I Hang up in the World of Martial Arts to Retire

1 Is strength. Many authors despise Shuangwen, but they themselves cannot write Shuangwen. A very important point in the upgrading practice article is how strong the protagonist is, why the protagonist is strong, and what makes the protagonist stronger than others? The author obviously didn't write this well. 2. The protagonist does good things. This is the same as the protagonist not having a high IQ, as it will be difficult to be convincing enough. Good people and wise men are best left to supporting characters to do 4 is military. The more detailed the history and military of martial arts novels are, the more loopholes there will be. It is recommended to use strengths and avoid weaknesses 5 is a routine. Routines are moves. A strong person will only become more powerful if he uses strong moves. If you are not Xiao Feng, don't always think about using Taizu Changquan. For example, a peer from another world integrates memories and emotions to strengthen readers' emotional identification with the protagonist. The mystery of the womb solves the problem of the protagonist's childish behavior. The advantage of this book is the description other than character interaction. However, the half-text and half-white writing style makes the protagonist's mother look a bit like a storybook character, and it is difficult for the novel to have the pleasure and smoothness of martial arts.

Wow, I really didn't expect that my character would be chosen by the author. Although it is a bit different from what I had in mind, I am still very happy. To be honest, having my own character like this has greatly increased the sense of immersion. To express my excitement, I will not read the pirated version of this book, hahahaha

I feel like I haven't seen a novel in this martial arts style for a long time, especially one that is well written. At first glance, this novel seems to be in the classic Jin Yong style, but there are easy-to-understand narrative descriptions of modern online novels between the lines. It combines classic martial arts and modern online novels. I like it very much and support the author. Come on.

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Everyone, this book is not an upgrade stream, and it won't be cruel, but it won't have the excitement of constantly upgrading and making breakthroughs. As I grow older, I slowly experience trivial matters in the world of politics, the military, and ordinary daily life, from the age of 12 until my death. During this period, the strength will increase according to the circumstances. If you give it a hang, you will have a guaranteed strength, so you won't be weak. However, the hang is limited, so you won't be too invincible. Don't expect too much. It depends on the heroes who have a good time. I'm sorry, you know.

As far as I can see, the biggest problem with this book is that it is selling dog meat over sheep's heads. The title of the book must have nothing to do with the content of the book. I believe that many readers are attracted by hanging up for retirement. I initially thought it was an invincible Dihua novel, or a daily novel, but I ended up seeing a standard martial arts novel that is more than 0 years old. It's a chivalrous novel. The main character is a teenager, practicing martial arts, joining the army, and enlisting in the army. I guess I will write about the main character doing meritorious service, coming to the capital, and then marrying the princess. I can't see the content of Goldfinger at all. The plot is awkward, but the writing is just okay. The author wants to write exquisitely, but he is not capable enough. Coupled with the title of the book, it seems nondescript.

It's not that I was fine in the past, and then I went to join the army and fight with more than 30 pieces. . . . Have you forgotten the title of your book? The recommendation votes have been given out early. Farewell.

Solemn reminder: The title and content of the book are completely inconsistent. And the protagonist is quite positive. Not recommended for people with low poison resistance.

If you think this is book poisoning, just leave it under this rant. I feel like I was poisoned by going to the battlefield. It's obviously about hanging up and retiring, but the question is also about the result. Even if you go directly to the battlefield, you are still fooled. Then why did hanging up become desperate?

I saw the title of your book. Since you have chosen Gou, don't waste it. The title of the book is so Gou, and then you go to war! I'm speechless! If you hang up your phone all the time to retire, and you can still watch it until you are thirty years old, and you go out to wander around before your martial arts are perfected, as a modern person, you will not know how to save your life. As a modern person, it is almost impossible to treat the ancient people as human beings, and generally treat them as NPCs. For them, your life is in danger. I can't understand the author's character design for the protagonist! I was so stubborn at first, but then I started to be lazy!

The title and content of the book are too different, and then we came to read the book based on its title, which resulted in a huge sense of disparity and different tendencies. Please change the title of the book.

To be honest, I was discouraged several times by this title. I hate fast food and cool articles. I used to like them, but then they became boring and the same. Later, I have been pursuing books with excellent writing, so when I saw this title, I subconsciously thought it was a quick and enjoyable book. I recommended it several times and ignored it several times. One day, today, I discovered that the reason why the system recommended it was based on a relatively literary novel that I had read. I was curious and felt that it was not like a one-sided simple fast food novel. So I watched it. In the book reviews, I found that everyone thinks this book is selling itself off. The title of the book does not match the way of writing. The title is a fast-food novel, and the content is more stylish. However, everyone still feels that the various descriptions and dialogues are not good. However, it can be seen from the words in the text that the author has a good literary background, and I think this is enough. People will make progress, and the author will one day write a book that satisfies most people.

The author is probably young, but his writing style is too immature, and he wants to imitate ancient styles, which makes it very embarrassing. It is better to increase his vocabulary first. Secondly, the author himself has no life experience and thinks many things too complicated, which makes the protagonist very slow to learn anything. He still has a magical sound after learning the piano for several months. Anyone with a normal IQ can master the fixed repertoire after learning the piano for a few months. However, he needs to practice hard in the later stage and make a cup of tea. After a few months, you can learn it after just two hours of making tea. This kind of humanities subject is incredibly difficult.

In this series, the indigenous protagonist has to wear a time-travelling skin. It's disgusting.

Oh, the father of the protagonist's family died, and his brother went to Lulong fortress, which was likely to be captured, and then the eunuch wanted to take the protagonist there to "support" 😓 The protagonist's mother was left behind in the co-authoring, right, but a normal person would not do such a thing of exterminating children and grandchildren. This is to annihilate the protagonist's family. The governor of the family, so blatantly offending people😓 went to war, and even brought gold plating. He wrote that it was very dangerous. If the city was not captured and the barbarians chased and destroyed them all, it would be a good time. It's so poisonous. In ancient times, all the male relatives of a family were conscripted. You might as well write that the protagonist's family was sent to the army😓

Brother, why don't you change the title of the book... It doesn't match the content. The target audience is different...

First, the content does not match the title. I hung up and retired, but the protagonist went to the battlefield and fell in love with Hu Renmang not many chapters later. After practicing martial arts for three years, he immediately passed it. What's the point of practicing piano for the protagonist? It has basically not been used since. Three years of martial arts training, the main character has a century-old family, why is there no other content description, Lantern Festival Lantern Festival, Double Ninth Festival Climbing, Spring Outing in March, etc. If you know that you are writing about Jianghu, you can't write anything else. Then how can you support yourself, play the piano, and learn the piano? Secondly, Jianghu is less about fighting and killing, and more about human nature and sophistication. After the Hu people broke through the border, how outrageous was it for a county magistrate to recruit troops to rebel? Then the protagonist did it directly without communicating with various forces in the city? Since the protagonist's mother is also going to war, why isn't there a plot where the mother sends messages to the major families before the gathering? If you didn't write it, I feel it's unreasonable. After that, you opened the warehouse and released grain directly? You are the head of a century-old family in Ninghe. You can't tell that you are a time traveler from other places. Why should the current thinking be substituted here again. Are you not directly confronting the small family? How will others treat you after that? It's like a prodigal thing. Since the protagonist is a clean and tidy Jianghu man, why does the author arrange the identity of a child of aristocratic family? Overall, the writing is pretty good. But there are contradictions everywhere. The title and content are contradictory, and the identity and behavior of the protagonist are contradictory. There is basically no human connection and sophistication, and the beating of salsa runs through the whole text. It's not a cool article, and the content doesn't make sense. It can be said to be a YY article written by the author himself.

The writing style was really good before more than 30 chapters, but why did the ratings plummet after more than 30 chapters? 1. Because the eldest brother has already joined the army, and there are two men in the family, one of whom is still a minor and has joined the army, there is a flaw in the logic. The previous deadly battles between the armies in the prairie tribes already had illogical logic, and you used the method of deus ex machina to force the end. Continuous illogical logic in a short period of time is very discreditable, not to mention that the previous illogical logic was forcibly overcome by you using deus ex machina. It was originally a matter of losing credibility. The second time you appeared, your credibility has dropped to a freezing point. People no longer trust you. They feel that you cannot produce good works, and your logic is likely to be illogical in the future. 2 Because the title of the book is Hanging Up and Retirement, it attracts book lovers who are interested in daily life and farming. The title of your book should be long-lasting and leisurely. But since you have climaxed one after another and made a template for a cool article, you should put a dozen or so chapters of daily life in the middle. Don't be afraid that daily life will drive people away. Most of the readers with this kind of name are interested in daily life. That's all, the above can be referenced, but I think it is better for the author to present some of his own things.

Please note that any book with leisure and retirement in the title is a passive struggle for hegemony. This book is about hanging up at the beginning and directly participating in the national war for hegemony later.

The next two days are very busy, and it may be even busier in the first month... There may not be much more by then, so I would like to apologize to everyone in advance. In addition, I am a novice at writing, and this book is a sloppy work. The subsequent plot can develop freely, and I can write whatever comes to my mind. (PS: I know my writing is not good, so please don't remind me anymore. Just read it for fun. If you like it, give me a free recommendation. If you don't like it, just abandon it... I am embarrassed to ask for monthly tickets and rewards. It would be best if this book can make a living for me. If not, just treat it as love and let it go~) Finally... Warriors and seniors, Happy New Year!!!

Writing a book can lead to personal attacks, it is really rare in the world... Did I open your mouth and force-feed you poison? Too bad to write? Have you eaten your rice?

Everyone has their own preferences for radishes and greens. If you don't like them, just turn right when you go out. The one with more starting points is what you like, so there is no need to nibble on the greens here. Book circles and comment areas are not the place to spread hostility. Be careful what you say and just complain. Anyone who curses will be given a red card and left.

Can it be a bit plainer? It's either fighting or preparing for war. Are you talking about a group of martial arts warriors or an empire fighting for hegemony? If you are serious about martial arts, just write about martial arts and talk about martial arts. If it doesn't work, you can just tease the heroines. Don't imitate what Jin Yong wrote. A great warrior serves the country and the people. Keep it simple. Since ancient times, heroes and the imperial court have been opposed to each other. If you don't take the martial arts exam and join the imperial court, why are you writing about so many border battles? Are you going to lead your hometown rebels to compete in the world?

My name is fw If any warriors are interested in appearing as heroes and demons in this book... Bring your name and report to this building. Randomly selected to appear~~ It would be even more wonderful if it could be paired with a few elegant and domineering poems~~~ Don't ask me why I don't make it up myself... Hey, I'm just lazy~