Something's Wrong with My Elf Moves

The new author wrote it very well, the plot is also very smooth, and he digs holes very carefully. The only thing is that the escape room is still a bit abrupt and a little dramatic. It would be much better to enrich the content and add more foreshadowing. In the end, it is too short, really too short! ! ! !

Explain! Love me! !

Jiangjiang is here, bringing Xiao Sheng Pan-fried Buns, Fried Soybean Noodles, hot fried dumplings with scallion oil and egg custard to support her. I strongly support the great book, yeah yeah!

Thoughts on the plot of the escape room. As some readers said, this plot seems like "what the hell". My problem here is huge. Because at the beginning, this plot was not in my plan. Later, I was worried about the world view and the introduction of subsequent characters, so I wanted to use the escape room game to explain the general world view of the book clearly and introduce the key characters in the subsequent plot. However, due to my lack of writing skills, this plot is very abrupt and far different from the previous relaxed daily style, which makes many readers confused. Therefore, I am very sorry and I promise here that this type of plot will not appear again in the future. Now that this plot is over, I will immediately return to my normal daily relaxed writing, describing the interaction between Jiang Yun and Big Baby Pichu, and writing the heartwarming parts of my favorite Pokémon for all my readers. I also hope you can support me a lot. If you have any questions about the current plot, you can complain down here and I will reply! ! ! Thank you!

Xiaozhi: Come on! Pikachu! The magnetic field rotates 1 million times!

If you don't pursue it and I don't pursue it, when will your work come out?

Uh, the elven writers seem to like Ibrahimovic... Let's just complain, uh, the author has a lot of typos, which still affects the reading experience. I hope it can be improved Personal issues, please don't comment.

Can I have a Kirby? The big fat guy is really cute😍

Book friends, if you have any questions, you can ask them.

Ibrahimovic

In what novel is the male protagonist's initial pet a cabbage? Been looking for it for a long time.

I saw Sanctioned Stone Gravel in the introduction, but why did I remember it was Sanctioned Light Gravel?

So, does the protagonist really have an elf introduced in the introduction? I have never seen any book where the protagonist recovers the horned deer😭

Protagonist: Flying Mantis, uses Sky Mantis Galaxy Slash.    ，    ，     ，•

Is there a female protagonist in this book? If so, I hope it is the kind of rival but mutual growth.

The author's original words!

I'm currently drawing the character designs of Jiang Yun and Shan Yisheng, they may be a bit too drawn out, sorry...

That's right, it's crowdfunding to write a book. If you have any favorite names, character positions and sprites, you can post them here. I've already decided on all the protagonist's sprites before publishing the book, but I haven't yet decided on the supporting characters and other members of the protagonist group. I'll consider it carefully! Thank you for your support! (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.

When I saw Chapter 77, I felt something was wrong. When I went back to the introduction, I was attracted by the weird moves in the introduction. Then when I saw Chapter 80, I looked back and realized that there weren't many descriptions of cool moves. Things like electric bows and stun guns can be considered as a brushstroke. So far, I have no impression of the showmanship, but I have some impression of the main plot. The problem is that the main plot turns out to be the same fatalism as in Japanese comics. The protagonist's experiences are described in the book as if they were clearly arranged. They are all prophecies, future, destiny and so on. Anyway, I was quite unimpressed when I saw this set.

As a time traveler, I will withdraw money from the picture. . . . . . .

I have always felt that although this escape room was not well written, it dug a really big hole. What is the identity of the owner of this escape room...? What is the purpose? So obsessed? Also, the author must have dug a hole in the world background when writing this secret room. This world background setting... Feels so big, what is it? Can anyone give me some guesses?

The writing is very tasteful, PM fans need this kind of fresh blood to constantly replenish it~

Idiom Solitaire A Journey to Mountains and Rivers

What is the next mythical beast? Is it related to time and space?

It's a bit too open. Super powers, waveguides, and physical talents all depend on gifts.

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Pichu, Pikachu

It's true that after reading the catalog, I no longer have the desire to read.