Another World on the Internet

The setting is very attractive, but there are many things that people can't understand, such as the detailed description of textures. The description of textures in the dozen or so chapters of Fire Thief is too detailed. Are you really going to let us learn texture science? ಥ_ಥ, And the description of the emotional latitude, which feels very stream-of-consciousness and unclear. I'm afraid the author was too busy writing and didn't pay attention to the readers' perceptions.

After reading the update, I feel that the world view and setting are very interesting. The only drawback is that the narrative is a bit confusing. I can understand it but the experience is average, especially in this slowly updated mode. Moreover, there are too many names for the new characters. Many of them haven't even given names for half a chapter. I can see the author's intention, but the viewing experience is not very good. I have almost forgotten the previous names. During the battle, the names of several supporting characters appear back and forth, which makes it confusing. But! This book is still very interesting. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot direction, the scientific research results of the protagonist, the revelation of the world view, and the high-level psychic effects, including the collision between the future empire and the Blue Star. I hope the author has a detailed outline and can stick to writing until the end. I will always support you. Give me a monthly ticket to express my feelings

Thank you to the author. I have constructed a basic first-order psionic formula, but I have encountered some difficulties in practice. I hope the author can give me some pointers for future study: As we all know, when constructing a three-dimensional hook-type AC circuit, the positive proton flow enveloping psionic energy is in the N-level single magnetic excitation energy straight line. In the acceleration mechanism, the speed reaches the 3,000 standard speed scale, and then it enters the ultra-small artificial black hole with a first-level anti-rotation magnetic field. A high-energy collision occurs between the positive protons in the center of the negative quantity conservation vortex magnetic field. The nuclear energy contained in the gluon layer collapses in reverse and presents a critical neutral state. Then, it is assisted by the magnetic field. Driven by the magnetic field, it enters the secondary magnetic field and another high-energy collision occurs. The instant energy produces a quark steering resonance effect, which changes from the critical neutral state to the negative state proton. However, at this time, the gluon film layer outside the proton derotates, and the inner quark also denatures to form an antiproton. The antiproton enters the reaction chamber and ejects The outflow of positive protons collides and annihilates, and the achieved mass-to-energy conversion efficiency does not reach the circuit communication threshold, resulting in very unstable psionic excitation. How can this problem be solved without changing other parts of the template? Put 50 credits here. ……………………………………………………………… Fifty in total, I hope the author can clarify my doubts (ಡωಡ)

I have to complain, stop writing about ambiguities with various beauties. People who like to read a lot of obscure theories and settings really don't like to watch ambiguities about stock trading, and it's not that good at all. The interactions with women are not as good as the academic interactions with Shao Xingchen, and various male protagonists' ideas are interrupted. Every time you find this setting interesting, you have to be prepared for another woman to come out and interrupt the rhythm, and you are always on the edge of being persuaded to quit.

The author's book is very creative, and it is about extraordinary learning in a different world (All the following are my own feelings after reading more than seventy chapters, and they only represent myself) But I think this book can actually be better. There is no problem with creativity or subject matter, the logic is rigorous, and the author even made up a set of extraordinary theories. But I think it is this theory that dissuades at least 80% of readers. Because it's really a bit boring. In my opinion, it is okay to write theory, but you cannot always write theory. You have made up all this stuff. Why can you, the author, make up such a large theory without any emotion? It feels as boring as reading professional textbooks. One chapter, two chapters, three chapters, four chapters, or even five chapters of continuous theory, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, this is not how to pretend, you can intersperse these theoretical settings in daily life, extraordinary battles, including his future extraordinary scientific research. These many settings are actually enough for the protagonist to pretend many times. Actually, I really hope to see the protagonist use his own knowledge to catch extraordinary beings and dreamers. When he first went to catch fantasy species, I was looking forward to this plot. As a result, several consecutive chapters of theoretical knowledge teaching-.-... The real battle was dull and a few words were gone. It can be seen that the author has a large setting, including empire, blue star, other world, fantasy species, extraordinary people, superpowers, there are many things, which shows that the author really wants to write this book well. These theoretical things cannot be justified without some knowledge reserves. But to be honest, when I encounter these long paragraphs or even whole chapters of theory, I basically skip it. It's not that I don't respect the author, it's just that it's really boring. And I find that skipping it has no impact on the plot, so I don't want to pay attention to these lengthy theories. Xueba Wen has been popular for a long time. Can this book be regarded as an extraordinary Xueba Wen? ? But the Xueba article is basically true. You made it up yourself (to be honest, the made-up and the real thing are almost the same). The theories in the Xueba article can always reveal a lot of real Xueba and fake Xueba, whether they are real or fake. There is traffic, but how can people discuss what you made up... I don't know Has the author read "Gu Zhenren"? The various kinds of Gu insects are actually very similar to your various spells. The author directly compiled a collection of fables about the world of Gu. In my opinion, it is the same as yours. However, the collection of fables is obviously much easier to understand and read than your collection of theoretical knowledge. In fact, my favorite part is also the prince chapter in the history of your empire's magic revolution. The prince made up a magic that changed the world in order to woo his sister. The author could actually follow this routine, reform the magic one by one, and tell the biographies of the historical figures of the empire one by one. It can be seen that the author has some level of skill, but the theoretical knowledge of magic written at the end of the chapter, I'm sorry, I really don't know what you wrote, and I was confused after reading it. In total, I have read more than 70 chapters, and there are only a few important plots. 1. I have a golden finger to connect to the Gaowu Empire Network and give online classes to show off. 2. The theory of catching fantasy species to show off. 3. The theory of entering the University of Extraordinaries to show off. The author's writing style is very good. When I started reading the first few chapters, I was thinking that this author has something. His writing style is so good, so a novice author is not a great master. But after reading these dozens of chapters, I no longer thought so. The plot unfolds too slowly, too slowly, and there are too many theoretical things. There is no sense of immersion in the growth of the protagonist, and there is no thrilling feeling. The protagonist (the author) is enjoying himself the whole time... It is free in the early stage. I think I can continue to watch it. Because it is free, I can skip the theory directly, but if it is listed, the charges will be the same. Style, I'm sorry... Of course, some people may like this niche style and this theoretical style, but if a book like this is a "novel", if it wants to be popular, I guess a big boss will fund a silver and gold publicity... The above are my personal opinions, and I still hope that the author can write better and better!

Thanks to the author's novel, I have learned magic on my own.

It's interesting. I was almost misled by the title of the book. It's rare to find a nugget of gold in the daily guide.

The world view is too big and there is no comparison or contrast. The first time I came into contact with it, I was like, Damn, Gao Dashang. What is this? I don't understand. I can't understand. It's all in the clouds!

It's well written, but it's too hard to read. The idea is good, the writing is good, and the logical thinking is on point. It's just that it's too hard to watch, so I'm not in the mood to continue reading.

It's nice to watch, but I can't stand the emotional line.

About the author being addicted to the canyon and waiting for resurrection before typing, resulting in no such thing even for so many days.

He seems to really want to teach me, but I can't construct the psychic form. Bold guess: The author may not have written this book on Earth, but in the Empire or Blue Star, and just connected the network to the Earth 🙂

I kind of think of Lord of the Stars, but Lord of the Stars is too hard to read, has too many settings, and often breaks for ten days or several months.

I guess the author has read "Lord of the Stars"

Self-motivated, this book is destined not to be popular, it is too picky among readers.

To make a subjective evaluation, the author has abundant imagination and shaping power, but the transition is a bit stiff and the plot progress is slow. But if you stick to it, I think another masterpiece will be born.

Just take good care of your baby and continue to work after you give birth. Yue can't afford to be hurt anymore

Shangxiang... If you cheat, kick me

The book is a good book, but the previous plot advances too slowly, relying entirely on the setting (the setting is obscure, and the master of theoretical magic modification), and the protagonist's interpersonal dealings are a bit dull and stereotyped. I can order them all because I want to see if the author can build a relatively perfect world view (such as Harry Potter) Can you write a separate extra chapter about the setting? The chapters did not advance much, they were all settings 🙂, and there were too few content elements.

I touched Zhou Ming (I was very confused as to why the protagonist didn't even have a face) Sorry for the bad drawing, but I really couldn't help it Call Lao Wang

Does anyone remember this book...

I stole the picture, that's probably what it means.

What a pity, I feel like Lord of the Stars