I Have a Cave of Evil

It's pretty good. I've never read a novel on this subject. So far, there aren't too many bad points, and there aren't too many holes in the plot and writing.

It's very poisonous. First, let's take the Qing Dynasty as an example. The death rate for royal children in the Qing Dynasty was about 70% before the age of nine. You had to wait until you were 18 to get married. With your small population and so few children, all of them died young. There is also polygamy, which is outrageous. You clearly wrote on it that it is possible to move towards a civilized society in the future, so what? I don't even want to enter feudal society! What is private ownership in feudal society? If you have polygamy and whoever inherits the inheritance from the sons born to so many wives, you just want to stay in a primitive society forever! That's awesome. And if it snows heavily, no one will get cold. It's just that everyone is immune to diseases. There are still some small poisonous spots. I don't want to say anything anymore. I hope the author can think about it. If the protagonist becomes a chief all his life, pretend that I didn't say it, and I can give up. Alas, you really can't have a little brain. If you watch with a brain, you will really be poisoned to death.

Author, I suggest not to copy the concepts of Earth to another world, let alone have too much sense of superiority. If the protagonist does not have cheats, he will not be able to survive, so he still has the nerve to be superior.

Let me tell you what I think about this book. First of all, the meaning of the existence of this evil cave is killing, war, and death. You can tell by looking at the experience value. The second point is that you are required to use endless corpses to cast your long steps to ascend to the gods. Then about the cool points, I think this book is a farming article. What is the cool point of a farming article? It is the nurturing feeling of struggling to develop when your strength is insufficient, watching your own strength improve little by little, and adding a sense of crisis from the outside world. When the time comes, kill a few tribes in a wave to get resources and then continue to develop yourself. But Pigfoot seems to prefer running around and causing trouble. Then when I look at the maximum population growth rate of this cave, I feel that the author does not want to write in the direction of a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​bones, and a natural disaster of the undead. In the early stage, you can grasp the principle of valuing your troops more than your troops. Using skills, focus on cultivating a few high-level zombies as human shields, centipedes as assassins, cows and wild boars as controls, bows and arrows and skeletons as long-range, and add some messy evil creatures. In the early stage, rely on tribes to launch wars, mainly cultivate your own evil caves and cultivate your own evil creatures. In the later period, when the strength of his own cave became stronger, he would feed back the tribe, make the tribe stronger, steal divine power, seek the authority of the gods, integrate the resources of the continent, support himself with the essence, blood and soul of hundreds of millions of creatures, fight against the invading foreign forces, and then launch wars on other continents to realize his ambition of becoming a god. If you want to write more deeply, you can write about the origin of the cave, the enemies in the cave, etc., But these are things that need to be considered very late. The above are just some of my personal opinions and suggestions. You can read it or listen to it as you please. Since this is the first book, just ignore everything and write a million words. The second book will be adjusted to the shortcomings and written well.

Why is it becoming more and more poisonous😅

The writing is good, but there is one thing. Don't always use modern people to judge tribes, especially in terms of fertility. Isn't it a bit disgusting to have multiple wives and set the age of marriage?

What did you write

Zhu Yao's name is too dramatic, and Western Fantasy is not suitable for using a middle name!

. . . Is it better to improve the combat ability of a dwarf than to improve the overall strength of a blacksmith? Will spies be better than ghosts? And gradually it seems that the protagonist's establishment of a tribe is of no use anymore. The current protagonist is more like an explorer with a druid and several animal companions.

Brother, you are a farmer. Not an adventure stream. With the protagonist's little strength, it can be said to be a miracle among miracles that he is still alive after committing suicide.

The combination of Western and Western elements in this book is too blunt. The Masterless Ghost advances to Yaksha 😥. Brother, how did you come up with this? It would be better for you to upgrade a Yin Soldier than Yaksha.

Author, let me ask you, did you forget a skill called damage sharing? The protagonist will only suffer physical damage if all the evil units are dead. If all the evil units are dead, who will be killed if the protagonist denies death?

The writing is too messy, lacks a clear main line, and is written in a mess, with every thought coming out one by one, and all kinds of settings. I really can't stand it anymore, so I left a message hoping that the author can improve it, because the first dozens of chapters are still good.

(●—●) In fact, the so-called occupation of depth is of little use in this kind of war in the cold weapon era. The wild wolves do not have a large number of long-range attack methods, and the wastelanders can just switch to the corner defense strategy. The Wasteland Dynasty must have long-range troops to become a civilization with the help of overseas people. The front line was resisted with a large number of miscellaneous soldiers and a few elites. Just push it out slowly when it reaches a certain level. In war games, if you don't have long-range troops, it's almost like being beaten passively. It's enough for me to fight as a team. Scattering out will allow the wolves to take advantage of their racial advantages.

When will the protagonist rise to prominence?

I feel like the main character is a psychopath

The protagonist has no connection with the totem god now, right? There is no totem god in the tribe, right? Is it possible to use the big tree as the carrier of the evil cave and become a totem god to benefit ordinary people?

The plot is slow and the power system is unclear. The main character has no physical strength. I really can't see what his abilities are.

Is the protagonist serious about getting married at 18? Are you kidding?

It is obviously unreasonable to add dozens of square meters for each level. It should be increased by one meter each in length and width. This is logically correct and makes it easier to expand.

Why do I feel like the author wants to mess up the story! Don't be anxious, write slowly, the author is a child's shoes.

Although it is finished, it seems to be unfinished. See you in the next one 😭😭😭

What is the main plot of this novel? What is the protagonist doing from the beginning? Toss, toss, toss! Never stopped! How many tribes can be developed? Is the development of caves effective again? There are also some magical words popping up from time to time!

Update quickly

The world view is expanded, it's so damn beautiful, the author should update more

This book is really good, but the updates are too slow. Just don't be a eunuch.