempt and indignation. She is different from Sister Bai. One is like a deity in the sky, while the other cares too much, appreciates too much, and becomes obsessed with it, trying to get what she wants. My opinion is biased. After all, there are not many female characters who are really outstanding these days.

I thought I was entering the abyss of marriage at the beginning. . . . . . , I didn't expect to plunge into the abyss at the beginning,,,,,,.

The front is good, but the back is simply retarded. Enter the sect, you are an awesome genius, there are only 5 top sects in the world, and you have the same backup as the immortals. The annual payment is 10 middle-grade spiritual stones = buy a level 1 magic weapon. Yes, it is a magic weapon, not an immortal weapon. I was shocked! If you sell a talisman, you can catch up with the annual tribute of the entire Immortal Sect! Awesome! Inner disciples fight with first- and second-level talismans. How about a few immortals paying annual tribute? ? ? So scary

After looking at the introduction, I feel more and more that I won't be able to handle it later.

Sister Miaomiao has too few scenes. I'm very confused. The protagonist said that he originally wanted to live with Sister Miaomiao. From the current point of view, Sister Miaomiao is undoubtedly the main palace, so why should he portray other people in such detail? The protagonist has waited so long to find his beloved. If it were me, I would definitely get involved with Miaomiao, but for now, Sister Miaomiao does not have much of a role Personally, I feel that if I were the protagonist, I could abandon anyone else for Sister Miaomiao if I had no choice I really like Sister Miaomiao, and I also ask the author to add more scenes with Sister Miaomiao🥺🥺🥺

I don't know why the label has the invincible genre, but this book is really not an invincible genre, nor is it a refreshing novel. The plot is also quite frustrating. If you want to read an invincible and refreshing article, please read it at your own discretion. Strength quantification, data calculation, entry description, and skill stacking all feel like a game. Then I saw that although there are many frustrating situations, there are no unpleasant plots. The author can always make a sudden turn when desperate. I hope there won't be any situations in the future where I'm desperate and obsessed with things and there's no way back. I feel like it's good to find a turning point when encountering difficulties and bottlenecks like this.

The protagonist can't live without a woman. The hasty ending didn't leave me speechless. It's really embarrassing to include the young lady in bed.

The overall feeling is okay, but being surrounded by these children and their love all day long is both pleasant and unpleasant, sweet but not sweet. It's just frustrating, and that's it, but it's frustrating and has no structure or heroic spirit. After seeing the suffering of all sentient beings, I want to change not because of these, but because of my relatives and lovers. This is not impossible, but I did not write it in this way, showing the heroic and chivalrous spirit of being angry for a beauty, nor did I face the madness and fearlessness of menopause. I could feel his hesitation, sadness and a trace of depression. Forget it, just treat me as nonsense. Generally speaking, I still hope the author can write well. Yours truly

My first impression after reading it was that this book should not be called this name, it should be called "Traveling to another world, how do I turn Tianhu's game into hell mode with a plug-in". I know the importance of power, but I can't calm down and practice. I want to go home to accompany my sister every day. When I first entered Xianzong, I knew that Xianzong was not a good place. Even under such circumstances, he still showed his sharpness and showed great talent. Not only did he end up being taken away, but the master also ended up badly. He knew that he might become possessed by practicing randomly, but the result was that he was too confident and practiced randomly. To put it simply, he couldn't live in a place where people cannibalize people. He was chased around like a dog even though there was a cheat.

It's broken now that I wrote it, and it's not interesting anymore. I think it was good before Four Symbols Zong. But starting with Four Symbols Zong, the whole plot fell apart and I can't watch it anymore.

I collapsed for no apparent reason. I was too anxious and ran out of words. I couldn't describe that feeling, so I started to collapse anxiously.

I just want to say one thing for a one dollar reward, Silly Cup Novels

I feel that even though the author often fails in writing, I still want to read his books. Although the protagonists in his works all have big backgrounds and big causes and effects, but without these, how can the protagonist be the protagonist and how can he reach the top? Moreover, the protagonist he describes is a bit similar to Tiancan Tudou, who is a time traveler but has actually integrated into the world. He does not have the unique arrogance of time travelers written by other authors, which is still good. However, the author actually does not have the ability to write long novels. If the world view is too grand, it will collapse or even eunuch. For an online novel that often has thousands of chapters, a mere one million words is really too little.

The protagonist is such a naughty golden finger, but he is led everywhere like a dog

The transformation of the young lady at the end is so weird. As long as you are better than her, you will accept it. Yan Ying, right? 😅😅Miss is not Song Youning, why do you have to accept it?

I almost missed this book because of its title. It's a rare masterpiece. This book is definitely underrated. It's been a long time since I've seen a book with such distinct characters.

The back part is just pretending to be a pig, which makes me feel uncomfortable. I don't know my identity is exposed, and I look very frustrated.

I skipped through dozens of chapters with my money, but I couldn't stand it anymore when the previous chapter came out. Whose son is the protagonist? It was disgusting. There was a hook at the beginning that was not enough, and the same old routine from decades ago was used. Sure enough, I couldn't finish writing in the end.

Finished spreading flowers! How can I put it this way? I really like this book. The character of the male protagonist is very suitable to me, so it is a pity for me that the book is unfinished. After all, I think this book has greater potential that has not been realized. I hope the next book will not disappoint readers...

What's up with the new book? Has it been taken off the shelves? Not found.

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