You Call This a Gamer?

The writing is not bad, but... My suggestion is to write as boldly as possible. You seem to be a bit capable and may not be able to master the battle of wits.

The writing is okay, but why do I feel like no one is reading it?

I came from Zhihu. After the modification, it really looks much better, but the introduction...

It was cut in February, and it grew back a little in July. This makes it hard for me to believe that you can't be a eunuch.

If there is anything you don't like about Xiaomengxin's new book, please tell me and I will make adjustments later~! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

The setting is very good. As long as the main plot does not deviate, the IQ does not slip, and you do not lick the dog, your book is considered complete (I don't know if you have an outline, I hope it won't be unfinished)

The subject matter is good! ! ! It's the protagonist of the plot... Doesn't it feel right? ! ? ? The attraction is... But not very big? ? Or are you talking about raising it? ? ?

This book is okay, brothers in the book world should consider it.

This... I'll keep it on the bookshelf, it feels very short.

The author doesn't seem to have a good grasp of the third golden chapter!

The book released in January is only at this point now. What did the author do?

I will post on my computer every day, and then re-read the latest chapters on my phone. Problems such as too long paragraphs and typos will be readjusted. At the same time, all bosses are welcome to catch bugs and raise concerns. Thank you bosses! (●'◡'●)

Someone in our community went to the hospital for a checkup. It was not Ennovirus at all, it was outrageous...

Is there any revenge in the plot of the first chapter? If not, then I don't recommend reading it.

Test the waters and promote a round of travel, and then enter the stand-alone life. Thank you all bosses for your support, Xiao Xianyu will definitely continue to work hard!