My Life Has Gone Astray

I feel like the first 20 chapters are still readable, and can be said to be exciting, but the music in the later chapters falls flat from the beginning. Then I made a movie again. . . . Water again. There is no passion anymore, and it no longer matches the title of my novel. There is no sense of gap like before.

This book comes from the mortal bones. As I said, it is all ordered. Although I don't really like the subject matter of this book, Fan Gu You. I haven't read a few chapters, but I hope to see you write about other topics.

In the next chapter, I plan to make an action movie with only fighting and no plot, focusing on showing off my skills. But because the protagonist's experience in practicing martial arts is so scientific, you can really keep fit and practice martial arts. It has become a popular science documentary about martial arts and fitness. Won the documentary award😁 To make a documentary, I found a scientist, and the result was to recreate the long-dusted history of the Republic and become a patriotic education. I stopped making movies and engaged in catering. The restaurant closed down in three months, and my tongue is out. Engage in animation, but animation is not popular. The self-made animation engine has become a best-selling game. The degree of freedom is extremely high. Classic sandbox game. And in order to facilitate creation at that time, low image quality was Minecraft, and high image quality was a high-end engine, which could make various large-scale games.

Chapter 28, as far as my current senses are concerned, the author's writing is a little impressionistic and a bit abstract.

The idea is very good, but what do you say about your writing? It's so procrastinating that you treat the branch plot as the main plot and it's endless.

I understand the exaggeration technique, but this is outrageous and overdone, and the protagonist's knowledge of many professions is wrong, and the plot logic is full of loopholes and a mess. I'm curious about what success this book will achieve by putting it on the shelves, and how many people will be willing to pay for it.

It's painful to write! An idea can support you in writing twenty chapters, but it cannot allow you to write a complete story or a complete book. You can be considered an author who has written two million words. Next time, let's make an outline and write the main line first, and then slowly polish the details, okay? If this book hangs, let it hang!

It was my first time to read a novel of this type, and my impressions were flowing. The novel was very urgent, and the text content was very urgent. It was fast-paced and I turned the pages while reading. The 95-chapter novel took me more than 20 minutes without skipping chapters. It successfully developed my speed reading skills.

After seeing 144, I don't want to read anymore. It's the first time I saw the devil and changed Tang Bohu to write so many chapters of chronicles, and it kept making me laugh.

The writing is too abstract, and it doesn't reflect the protagonist's work at all. Just like if you say a girl is very beautiful, and people ask you why she is beautiful, you just say she has two eyes, a nose, and a mouth.

Don't watch it with your brain. Don't watch it with your brain.

The front part is pretty good. It writes about variety shows in large sections after joining V, and writes about those who participated in variety shows from various angles. Moreover, the writing is clumsy and ugly. I don't know how many people have been persuaded to quit. I, a fully subscribed reader, can't stand it. The author probably doesn't care about grades.

I want to say that music does not sound better than who can play it faster, otherwise the market will be full of songs with faster and faster rhythms, and music competitions will just be about who can play faster. The author has gone astray.

All I can say is that the protagonist is sick, and it's not serious. Doing things is completely out of your head, just come up as soon as you think of it, just think of it and do it without any planning. Is the movie yours alone? If you were really alone and you couldn't go to the cinema, would you believe that all the hot searches blocked you? I can't even find your movie online. There is no underlying logic at all, which means that social common sense is not perfect.

This book has been going astray from the joy of the heart, which really reflects the title of your book. To be honest, whether you are introducing composing music, making movies, or learning martial arts, etc., You write very well, very stream-of-consciousness. I don't know if you did it deliberately or because your writing skills are limited. People who read it always want to skip the chapter. The result is that the most eye-catching part of your novel is these funny stories involving cross-professionals. However, your writing style is really poor, you just mention them all in one stroke, and each short story is told in a straightforward manner, which makes people less and less interested in reading. Some suggestions: 1. The focus is not right. Look at what you introduced about composing music earlier. Several articles focused on the atmosphere of water music and the difficult action skills of composing music. These contents really do not add points, but should lead to the humorous stories between people triggered by the music. In other cases, such as playing games, the protagonist's awesome operations are mentioned in one stroke, and the results are directly given. What should the readers see? 2. The ability of the system really needs to be improved. I am jealous of talents. To be honest, it is a poisonous point. It is really not as good as other people's Dihua Naobu Monster. 3. The content is terrible. It mentions everything but nothing. In recent chapters, it talks about various awards over and over again. Is there any use? I don't think there's anything outstanding about these pictures. They're all poisonous and make me feel tired.

The content is pretty good, but it looks weird. It's not as engaging as other novels. Does anyone know? The pace feels too fast.

Zhen Ji, please drink water. Either you are enjoying yourself or drinking water. By the way, I will add some movie plot. I can't stand it anymore. Author, you must be a singer.

Don't write lol, the water here is very deep, it's not just a simple operation or something. When I meet Pan Sen, how can I break the mercury purification in one set without mercury purification? This is just an example, so it's best to think carefully. After all, everyone's research on lol is too deep and the writing is too divorced from reality. Many people will not be able to stand it. The plug-in is just an embellishment of the novel, not the soul of the novel. It is meaningless to make pigs succeed. Come on.

Just because the protagonist goes astray doesn't mean that the author just wrote it casually. The content is very scattered, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. The setting is very good, but it really has no focus, like a stream-of-consciousness novel.

The idea is very good, but what the hell are those thump thump thumps of yours? Unless it is a familiar melody, the reader will not understand what you want to express at all. Anyway, the only thing I think about is water. . . Then there is the plot of the movie, which is so detailed. After reading the first chapter, I basically know what you are going to write in the following chapters. . .

I can only say that the author is too serious about making fun of himself

It feels like I'm keeping a running account, it's so uncomfortable to see

It's been 6 days since I stopped updating. Is this a eunuch?

As I read this book, my mind went blank.

The first movie idea is actually quite good, and I can continue to use new skills to develop cool points. If I keep it up, I should actually have some results. After that, it is very boring, the connection is not good, the cool points are not clear, and the writing style is a bit awkward. Basically, one chapter passes in three seconds, and I can't watch it by the forty or fifty chapters.

After reading a little bit, I feel like it's very confusing. There are too many monologues. Many of them would be better described in dialogue, and it's really a bit messy.

I take it for granted. Is there such a thing as a minimum response time? There are limits to keyboard input. This thing is theoretically above the limit of human reaction and is impossible for humans to reach. You can use the key wizard to try the game and see what the difference is between pressing the keyboard once and twice per millisecond. There is no difference, the game has theoretical limits and is worth it. ​​The rate of fire is 10. No matter how fast you press the mouse and keyboard, it is impossible to break through 10.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The idea and subject matter are quite interesting, but unfortunately, like the book I Can See Bugs, the plot is out of control and I can't continue writing.

After reading the previous part, I thought it was quite interesting. I didn't expect the eunuch.