My Maid Knight

Let me tell you my feelings. On a ten-point scale, I would give this book a seven. The reasons are as follows: 1. As a classic Japanese-style Western magical light novel, the subject matter is a bit old. 2. I felt a little disgusted with the bet chapter. This kind of situation must have happened in many novels I read. It felt cliché. 3. As soon as the female supporting role appears, I can almost guess that something will happen later, and it also feels old-fashioned. (ps: There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Don't put your thoughts on me. I'm not asking the author to change it according to my thoughts. I just think it's not in line with my taste. Please leave this comment to save time if you have the same taste as mine)

I think the author's style of writing is not quite right. This fantasy novel initially gave people a setting of a medieval European world of swords and magic (nobles, knights, maids). However, some Chinese-style words (Your Excellency) appear very suddenly in the book, and the surname Qin family is also very Chinese, which feels very awkward. I hope the author can see this. I have read less. If it is changed later, it will be treated as a loud fart 🤤

When will the author write a new book? Is the author feeling better? If it feels better, I will write a new book as soon as possible. This book has been on the top of my bookshelf for a long time and has not been moved. I want to read Sweet Love! ! !

Can the author write an extra story about marriage?

This book review contains 200,000 words and sixty chapters. This book is quite good. It is hard to imagine that this is a book written by a newcomer. To put it roughly, the male protagonist travels to a Western fantasy world. This world is mainly about conquering several layers of the World Tree. Only the vicinity of the World Tree is suitable for survival. The male protagonist takes in a maid who comes to his house, and then gets involved in the maid's life experience. So far only. It's not purely Western fantasy, there are Eastern elements in it. In terms of character image, the characters created so far are quite distinctive and consistent with the background, making a deep impression on people. It's rare. The plot is average. The battle of wits in which the male protagonist participated in the first dungeon was written in a relatively loose manner, but several layers of background were added. There is nothing new in the beginning of the plot, just the same old provocation, gambling and fight. However, the psychological changes of the characters are portrayed in great detail, but there is always a feeling of being too forceful and lacking in naturalness. Well, you can't be too harsh. The emotions are written more delicately. The writing style is acceptable. Above the passing line, it is not considered outstanding. The camera feel is quite good, and the connection between several shots is also excellent. But there is no description in the shot. All in all, pretty smooth.       ，，， Finally, I seriously doubt that there will be a plot in the future where the male/female protagonist is seriously injured and then the female/male protagonist sacrifices his life to save it.

How about, author, change spiritual power into spiritual energy?

[Why is the classical style of dark style not popular anymore? It's simple, old-fashioned and has no new ideas. In this case, just watch TV series and movies. The era of Zhu Xian style has passed. The main theme of the novel should be combined with the background of the times. Classics are not bad, they are just out of date. (I mean, under the same conditions, readers will choose the one that is more in line with the mainstream rather than the niche.) This novel is very good. If it were 10 years ago, it would definitely be at the level of Zhu Xian. Unfortunately, it is not suitable for old readers like me. I have seen this routine too many times. For, there is no suspense in the finale.

There is a story that is quite good, it makes people want to watch it, the plot design is also reasonable, and I am not addicted so far.

There is a simple feeling. I haven't been in the mood to read this kind of novel for many years, so I read half of it in one go. Grain +. It's amazing that the introduction can recommend novels to me. The characters are all well described, but the supporting roles are a bit lacking and the heroine is a bit overshadowed. The first volume tells the story of Long Aotian, a brother and sister of the Qin family, a Klein who dreams of reform from top to bottom, and a beaten villain who connects the threads of events.

Personally, I feel that for a novel, the author's characters are flesh-and-blood, and the plot development is reasonable and innovative. Internet novels with better results may not have the strength and connotation of this one; however, for an online novel, the update is too slow to retain readers, and it is definitely slow to gain popularity. Even if there is a lot of foreshadowing and in-depth thinking about the context, this shortcoming cannot be redeemed. In addition, the subject matter of this type of novel is also relatively cold. I am very optimistic about the author's level and intention, but I must also remember that the body is the capital of revolution.

I actually got second place. I actually got second place

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Maid Knight

In fact, I don't think the outline published by the author is particularly good. Because it lacks an ending point, in popular terms it is the final boss. There are also some settings that can be more interesting. I will post some of my ideas here for reference by the author and everyone. 1. Why were all the three artifacts concentrated in Sidonia? What method did the three artifacts find to save the World Tree? The characteristic of the Crown of God is to observe the past and the future, and a thousand years is enough for it to complete a meticulous plan to save the World Tree. The behaviors that surfaced in this plan include-guiding the Sidnians to attach themselves to the World Tree, giving them blessings (a possible source of class), indirectly controlling their leaders, and through this, curbing the development of satellite cities. The characteristics of the Sword of God are power and possibility. It had been wandering in other levels of the World Tree until the recent past when it chose the divine envoy Qin Liu, and now it is trying to get close to the protagonist Roy. The characteristics of the Heart of God are life, death and balance. Logically speaking, it should be the artifact that is most aware of the withering of the World Tree, but it seems to have been fishing until the withering is approaching, and it chose the protagonist Roy, a "different world person" as the divine envoy. The opportunity for selection happened to be the re-implementation of the satellite program. Based on the above analysis, the positions of the Crown of God and the Heart of God are basically opposite. The Crown of God has a strong desire to save the World Tree, while the Heart of God may not care much about the survival of the World Tree due to the balance of life and death. The Sword of God is relatively neutral. It did not show any obvious tendency when it returned to Sidonia. It is the key to breaking the balance. The plot guessed from this: Thousands of years ago, the Crown of God predicted the future of withering, so it used its authority to find a way to save it - guiding the root civilization to expand to the World Tree and connect all the branch worlds. When the withering occurred, the colonists of all the branch worlds were used as compasses to point to the roots to reconnect. In order to ensure the accuracy of the compass, the scope of the root world civilization must be small enough. This is why it is necessary to stop the expansion of satellite cities. The Heart of God is disgusted with this kind of behavior that disturbs life and death, so it disturbs life and death itself, grabs the protagonist's soul from another world and reincarnates it to avoid the future observation of the Crown of God, and destroys the plan at the critical moment of withering. The Sword of God is similar to the "immune system". It wanders around to deal with unstable factors that are not conducive to the plan. In order to ensure the execution of the plan, it was chosen to cultivate the Qinliu Divine Envoy to station in the branch world on the eve of withering. Then he sensed an anomaly in Sidnia and returned to investigate personally. 2. The twentieth layer of the world tree is not good for the human world. This reversal will bring about the identity problem of the protagonist. According to my plot above, the protagonist Roy must be a complete outsider to avoid the observation of the Crown of God. Therefore, the soul of the protagonist is randomly captured by the Heart of God from the death in the void. This can also explain the setting that the Heart of God knows nothing about the world of the protagonist. The World Tree has been changed to eighteen levels that are the same as the levels of the professions, which also coincides with the level blessings given by the Crown of God. Only by corresponding one-to-one can they be connected one by one. Heart of God secretly added an extra judgment class to the protagonist Roy. The judgment class is basically unique to Crown of God. The Heart of God's involvement in the judgment is also necessary to disrupt the Crown of God when the plan is in progress. So why does the World Tree cause conflicts between artifacts? The World Tree is the connection and foundation of the eighteen-level world, the source of supernatural powers such as the eighteen classes, and the "big cake" of the three artifacts. The future observation of the Crown of God can cover the entire World Tree, but after it withers, it can only observe one world, like seventeen of the eighteen eyes being blinded. Therefore, Crown of God has the desire to save the World Tree. Of course, this salvation can only represent "reconnecting the eighteen worlds", and does not necessarily have to restore the true appearance of the World Tree. The Sword of God is completely a tributary of the Crown of God - of course they represent power and strength respectively, command and execution, and are two sides of the same coin. The Heart of God is even more special. As an artifact, it is named after the heart. It is, or in other words, the most human among the artifacts. The withering of the World Tree is a part of life and death, and there is no need for him to get involved in it. But when he discovered that the God's Crown Project had crossed the line and obtained the protagonist's soul accidentally or premeditatedly, he started his own action to stop it. The plot he designed includes: Additional injection of the ruling class - allowing the protagonist to replace the surrounding ruling powers while being separated from observation. That is to say, it not only prevents the system from retrieving, but also prevents the system from reporting errors. Developing a satellite city - this is a clever move. The first is to determine the protagonist's ability, the second is to provide merit for the protagonist's holy land tour, and the third is to expand the coordinate range of Sidonia - this of course attracted the attention of the Sword of God, so it came back to check the situation, but on the eve of the withering of the World Tree, major turbulence was not allowed, so it just monitored the protagonist, the key figure in the satellite project, to prevent possible trouble later. Establish a fair trade contract with the protagonist, gain better control over the protagonist, and then give him the magic sword Apophis. This magic sword is more like a shackle. When the protagonist loses his identity as a god, he will most likely be killed by its backlash. To sum up, how should I design the subsequent plot development? The yellowing of the leaves of the World Tree caused a panic, but the upper echelons headed by Vera calmed the people's emotions. They pushed the withering to the indigenous people of the other world-these indigenous people may be ugly and evil. The protagonist, as chief, played a huge role in "defending" the natives, which greatly boosted morale. But the de facto blight did not stop. This leads to worry for the protagonist. (This part of the protagonist and role should have been borne by the second knight D'Artagnan in the premeditation of the Crown of Gods. Obviously, it was the efforts of the Heart of God that made Vera accept the harsh conditions of the protagonist, turning the protagonist into the chief knight and a key figure.) Obviously, the result of the upper-level discussion on the withering of the World Tree can only be to accelerate the exploration (invasion) of the World Tree, in order to discover the truth and rescue methods of the World Tree (to finally plunder a wave of resources). Of course, a gentleman does not build a dangerous wall, and some nobles chose to seek safety early and ran to the satellite city. (In the middle is a large copy of balabala, with various natives. During this period, the protagonist's trust value with the Heart of God increased, and the friendship value with the Sword of God increased. The Sword of God did not discover the hidden Heart of God, nor did it find that it had been affected by the Heart of God and gained more humanity.) Finally Qin Liu and other explorers reached the eighteenth floor, which is the top floor. Obviously, the indigenous people there do not have the methods or information to save the world tree. The front is tight and the back is tight. These seventeen worlds have become a time-limited buffet table. Everyone plunders without reservation, abandoning the sustainable development of colonization. A large number of poor people also begin to pour into the World Tree. This is a "gold rush" in another world. At this time, the protagonist, in cooperation with the Heart of God, left "seeds of life" in each world. They symbolized the possibility after withering. The Sword of God had noticed something, but he did not stop it. The former saint Shirin, who abdicated, found a key opportunity. She used the secret after abdicating to prepare all actions. After the gathering of the Law Envoys on the Holy Baptism Day, they used the highest authority of the Crown of God to use the power of all the Law Instruments to stab the roots of the World Tree, forcibly accelerating the withering of the World Tree to obtain an accurate and rapid overall collapse of the World Tree to replace its gradual withering. But the protagonist who noticed it in advance did not let the magic sword exert its destructive power, which undoubtedly gave him an opportunity. In the end, the former Saint Shireen, who was considered the culprit of the destruction of the World Tree, wanted to regain her position as a Saint, and was inspired by D'Artagnan, who wanted to protect the Saint Vera. Shireen and D'Artagnan died together. The stem of the World Tree began to twist and explode, and the main body began to peel off around the annual rings. The leaves covered the sky of all worlds. In the end, only a spiral light pillar remained in the World Tree, and the first and last ends of the light pillar also gradually disappeared in a spiral. Qin Liu on the eighteenth floor and Ye Qingcheng on the bottom floor seized this opportunity. At the same time, he waved the sword of God, and the sword energy penetrated the eighteen worlds, splitting the light beams and meeting in the middle. After the light beams were split, they met end to end and continued to flow to form an infinite ♾️ symbol. The adjudication of other worlds also began to take action. They used the gold diggers to shape the needle to point to Sidonia. During this period, it took a certain amount of time to correct the error. The infinity ♾️ symbol deforms along the pointer and begins to take the shape of a crown. The tip of the crown absorbs the class abilities of each world, and the entire universe begins to become demon-free. The stripped wood begins to return to form the outer layer of the crown, but progress at this stage is slow because the fragmentation is not thorough enough. The Crown of God and the Sword of God begin to mingle, and they invite the Heart of God to join the feast. The extra time consumed provides the protagonist group with enough opportunities to react. Alia protects Vera from the control of the Crown of God. The protagonist's friends restrain Qin Liu on the 18th floor. The gravity of the Heart of God and the Crown pulls and restrains each other, while the protagonist Roy needs to deal with Ye Qingcheng alone. The protection of the magic sword is gradually weakening, and the ranks are gradually disappearing. Roy has no chance of defeating Ye Qingcheng, who represents the sword based on his swordsmanship alone. The lower the magic power, the more obvious this phenomenon is. Roy has fallen into decline. Ye Qingcheng began to persuade Roy, "Why should we choose to abandon the age of gods and enter a perfect, bright utopia of gods? Isn't it a real Garden of Eden. There are no barriers, no errors, no darkness, only God. As long as you serve God, you can gain happiness!" Ye Qingcheng had many opportunities to kill the protagonist directly, but he still chose to persuade, hoping that Roy could change his mind. Finally, the magic power was exhausted, and the Heart of God failed in the tug-of-war and was pulled towards the huge crown. The Heart of God shouted to the protagonist Roy at the last moment: "I have a surprise for you, it's in your ring. That is the best gift you gave me, and it is also my last gift in return. Our deal is completed. Now, use it to win!" The power of the space ring also disappeared, and a large number of items poured out like a blowout. Roy held the "return gift" hidden in the innermost part—— American-made M 1917 Smith & Wesson! My lord, times have changed! The revolver's restraint on the sword master without extraordinary abilities was overwhelming. Roy stepped back and relied on his experience in the assassin class to hit Ye Qingcheng's sword-holding right hand with one shot. The Sword of God instantly became chaotic, and the Heart of God suddenly accelerated towards the huge crown, competing with the Crown of God. Saint Vera's betrayal became the straw that broke the camel's back, and she begged Alia to kill herself. The Crown of God fell into chaos, and the Heart of God took the initiative. Roy tightened his grip on the revolver at this time. If there was any change in the Heart of God, he would choose to commit suicide directly. But no, the Heart of God liberated the huge crown, the fragments of the World Tree floated to various worlds, various classes dispersed, and the connections between the worlds were severed. There is no supernatural power on the continent of Eden, and people can no longer see the towering World Tree when they look up. They can only see large or small worlds fluttering at night, or in other words, they can see the nearby planets rotating. Sometimes if you get closer, you can see traces of human activities above. Roy and Aaliya guide the development of people on the continent of Eden, and Roy's knowledge provides the most important help to people. People began to call Roy the "Wisdom of God." But ever since Ye Qingcheng said that he was no longer the Sword of God and dragged his remaining body towards the wilderness with the sword in his left hand, Roy had never heard or seen traces of the artifacts. Roy died and slept in Aria's arms at the age of seventy-two. This may be the result of the deal with the Heart of God and the excessive use of the magic sword. Aaliyah began to live in seclusion after Roy's death. Alia was one hundred and thirty-one years old when she died. She was still cleaning her room the day before her death. Her funeral was not a grand one, attended by only a few people, but flags were lowered in towns, streets and villages across the continent. She was buried next to Roy's tomb. Roy and Aaliyah had three sons and eight daughters, with a total of fifty-four descendants. They were known as the "Glorious Arnolds". In all the worlds, the "seeds of life" planted by Roy are beginning to sprout. They symbolize life, the future, and possibility.

Except for the different eye color, everything else really fits my image of the heroine.

How can a good book not have idioms solitaire? Let me go first - do whatever you want.

Impressions

The plot of a classic royal coming-of-age girl light novel, and the quality is very high. I can give it 8.5 Points without fear of making you proud. The main problem is that it is not in the mainstream market after all. High quality is also suitable for this subject. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I don't quite understand. Some books are obviously bad but no one says it. Some books are good in my opinion, but some people criticize them. Could it be that they are all trolls (they just criticize and don't give suggestions for improvement) [doge] This book is very good, at least it is rare to see at the beginning. Great support for the author.

The author is not in good health and needs to rest for a while. Sorry.

I have read more than 100 chapters of this book. Overall, from the beginning to the 100th chapter, I have never seen the protagonist have any awareness of danger. He is a bit unlike us Chinese, more like people in the West. Only when danger comes, will we know about it. Also, the protagonist has never thought about what to do or plan for the future? I only know that now, this is very unlike our China, much like the West

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The writing seems very comfortable, with a bit of a Western fantasy feel, which is why I keep reading. The main storyline is classic (lao) classic (tao) and you can tell it at a glance. It looks like some kind of classic academy. The villain likes the heroine and is slapped in the face to lead to the boss behind the scenes. I have seen it too many times. Especially in the part where he went to investigate the shady story, the male protagonist gave me the feeling that he had neither a suitable motive (the author explained it as adventure, but this explanation is too pale, and there is no reason to take the risk at all, just to seek justice for the maid?), Nor a strong background (to give the protagonist a trump card to face risks). It was just like a bored civilian investigating the secret history of the royal family. Without the aura of the protagonist, he would have died a hundred and eighty times. The emotional line is advanced very well. I can see the trust and loyalty between the two of them. It can be said that this seemingly silly and innocent plot line has actually become a powerful booster for the emotional line. For my maid, even if I am of low status, I am willing to risk my life to clear her grievances. It is full of romanticism. Overall evaluation: The plot will persuade you to quit, the dog food kitchen can be eaten, if you like a soothing rhythm, you can watch it, and you will like hearty and refreshing novels to persuade you to quit.

Is Qin Liu's characterization too much?

This woman named Qin Liu, I can only say that it is reasonable to have such a person. She appears in many novels. She is called a test and gives charity. In fact, she is a pure-bred rebel who has power in her family but has no brains. Anyway, as long as she is not an important ally or the heroine, it doesn't matter I often see this so-called test of coming to someone's door and beating someone up. Readers are scolding it, and the author is still using it. I can only say that you are used to the routine and you can't change it.

I am 24 years old, and I am currently preparing for a graduate degree in game design... I have been very busy recently... I have been saving for a long time to read it... To be honest, I read very few novels, and the ones I can read are basically those that interest me very, very much.                 …，，，Works... I use the read-aloud function to listen to Eryi's novels every day in my spare time, during exercise, and during my lunch break. Various scenes and pictures emerge in my mind, which makes my dry imagination a little more active after a long absence.                  Well, I'm not a professional writer, and I haven't even passed the Chinese language test. So this is just the stage of collecting materials. It's not certain whether it can be formed in the future. Although I hope to complete it... So after reading Eryi's novel, I even felt a sense of intimacy and resonance... Sometimes I even want to help Eryi draw some character drawings or something... If Eryi is willing... With this feeling, I thought that in I will spend a long period of time with Eryi's novel... As a result, when I heard that chapter, the more and more something felt wrong 🥵 I thought I had heard it wrong... Unexpectedly, Eryi really stopped writing... The first novel that I recognized in my life died like this... To be honest, I even had a little doubt about life. This ending is really a bit disappointing 😭.                 ……，…，， I will also persevere for this day😭

There are Chinese names among the supporting characters, so why give the male protagonist a Western name?

Basically, it is a novel that perfectly suits my preferences. The plot is not pure dog food. Both the male and female protagonists have high quotients. The emotional line is single-minded and perfect without ambiguity. The love process is also very sweet. It's great—— Come on, author, and please update more!

How about this?

The author just writes according to his own ideas. If he maintains this quality, he will definitely become popular. There are very few books of this type from Qidian. Come on.