The Legend of Douluo Qingyun

Sure enough, I was so looking forward to it at the time but now I am so disappointed. When the results are not good, I want to change another book. This happens every time. In this way, I often change the subject and rewrite. When can I improve myself?

After reading dozens of chapters, Shen Nong couldn't stand it anymore. Zhang Xiaofan said not to teach the skills easily, so he taught them to Xiao Wu, who he had not known for a long time, and then passed on some skills to the people in the village. The pills were eaten casually, and the level was one level a year. He had never thought about the fact of innate third-level soul power. When the people around him and the Spirit Hall were fools, the dean of the academy became a protector inexplicably. According to Tang San, this is a way to die.

You just drove Tang San away and took Tang San's place. You followed Tang San's path completely. Shrek Academy, fighting the Tiandou team to break the snake venom, Lanba Academy, the Force Clan, etc. It's exactly the same, look at it.

Is this the third book? Finally, we are not going to the Qibao Glazed Sect... This time the protagonist is not traveling from Qingyun to Douluo, but Zhang Xiaofan and Lu Xueqi are traveling through time together😂 Speaking of Zhang Xiaofan, who knows the five volumes of the Heavenly Book, and Lu Xueqi, can anyone in Douluo defeat them? A martial artist like Tang San could become invincible, let alone a cultivator like this. It felt like a dimensionality reduction attack? Not to mention anything else, the fourth level of Yuqing in the Qingyun Sect can refine magic weapons to fly freely, and in Douluo, only by being banned can you fly for a short period of time... I am already optimistic about the protagonist's path to invincibility.

I hope the author can solve a problem I briefly looked at the table of contents and found that in the plot from Junior Soul Master Academy to Shitadake Academy, the author did not write a side plot, but the writing was there. I have read it by other authors, and it usually takes six years after a few chapters. The author is already very good in this regard. —— The biggest reason for the decline of group streaming is that you can more or less guess the plot just by looking at the catalog. In the end, someone else has to pretend that Tang San needs to pretend, and the final result is still the result set by the third master. Roughly speaking, Douluo's Tuanliu is the same as Doupo's Xiaojialiu. If you compare it with the original work based on the catalogue, it's just a different story without changing the medicine. That's why some current authors choose to start with other camps, trying to reduce the proportion of the story of Big Shit Academy in the book as much as possible. I have seen the beginning of Qibao Glazed Sect before, and it was pretty normal in the early stage. In the middle stage, I went to Shi Da Ke Academy and read more than 50 chapters of the plot. The comment section went from being promising to being explosive. What you have to face in the plot of Zou Shi Da Ke Academy is that after the author updates it every day, if readers look at your catalog and can guess that the plot is related to the original work, it means that this update is a failure. If this happens too many times, readers will have no patience to read it. Anyway, I can guess the plot every time you update it, and the final result is the same as the original work. It's just a mess. Although the author of that book made amends later and trapped all the fairy grass, it was already too late and he felt like he was going to rush out. —— The book I wrote has now entered Shitadake Academy, and it is exactly the kind of plot that can be guessed by looking at the table of contents. It is very different from the final result of the original work. So I felt a little hung up watching it.

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The protagonist is not a time-traveler + aboriginal + the fan book does not know the plot = extremely poisonous

I was somewhat looking forward to it, but when I saw the protagonist encountering Xiao Wu in the forest and being bullied by a spirit beast, I stopped watching. A plot that is extremely irrational.

I'm speechless. It's okay for the protagonist team to give so many resources casually. You also give so much kindness to a passerby who I don't know very well. I hope the author will actually hand over all his family property.

Why is it that the heroine Zhu Zhuqing and Xiao Wu have nothing new? Why are you belittling Dai Mubai again? It is normal for a noble prince to be flirtatious. Why do authors always want to write about Zhu Zhuqing being saved by the protagonist and falling in love with him? Or how powerful the protagonist is, and then Zhu Zhuqing asks the protagonist for advice on how to become stronger, and then falls in love with him again. I am really convinced. In the original work, Tang San beats Zhao Wuji, why is Zhu Zhuqing not falling in love with him?

Zhu Zhuqingyyds

When I saw that the main character was a saint, I knew he wasn't my cup of tea.

Picture 1 is the image of Qingyun in Fantasy New Zhuxian, and picture 2 is the image of Qingyun in Zhuxian mobile game. In fact, I don't like either game very much. Firstly, it's too expensive, and secondly, it's too perfect to contain private goods.

No, I really don't understand why I want to pick up that old rabbit? You can pick up anyone, but why are you picking up that old rabbit? Is she not polite? Do you want him to be arrogant and unreasonable? Is it better for her to live or die? Not to mention anything else, among the three Shrek girls, Zhu Zhuqing has no stain; Ning Rongrong, you can say that he has princess disease, but others have this condition, who can compare to her except Qian Renxue and Hu Liena? No princess would be treated like him. Therefore, she also has the capital to act like a princess; but what capital does the old rabbit have to be arrogant and unreasonable, and want to hit people at every turn? The two little brothers dare not come out of the Star Forest. An old rabbit with nothing dares to be so bold in the human world. What capital does she have to be so bold? It's really a good job, but it's so self-righteous, it makes people feel sick just thinking about it.

. . . What's going on? The harem is just a harem. How come it even contains hostile forces? The first Xiao Wu and Wuhundian in your novel are the opposites. Why the hell do you accept a woman who is the opposite? In the end, they reconciled, and the revenge for killing their mother was not avenged? Even if you say that it is natural for humans to kill soul beasts, tnd is the protagonist's woman. I really can't stand this kind of outlook.

It's with a group again. If you don't join Shrek, you won't be able to write?

To be honest, this is no different from the original work. I came in after seeing the first few pictures, and added Zhuxian elements in the front. The creativity is very good, but after seeing 10 pictures, it becomes boring. It's completely like adding one person to the original work and taking Tang San's route. The subsequent plot is probably the same as the original work. It has no creativity or plot of its own.

When I saw going to Shrek Academy, I didn't want to see it. How come you and Tang San got together? It's not that we can't get together with Tang San. But you deceived the ego first and then went to Shrek. Don't you feel awkward if you write like this?

The female rabbit is so fertile, yet you still want a rabbit to be your heroine. The green grass above your head really needs watering

The heroines of the two novels he wrote are all rabbits. Author, you might as well marry a rabbit and go home.

Is it interesting to directly copy the original text? Be your own holy mother, pass on the skills to others by force, and treat what the master said as farts.

I started reading the book because the female protagonist is Xiao Wu. Since entering Shrek Academy, the plot has fallen into a cliché. The protagonist's way of handling things and ideas have also fallen apart, and some contradictions have appeared. It is quite disappointing. After the master came, this feeling reached its peak. Although I also think that Tang San and the master are not good people, but this deliberately creates conflicts, and the portrayal of the protagonist does not give me a good feeling. I have had opinions on him before, so I just go with the flow. It's as if the author has added his own attitude towards him. The protagonist probably doesn't know the master. This creates a clear sense of separation from the initial attitude towards other Shrek members.

As I looked at it, my style of painting suddenly changed. What did you say that all the great power could be combined into one body? You are stupid, alas, I don't love you anymore

Zhang Xiaofan's Taiqing Realm counterpart should at least be the God King

Why don't the author re-open a new book? This book is going to be scrapped!

The first heroine is Xiao Wu. Although I don't say I hate them, I still prefer Shui Bing'er, Ning Rongrong and Qian Renxue.

Inexplicably, Zhang Xiaofan and Lu Xueqi traveled through time

The heroine is a little dancing cow. She gives birth to three or four rabbits every year. You are so awesome. You didn't even know this.