The World of Martial Arts Begins with Factory Flowers

I have something very curious about. Because the protagonist has practiced strong martial arts secrets, he can break through quickly and have high martial arts skills. Very reasonable. Then I would like to ask how the rest of the innates relied on their martial arts training to obtain their true energy and internal strength? Secondly, seven or eight out of ten people who appear now are innate, and the protagonist is also innate. How do you make the protagonist appear to be awesome? You can't say that you are already strong at a young age, right? Zhang Renfeng is innate, yes, but you have to know that in addition to protecting his father, this guy was beaten so badly as one against four. If Zhang is innate, and the other Black Stones are also innate, then why is it so hard to fight? Secondly, Zhang in the movie can easily one-on-two with the Yin-Yang Sword, kill other minions and protect his own wife "Xiaoyu". In other words, if you are born with Zhang, then the rest of you are at most acquired masters, also commonly known as outside masters. Not to mention that Zhang's ability to win had nothing to do with any internal strength, it was simply that his martial arts skills were stronger than his opponent's. The competition of martial arts moves is also the essence of the martial arts movie Jian Yu. In martial arts novels, what is really fascinating is the competition of martial arts moves, not the one with higher internal strength between two people facing each other. Even if he is the best in the world, when Zhu Tiedan fights against Cao Zhengchun, the duel of internal strength is secondary. The charm is the mutual martial arts moves and the use of internal strength. Nowadays, this work does not see any description of this aspect at all, but only uses simple grades such as "innate", "nurture" and "first-rate" to describe a person's strength and weakness. Also, martial arts masters are not cultivators, and they cannot always sense each other's inner strength as soon as two people meet. When Jiumozhi saw Qiao Feng, he could only sigh with emotion about his identity and past rumors. You won't say anything like "Qiao Feng has deep inner strength, stronger than me..." Right? Don't you know whether it's strong or not only after you fight it? Also, in the world of martial arts, not only those who release their true energy are called masters. In so many works since ancient times, there are also women who don't know any martial arts and become villains purely by their beauty and scheming. There are also people who kill a bunch of masters by poisoning and using dirty tricks. There are also great thieves who are not good at martial arts but have excellent light skills. These are the charm of the martial arts world. One person doesn't just pop up every now and then. This person is the innate, and that person is the master. This is just like having several basins of boiled water of different sizes in front of you when eating. No matter how you drink it, it is tasteless. Looking at the number one in the world, in the entire Dongchang, there are no more than ten masters who can really fight. The remaining few who have tens of thousands of fans may be able to fight better than ordinary people. But who dares to say that Dongchang like this is not intimidating? At Hulong Villa, those who know it know that except for the four secret agents and Zhu Tiedan, the rest are just average and above-average disciples of the general sect. How can there be so many peerless masters? The last few spies we fought were strengthened by God (the Four Ghosts of Western Hunan taught them the art of combined attack). You will know how good they are after being beaten completely. Then there is also the strength of Ma Jinliang. I remember that he seemed to be about the same age as the protagonist, and his level was almost the same. Finally, I added that I might not be able to beat him due to lack of actual combat experience. Is the protagonist lonely after practicing this so-called magical skill? In the early stage, people said that this martial arts is so difficult to practice and how awesome it is to practice it. However? That's it? Also, when Dongfang Invincible only relied on the Sunflower Book, it was still a fragment. What was the result? One person dominates the martial arts heroes. You need to know how long Dongfang Bubai has been practicing Sunflower, and how long Ren Woxing has been practicing Star Absorbing, and how many people they have absorbed. In the end, he still couldn't beat a shemale who had been practicing the Sunflower Manual for several years? Here you get the complete Yang Scroll (isn't that better than the incomplete Yin Scroll?) Plus your own martial arts training. Not to mention invincible (after all, Yangjuan has just begun), then it's not that bad, right? An innate one? Only the same power level as those Blackstone Assassins who slipped away? It is not difficult for a few outsiders to defeat an inside master with their skills, let alone several of the same rank. To sum up, it is very embarrassing to create such a rough and large amount of character strength. If the author writes in a cool way, he might as well just hide the fact that he is the best in the world in pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. If you are writing a slow-burning article such as tactics, you should detail the strengths and abilities of various characters. For example, in the current Qinglong, apart from introducing the same fourteen movements of the Ming Dynasty (I remember it was called this), does Qinglong have any other descriptions of martial arts? Referring to the original movie Flying Swords of Dragon Gate, Yu Huatian stepped on his toes and kicked up a stone, directly shattering the quilt inspired by the opponent's internal force and punching through the opponent's hat and decoration behind him. This one face-to-face very well portrays Yuhuatian's high strength in martial arts and his hidden image. Isn't this more fascinating than the words "innate master"? Seeing Duan Tianya, shouldn't it be "slash with one sword, his sword power is enough to split the boulder in front of him, it seems that he should be another innate level master." Is this more reasonable? Does it look more comfortable? A knight is not really a first-class player just by saying he is a first-class master. You must at least tell others how he is a first-class player. In the No. 1 Building in the world, everyone who can be called No. 1 In the world has their own reasons. Even the most lazy person in the world is the same. It's not just a matter of words. Tell others why. Finally, back to the issue of characters. There are so many characters nowadays. Although the appearance and plot arrangement are very interesting, there are indeed some surprises. But the problem is also what I mentioned before. The character creation is not full enough, and it can even be said to be a bit hollow. You can't let readers rely purely on past movies and TV shows to imagine what kind of character this is. Instead, you should use your own ideas and descriptions to create a character that appears on paper. For example, Hokusai, what fascinates people should not be that her actor is powerful, but that you give this character the charm she deserves in this work. I dare say that the reason why many readers do not think Hokusai is superfluous is simply because of the actor. There are too many characters, especially those whose characteristics are too prominent. There are too many characters. Now, instead of sharpening these characters, they have been flattened. Compared with stuffing it all in, it is far less fascinating to unlock it bit by bit and outline it bit by bit. For example, the author wrote about the three major factory owners. These three people can definitely come one by one. Wang Zhi, Liu happy, and Cao Zhengchun can definitely act as opponents to restrain the protagonist. If these people are shaped well, the final effect will be that no matter how windy or rainy you are, I will stand firm. Doesn't it also better create an invincible protagonist? Nowadays, a group portrait, a character who can make half a TV series with just three singles, is not much different from a cannon fodder on the roadside. There is also the death of Gu Santong. If he didn't know that Cheng Shifei was his son and didn't know about Su Xin's affairs, he would have no desire to live and he would be dead if he died. But now that he has a son, he also knows some things about Su Xin. May I ask why you died so resolutely? On the contrary, Zhu Tiedan is now keeping an eye on Cheng Shifei. I don't think Gu San Tong is so stupid to mess with his own son, right? The invincible naughty boy would never think of getting a godson, something that he didn't have three hundred taels of silver. As for those people who were taken in, with the intelligence capabilities you described at Hulong Villa, would it be impossible to find out that these people were not dead at all? Isn't it difficult to find the head of Xichang? Won't a few eunuchs with ulterior motives not pay attention to this matter? After all, the protagonist is a thorn in their side. In the end, a few flowing narratives were discarded... And no flaws were mentioned in the follow-up. First of all, you clearly know that the plastic surgery doctor is here, why don't you give these people plastic surgery? Then can't he be dragged out openly? A lot of the content and plot are too rushed because the author's ideas are too big. There are so many characters and so many plots to tell, it's too urgent. Storytellers must not be impatient and write step by step, bit by bit. The more characters are borrowed from ready-made characters, the more they need to be made flesh-and-blood. Otherwise, even if the idea is very good, the follow-up work will still be weak. As for whether the author is in the mood to read my words or whatever, feel free to do so.

Beautiful pictures

In fact, I have always had some suggestions for the author regarding the ranking of martial arts. There are too many talents. In fact, too many people are just masters of outsiders throughout their lives. For example, Jin Yiwei Qinglong, although strong, is far from being able to release his true energy, but even if he relies purely on martial arts moves and physical training, he is still enough to be considered a first-class master. You don't even need to take such a long step to become a martial arts prodigy. What's more, having true energy inside doesn't mean it's better than practicing external skills alone. Now it's all innate, it feels so embarrassing. You have to know that in so many martial arts dramas, even if the protagonist always has internal strength, he will die. But it can be said that more than 60% of the people in the martial arts world are only at the level of external martial arts. As for things like inserting stones with your fingers, you can still practice it with simple external skills. Secondly, why are magical secrets so fascinating? Isn't it because those martial arts can either make a qualitative change in a person in a short period of time, or can make a person the best in the world? In the end, instead of saying that the protagonist has just learned the Sunflower Manual and just started, let's say which technique he originally learned. If you want, just say that he hasn't finished practicing it, but after finishing it, he is great, and the result is innate? Or did you just break through? Then he forcibly added a bunch of outside masters to the inside to create an innate talent. 23333 Nurture, innate, master... Do you know what this looks like? The noun rankings of first-rate, second-rate... Masters mentioned repeatedly in garbage articles, this kind of segmentation is too watery. Then we have to deal with the problem of integrating so many martial arts worlds at once. Instead of writing such a complex story, it is far better to write a few characters with a little detail and make them stand out. Nowadays, the characters are drawn one by one like a revolving door, but the creation of each character, except for the main ones, is too facial makeup. Especially when three big eunuchs were pulled out at once, the result was that they didn't have any special features at all. Fortunately, many people have watched movies and TV shows with these characters, otherwise these would be completely redundant. When it comes to martial arts classification, even if Zhu Tiedan did not absorb the internal strength of Cao Zhengchun and the Four Ghosts of Xiangxi, it was enough to move mountains. The result was a grandmaster level? Although you have to balance the characters in several worlds together, but this forcefully smooths things out, you might end up adding that there is a difference between a master and a master. Is this interesting? Do you know what a small boss is, a big boss is, and the final boss is? The fusion of the martial arts world does not give you a balance of combat power, but one opponent after another with different stages of martial arts. Although many characters come in and out, giving readers a lot of surprises, it is really easy to be disappointed if none of them appear well. Furthermore, the large number of characters who are like easter eggs in the early stage are really unfriendly to some readers who are not very exposed to martial arts dramas. (For example, Wulin Gaiden, not to mention Wulin Gaiden itself is very confusing about the setting of force.) The above is my personal opinion, please forgive me.

The eunuchs of the Ming Dynasty only cut balls, not sticks. When men grow older, they are stimulated to become engorged. This is a physical instinct. An innate master should be able to take the initiative to carry Qi and blood. The protagonist can carry Qi and blood by himself to stand up. Although he cannot reproduce offspring, he should have no problem enjoying happiness.

Sheng Yayu

A woman who looks good even in a sack

I wonder why the male protagonist is with Concubine Wan Gui later. . . There must have been people who didn't like Concubine Wan Gui, so they just gave up, but after all, when the male protagonist traveled through time, it was set that Concubine Wan Gui and her original body had been in the palace for many years, and everyone was a traitor, so this was not a big problem. But the male protagonist saves the emperor, and Concubine Wan Gui is equivalent to having a spouse. Although he knows that the emperor must not die for the male protagonist and Concubine Wan Gui at this moment, how does the author plan to arrange for the male protagonist and Concubine Wan Gui to be together naturally? But don't spend the day with the hero and the emperor at night. Cao Cao won't be able to stand it either, and the book will come to an end.

What's wrong? What's missing from my power? Quickly straighten the heroine!

Hehe, Sheng Yuya, Wan Guifei, and Hokusai are all top-notch. Hey hey hey, drive a big car

The protagonist is a eunuch, and it seems that the author is also a eunuch.

Xichang

You are already a eunuch at the beginning. It would be a pity not to practice the Sunflower Book. It will make no sense to anyone who has no concept of martial arts. 😁😁😁😁

Hokusai

It's a hodgepodge. This book won't last.

Eunuch! Can it grow out in the future? Otherwise, many people will not be able to stand it.

It looks good, but the eunuch doesn't actually have a sense of empathy... I'll let you know when it grows back.

When will the protagonist return to being a man?

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