How Come the Promise of Cultivating Immortality Through Writing Has Come to Fruition?

In fact, it is very comfortable to read continuously, but there are too few updates, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to follow up. It would be great if there could be 10,000 to 20,000 words updated every day. Also, the martial arts fight against counterfeiting in the early stage is actually a good entry point. Rather than pretending to be a slap in the face, I think the author wants to use martial arts as an entry point, but it is just an entry point. I think this book is in the flow of exploration, plus elements of world evolution such as spiritual energy recovery. It's a bit delayed after Chapter 40, but the sense of detail is great. It's really hard to catch up on reading. Now I'm reading every day to support the authors, and I'll subscribe to support them when the time comes! Don't let me down! Also, I don't want to have a harem randomly, unless the emotional drama is perfect! When it's released, remember to update it as agreed, otherwise I'll blast you!

Aribadi, let me see your hands!

Author, you actually hacked into my phone

A small suggestion, this book has too few elements of cultivating immortality. I don't know how the author wrote the outline. You can strengthen the element of cultivating immortality. There are now more than 100 chapters with many elements of Chinese martial arts. Nowadays, Chinese martial arts is really not popular in the novel world, even if you give the author a level of power that can break mountains and cut rivers with one punch. It gives the impression that fantasy is mixed in. The martial arts type does have a lot of audiences, but it should not be related to the national martial arts. The main plot should be strengthened. The main plot of the main character currently written is to be a national martial arts Douyin blogger and then mix in some daily hang-ups of cultivating immortals. . . It's really full of flaws and I don't know where to complain. More elements of cultivating immortals. It is recommended that the main plot be transferred to the Buddhist temple Guiman to introduce the local world of cultivating immortals. There are now more than 100 chapters with almost no local elements of cultivating immortals appearing. I really have no motivation to watch.

The writing is okay, but it feels a little watery. There are more and more things to collect, and the introduction takes two or three chapters. It should be streamlined. Tai procrastinates and makes me a little uncomfortable reading.

Ahhhhh, Akko finally has the potential to be a heroine, Zongze (the author) seems to be enlightened in these chapters! ! !

My physical training is about to enter the middle stage of breaking the void, and my practice is also in the middle stage of spiritual transformation. You are too slow.

If the author doesn't realize that his writing is not good, he must grasp the main line and don't start branch lines randomly. The more he writes, the worse he will be.

This book is very well written. There is no pretentiousness or slap in the face in the legend, and the plot is relatively realistic. And the pace is not very slow or procrastinating, and there is nothing superfluous. It just feels like one sentence is very appropriate! !

Author, Pig's Feet picks up treasures in the scene every day. There are so many treasures before and after. Do you still remember how many treasures appear in the following article? It's all in vain

Hurry up, give the protagonist some tricks, more adventures, and give that Xu Xiaodong a good beating! As long as you update it stably, it will be absolutely supported!

Where are you? Don't run away, don't be a eunuch! It's obviously very good!

Akko will soon be promoted to the heroine, and it will be fully pre-ordered. This seems to be the first book I have ordered from Qidian.

The setting is good, and the beginning is quite attractive; I have reached chapter 213 now, and now it feels too wordy. Most of the chapter is explanatory text, which makes it a bit unreadable.

Damn, I just ordered all the monthly tickets and saw a eunuch?

Later, the author has no outline and goes directly to the palace to serve the emperor.

The subject matter of telling the truth is good, but it takes too long to introduce things, and the whole thing is like keeping a running account. Everything else is okay.

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I can finally post, the limit will be waived in a few days, my five yuan •́.•̀ (Just kidding) (Main topic) Why is my Zongze different from yours?

The book is actually pretty good. I ordered all of it, but then I realized it was no longer available. Why?

What about Chapters 2, 3 and 3? Why didn't I add it after it was deleted?

I found out that there will be limited exemptions in a few days.

It's very well written, why isn't it popular?

Understand?