A Journey to the Heavens Starting from Infernal Affairs

If it weren't for Zhao Tai's system, I wouldn't be able to believe that he is the protagonist. There is no priority and there are too many descriptions of other people.

You are such a fierce protagonist. In less than three chapters, it is over from reporting the crime to the end of the interview. It is well written and neat 🤓👍👍

I couldn't understand the first two chapters, so I gave up.

I hope they don't write about the equator, then the movie is really bad

The preface does not match the postscript, not only the characters and plot are messed up, but also the sentences, word order and paragraphs are messed up, and it cannot even reach the level of primary school students' compositions.

I just read the beginning, and I want to ask, Liu Jiehui from the same term (91) is already a superintendent, and the protagonist has to solve major cases before becoming an inspector. He also said that he is not qualified enough. Your setting is also awesome. Liu Jiehui, who has been a superintendent for two years, is too good for promotion.

I have no idea what I'm writing! It's too chaotic and has no process. The main character has been taking off since the first episode! I'm poisoned. I'll withdraw first. If you have high poison resistance, we'll see.

Alas, when I saw these two children, Sixth Uncle and Zilian, looking for their father, I was confused. I didn't understand what they were saying.

The faster I write, the messier I get, and the messier I get, and to be honest, I hope you can stick to it and finish it! ! ! Withdraw first, come on fellow Taoists!

I don't understand what I want to write

This book is really messy, there are too many film and television works added at once. The more works there are, the more characters there will be, and if you re-create them, it will be even more confusing. After reading the second chapter, I started to practice some physical exercises and communicate wirelessly. Looking at the catalog again, Huang Yaoshi, Wang Chongyang, Temujin, Cihang Jingzhai, all in one pot. Haha, is it a mess?

Speaking of Brother Tai, I always think of Tiger in Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf 😥

Keep a diary? A short story in one chapter

You write the script? Ah! This mode of opening the chapter is thankless

After reading the introduction, I didn't want to watch it at all.

Happy New Year, author! ! Come on!

What have you written in these recent chapters?

Liushuiwen. The plot didn't come together well.

What a mess! After reading more than ten chapters, I still have no interest at all...