
Genshin Impact: The Adeptus of Liyue
原神之璃月道人
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- Completed
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- 1.6M Words
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- Gaming
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- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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Reading this novel made me truly feel the evil nature of class society. The protagonist is a good person, and only a good person. He cannot betray his own class, and he has never thought about betrayal. He is indeed a capital. He is like Batman, who is the most ideal capitalist in the West. They work hard to make money and donate money, but Gotham City becomes more and more sinful and a backwater. Because in the process of making money and donating money, his strength is actually growing, which causes other people's capital to be constantly plundered by him. Although the protagonist dreams of making a big cake, he has political power above capital, which results in inevitable accumulation of capital. Whether explicit or implicit. As a Tianshu star, the protagonist does not distinguish between public and private affairs. He binds the Gui family to Liyue's education industry and draws the immortal into the same class as him. This is using his own power to slowly erode the power of Qixing. In the same way, this is how the current shell of the Amarica government came to be. At the very least, in the original Teyvat, Qixing made a clear distinction between public and private affairs, and had no delusions about using power to accumulate more capital for its own family. Even Ningguang doesn't have a family. The Feiyun Chamber of Commerce, the largest chamber of commerce in Liyue, has nothing to do with Qixing. Keqing just happens to be born as a eldest lady, and her seven stars are not hereditary, but are real abilities. In short, this book's description of the capitalist class is very uncomfortable, and I can't stand it anymore.
The author is thinking about character cards, meow. I have a picture of the heroine Zhang Shenhe. The author must not be ignorant, meow
I haven't finished reading it, but there are a few minor points. 1. As for the settings of Teyvat High Dimension, the world of trees and seas is just a transmission. This can already be said to be a game setting, but you just made a second creation. After all, that part is really outrageous, and his power setting is really exaggerated. Second, the setting of Liyue is also very mysterious. The staff can't do anything, and Xuanmen is hopeless. The protagonist seems to have done a lot of things after becoming the Seven Stars, but almost nothing is reflected. The biggest impression is that he has a bad temper. Without the Linzi Jue, which is the Qingxin Curse, he can't control his temper. Who can be stupid enough to scold his own gua, and a gua with no intelligence offends you? Did it allow you to travel through time? There is no intuitive manifestation of the reform of the military, and there is no intuitive manifestation of the establishment of schools. It is like Schrödinger's cat. You create it but not create it. Education, a century-old plan, should be slower, but not at a crawl. Third, character setting. As we all know, MiHoYo is all about character setting in addition to the plot. Ningguang's bottom line is also very strange. A person who can smash the Qunyu Pavilion twice is cold-blooded. He regards the lives of good people as expendable interests. Are you sure you want to write a supreme leader who symbolizes ZG like this? MiHoYo has gone to strengthen Zhongli! Fourth, the emotional line, not many authors can write it in a year anyway, so I'm used to it.
It's boring. There's something really wrong with Chapter 51. Where did the protagonist's brain go? Even if you are seeking revenge, you can't just come and knock him down physically. How serious a diplomatic incident is this? In Liyue City, a bank was robbed out of personal vendetta. Liyue has laws. To rob a foreign bank, it would not be too much to arrest and behead the protagonist. I have never seen such mindless operation! The protagonist is not from Liyue who traveled through time. At least he has some brains, so he wouldn't be like this because of some inheritance. It's boring. It looked good at first, but it turns out that the author still likes to follow the old routine of rushing forward without thinking, so I can only run away. Since you, the author, have decided not to read the comments and follow your heart, just write it yourself for fun. I'll run away.
Wife
There is something wrong with the timeline of this book. The original author mistakenly entered the book and I withdrew it.
How can you just say that you can sacrifice your own children?
From what I saw here, it is actually very good, the plot is very reasonable, and the characters are all standing up. But one thing I don't understand is why Xue Lian said the words of sacrificing her children so easily. How could a Liyue mother (set in China) say such words of sacrificing her own children in just half a year? In such a long history, I have seen sacrifices for interests, sacrifices for living lovers, and never seen sacrifices for dead lovers. Obviously, in the previous article, the image of a mother who loves her son was created, but in the end, there was a line about sacrificing the child. It is not incomprehensible to join the fools, but I really can't understand the change in this aspect. What I wrote before was very good, but now I really can't accept it. Express your feelings and regrets. After all, it's not easy to have fan fiction that you can read these days. Cherish it.
Wife
😍😍😍
Nothing is gone, Shenzi Zhuanwu is crooked, the character has a guaranteed minimum draw of more than 80, do you know how I got here
What is the plot around Chapter 50? The style is just like jumping from National Geographic to Qiong Yao drama. I am speechless.