Creation Begins with the Creation of the Universe

My suggestions 1. Diversify civilization A single civilization is always a bit boring, unless your writing style is extremely high and can reach the level of "I am God!" Level. But this book is now about the second race. 2. Myth rationalization Except for the protagonist NB, the mythological system of creatures must be reasonable, reasonable, and then reasonable. 3. Cultural originality We are most familiar with Eastern culture, but it also makes it boring. The one-god system of Western culture always feels a bit dehumanizing, but it's still good to write about it. The Cthulhu system can also be used as an appropriate reference. At this point, I suggest getting a Greek culture race, they have many city-states. As for them, they can later become Western culture, or they can continue to develop Greek culture. In short, the more curious and interested people are about a culture that they know less about. 4. Emotional fluctuations Although history is a rolling wheel, the joys and sorrows of the characters in major events are also a highlight. And history also has accidental events, and uncertainty will be more exciting. Of course, too much volatility is not good. Try to choose a few characters and draw them to life. Just like Kasha in "My Hair Can Create a Demon Kingdom", I feel that he has been brought to life, especially the sentence "Go to the next future", which is exciting. It's a pity that the author turned him into a supporting role in the later period. The author wrote about the development of civilization in the early stage, then turned into a text about civilizational struggle for hegemony, and finally turned into a Machiavellian article. In the end, I hope it won't be a eunuch, and I hope it won't end badly. I think it's still very interesting. I hope the author can keep writing about the development of civilization, and he may become a master of this type in the future.

There are shadows of the next door, and I also feel that some of the bridge sections are a bit sloppy and the writing is not delicate enough. I feel that this kind of creation story is best written using the narrative method of Western mythology. It doesn't matter what the name is. It's best not to end with the prehistoric era. It's not that it's not good, but in the end many people end up writing randomly, and what they write is very different. Because prehistoric times are easy to edit My personal thoughts, please don't comment ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )

What is the Creation Style most afraid of? What scares me the most is not being qualified.

This book is really good. It's very interesting. I'm determined to follow it. Don't make a heroine or a child of destiny, otherwise it will be easily ruined. I also suggest that you don't let the protagonist descend to the earth too much and participate in mortal affairs. It's good to be a behind-the-scenes person. Absolutely a good book.

The biggest feature of I Am God is that it has a good combination of epic feeling and fairy tale style (many authors can neither write epic romance nor lose childlike romance), and it also absorbs the lessons from the previous book "Low Dimensional Game". The Supreme God no longer ends up personally, but indirectly reflects the sense of transcendence through the advancement of the plot between creations. The troublesome thing about writing about the background of Eastern mythology is that we have prematurely entered an era of humanistic secularism and sharp holes. The evolutionary epic of all races competing for freedom and diversified social organizations cannot be supported by "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" alone. The lack of detailed descriptions has led to many of our Eastern fantasy worldviews appearing to be very big but actually very small. In fact, they are just two lines of sect and family.

Even though I'm a eunuch, I still push it. In the past two years, the starting point is that push notifications are toxic. There is no check at all.

This is the first time I saw someone recommending a eunuch...

Highly recommended this week? Finished this work?

? What is this daily recommendation? Pushed a eunuch? ? ?

Personally, I feel good about it. I hope that the author can have plots similar to Star Wars in the future, and the world view can be grander. Of course, I also hope that the first world can be dealt with before talking about Star Wars. By the way, I personally hope that the protagonist will not be treated too differently, even if the other party is human or other races. I wish this book will get better and better. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch, everything will be easy.

To be honest, the creation flow is really difficult to write. At least eight out of ten writers will die either because of their poor writing skills or because they start too early and fail later. I don't know what this one is like.

It seems that all creations nowadays cannot escape the category of myths, immortals and Buddhas. It's about the universe, but it turns out that all of them are like the earth, prehistoric times.

What is forceful style? To be strong means to have a big picture, everything is under control, and have lofty ambitions. All living beings are ants, and they will not snatch anything from ants, because those things are useless or unnecessary to him. Loves to do research and is very smart in research and layout. Don't talk about love, because the road is eternal and has lofty ambitions. Fellow Taoists are welcome to add.

1: Clarify the pantheon Today's mainstream pantheon is either one with only one god (such as Jesus Christ) or multiple gods (such as Nordic mythology, etc.). Since the protagonist is a god, let's clarify the god system, that is, determine whether to develop multiple gods. Because the power of the only god is different from the power of multiple gods. If the only god is determined, the protagonist's ability can be expanded. But judging from the current names of Shishen and Yushen, it may be the development of one god with multiple vests, which is pretty good. 2: Power System Clear the power system to be developed later, technology or aura (such as magic). Now it seems that the two should develop together. There is Qi training on land, but we haven't seen what will be developed under sea. Both are now climbing the technology tree, so technology should develop together. Hopefully the author will consider the uniqueness of Haixia when developing Reiki under the sea. That is, each race has its own shortcomings, and the power system created should be given priority to be more in line with its own race. In other words, the integration of the power system must be done by a unified dynasty, which is like Qin Shihuang's unified weights and measures. Of course, this can also be done by relying on the protagonist's identity as the only god, but in this case, the concept of "god" will inevitably be strengthened, which I personally think is not conducive to the development of civilization. 3: Civilization Differences and Racial Talents The author handled the issue very well in that he was unable to communicate with the black bird after Quanxi came ashore, and that the lifespans of the Yuren and the Sharks were different. This can be said to have laid the foundation for the diversification of later cultures and ensured the differences in civilizations. Racial talent can determine the direction of civilization development. When I saw the author wrote that Quan An got back the 'oracle' from the temple and said that the sea belonged to the sharks, I could see the general direction of the subsequent development of this race. The unity of opposites is the driving force that promotes the development of things. When the development directions of the Yu people and the Shark people are different, the possibility of war between the two races is huge. This can be seen when the author writes about Yu Wu's attitude towards Quanxi, which paved the way for the subsequent civilizational struggle for hegemony. (Civilization struggles for hegemony must be written. Even if a new planet is created for a single civilization, struggle for hegemony is unavoidable. Struggles absolutely exist. Even humans of the same race in the world today are still fighting due to region, ideology, etc.) 4: Diversification and appropriate development of ideas In my opinion, the creation stream is a branch of the behind-the-scenes stream. The protagonist has huge The power can do anything. At this point, the protagonist no longer has the development path of "pursuing power" (I have read a book in which the protagonist belongs to the Creator God in a small world but is still an ordinary person in this world. I feel very uncomfortable, because the author has to switch when writing the protagonist, and the reader has to switch when watching, one second is omnipotent and the next second is submissive). From this point of view, the author can expand a bit, and does not need to be limited to existing myths, but can appropriately consider other existing elements. For example, you can consider some settings in other anime. It is true that mythology can add a sense of grand epicness, but for anime that are developing rapidly, the number of things that can be written about mythological elements has gradually become less and less (myths such as Solomon, Merlin, and King Arthur are almost written to death.) In fact, when I saw the chapter about the towering tree, the first thing I thought of was the world tree. When I saw that the protagonist was named Jianmu, my mind suddenly opened up. When I saw Mr. Quan's death, what I thought of was Xingyue's famous Hall of Valor (Odin ordered the Valkyrie to form the Hall of Valor in Norse mythology). This can be said to be suturing or fusion. 5: Other MODs The author is trying to create other mythical creatures (we will call them behemoths from now on), other mythical creatures that are not humanoid. A little bit made me think that the author wanted to create the Classic of Mountains and Seas, but when I thought about the large number of giant beasts in the Classic of Mountains and Seas, I thought it would be enough to write a few. There is no need to write too many, because this is not the point. Through this giant beast, I thought of something further behind. I thought of the world view of Arknights (before, giant beasts ruled the world, but now the giant beasts have been suppressed by humans and now humans rule the world). I think this can add more mythological epics, such as killing giant beasts, forging weapons with the bodies of giant beasts, etc. These are all very exhilarating, a fight against the majesty of existence! 6: Subsequent Development How to proceed in the later stages of the Creation Stream? The world has been created, so how should it develop? In fact, my suggestion is war. Civilization needs to be refined through war. I have two ideas now, war within Kyushu, or war outside Kyushu. That is, war on the planet and war in space. After the development of science and technology, wars no longer depend on the number of people to determine victory. This type of war is recommended to be written as a space war. War of faith, this type of war can be written as an intra-spherical war (as mentioned earlier, the author's development should be one god with multiple armors, so a war of faith can be written). If the author is good, he can write about both, a war of faith and a mythology, and then it can become a space war. (This article only gives some suggestions below. I hope it can inspire some ideas for the author. If some ideas are different from the author's, the author should be the main one at first. After all, if my ideas interfere with you, it can easily lead to poor writing. I have seen an author before who was disturbed by readers' book reviews and did not develop well in the future, so I was still a little hesitant when writing this book review.) Come on, author.

Can the author be more imaginative? ⸜(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝⋆*, Life does not have to be limited to carbon-based life. For example, energy life born in stars, or composed of inorganic matter, or life at other latitudes. (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

It developed too fast, and it felt a little deformed. Some things appeared too smoothly.

I recommend a book to you by the author, The Dragon Who Devoured the World. There is a God in it who is very cool. I think you can learn from this.

The writing is quite good, with a B character, but the title of this book makes people think it's bad at first glance.

Dear author, I would like to ask: After these Qi practitioners reach a certain level of cultivation, don't they need to survive thunder tribulations or something like that?

Few, short, that's what the author says

It looks great, but updates are too slow.

The introduction is well written, read on to Chapter 68

Author, I would like to ask, where is the glue man who first ran to the land? I remember that he seemed to be taught by the protagonist himself. Logically speaking, no matter how weak the talent is? He should still be alive now, and the shark's lifespan is longer than that of the feathered man, so where did he go? Except for the tape in the first few pictures, why is there nothing else said at the end? Is he planning something?

Can this be updated? Not only less, but also always stop

Why. . . . . . . . . . . .

I think it's okay. It's much better than other books. It has a story.

What is the new book, let us invest in the wool