I Work in Sales in Douluo

The writing is still very good. It is best to change the introduction. This introduction can easily make readers focus too much on the mineral water when reading, and it can easily turn the mineral water into a poisonous point. At the same time, so far, the protagonist has always been an image of a wandering businessman, which is inconsistent with the introduction of opening a supermarket to buy mineral water. It is best to change it to something like this: start with selling mineral water and expand the small shop into a supermarket. Of course, the protagonist is currently moving around all the time, and the supermarket cannot be fixed. He must either open it as a portable supermarket or a mobile supermarket on the fantasy side, or fix a supermarket and find someone to take care of it. If you really can't add the supermarket, just don't want to add it and delete the supermarket in the profile.

Okay, it seems I have to work hard

It looks good. Come on, keep updating.

Not bad, keep writing if you have time.