Flowers of Rebirth Are Like Water

Only 4 heroines? This is not your style, Chonglou😎

Ah, this, although it is roughly the same as the layman's return file, it also has its own things. The layman's return file is too old, so it would be nice to renovate it.

Suddenly I discovered that this app is full of malice towards trumpets. It actually requires recharging. The points my trumpet spent watching ads can't actually vote.

The writing style is very childish, even very middle-of-the-road in many places. The part about making tea with purple sand in Longjing is even more ridiculous. It can be seen that the author is not very old and has low experience and level.

It's so well written, don't be a eunuch.

The writing is just rubbish, there is nothing written about love, and starting a business is like sleepwalking, and it is not good enough. Waste of my time

Wouldn't this be the right thing to accept my aunt and tell her what happiness is, for the rest of my life?

I've read 40 chapters, 80% of which are about dormitories. Are you working on J? Can you write about career or emotional lines? The roommates are just tools to provide support to the protagonist. Does it require so much writing? Do we need to assign girlfriends to everyone? Do we also need to provide them with jobs to support them? Who is the protagonist?

I always feel that there is something wrong with the current rebirth novels. If you don't just write that the male protagonist was a scumbag in his previous life and had no emotional entanglements, you always write about his first love in his previous life and how he can't forget it. Why, if you find more sisters for her after she is reborn, will she be happier than in her previous life? I also love to read harem stories, but I can't get them in reality. A bit of yy in the novel is not too much, but I personally feel that a harem can never be said to be a deep love. It can only be said that possessiveness is greater than love.

Tang Wenjuan felt that that period was like forcibly subduing her wits, and the room was given out of nowhere, which is not to say that it shouldn't be given. This is completely contrary to your initial character design. How could such a person accept a house from his daughter's classmate? And the reason is even more unreasonable. The protagonist exchanges a well-decorated house worth more than one million yuan for her old shabby house worth hundreds of thousands, because she is waiting for demolition. Don then accepted the rationale. . .

It's only been a few months since school started and I can earn some money by selling books, so I can attract seniors to quietly become mistresses in the background? If you have a weak emotional foundation, you will develop a harem openly. You don't need money or reputation. The key point is that the two seniors agree, how big are you? Writing software costs 10 million, and you are still working hard and scheming with security guards to sell books. What are you doing? It looked good from the beginning, but something didn't feel right at first glance. The development of career resources was outrageous, the relationship scenes were baffling when the harem was directly revealed, and the slap-in-the-face plot was a bit old-fashioned. Of course, the characters look good in the early stages, and the text reads smoothly.

This plot is really outrageous. The protagonist also wants to promote Sanwei Bookstore to the whole province and country. This is not something with any technical content. You can just follow others' imitation, but you are still waiting for you to go to other cities and provinces to sell books?

If you fucked your aunt and fucked her mother, it would be too much. The point is, you are almost 40 years old. You said that it is a bit outrageous to be with someone who is 6 years older. Now, it is too much to fuck with someone who is almost 20 years older.

Most people probably want to watch daily love scenes, but the author just writes boring pretense and slap-in-the-face plots, which is not pleasing to the eye.

Selling a book and scheming with a security guard to become a grandson is really disgusting to me. Brother, do you want to be realistic? Why are you writing about rebirth? We read novels to see how you teach us how to be grandsons. I was already in a bad mood and wanted to read novels to relax. Your breath makes me feel sick to my stomach. Next time I write a book and find out why we hang you

Chapters 14 to 16 of Poison, I was indeed reborn, but I didn't bring my brain with me when I was reborn. There is a reason for my poor grades, and I don't want to read the rest!

To be honest, what I write is just anecdotes. It's normal to have bad grades. It was written in a novice way many years ago, but it is still written like this and no one can read it. It has a clichéd plot and I like to fill it with water. I suggest you just cut it out.

I counted, there are 7 heroines, they take turns every week, one every day, and no one is repeated for a week. Can your waist bear it? One drop of semen and ten drops of blood, bleeding every day, how come the protagonist is still alive~

I just read the second one. If it can be of this level later on, I will definitely become a god in one book. The first two are as good as Chen Scumbag. Keep the title of God waiting

It's already 1.8 Million words, so it's good to speed up the process and finish it. It's okay to have hundreds of thousands of words, but it's a pity that it's too many.

I feel that the author's previous book had better results 😥. Come on, it's fully booked

Yes, yes, every heroine has her own personality, and unlike some novels where the heroines are all written as bitches. They have not experienced much with the protagonist and have not known each other for a long time. All the heroines love the protagonist fiercely.

"Hello, my name is Tang Xiusi, the emerald golden building, embroidered into singing and dancing clothes. The fireflies in the evening palace are quietly thinking, and the solitary lamp picks up the sleepless thoughts." "My name is Sheng Tang." "Hey, why is your QQ signature so sad? I heard from your friend that you have a very high score and should not be admitted to a good university. " "You filled in the wrong application." "You, how did you fill in the wrong application?" "Eh..." "Don't be discouraged. I will give you special tutoring in the future. You can come to our Han University when you take the postgraduate entrance examination. Life will always be unsatisfactory. As the saying goes, my talents will be useful. , I'll come back after spending all my money. Come to our Han University for the postgraduate entrance examination, and we'll be classmates together!" "The postgraduate entrance examination…but" "It's nothing. Let's make an appointment every time after school, and I'll give you one-on-one tutoring. I'll improve my QQ signature! If you say..." "Look up to the sky and go out, how can I be a Penghao person?" "Yes, just use this, you have to believe in yourself, there will be no way out, and there will be a bright future." ... "I don't agree with you and Tang Xiusi being together." "Because. What?" "You want a car but not a house, can you give Tang Xiusi happiness?" "Auntie, I will be nice to her." "What's the use of being nice to her? Will she be happy if she leaves Tang Xiusi? Well, he is going abroad soon, you are not the same person." ... "Let's break up." "There is no reason, we are not suitable." "Is it me? ..." "Shengtang! What do you mean?" "We are really not suitable..." "No, no, we can make a down payment in the city in a year at most!" "You are talking nonsense. ! Don't make excuses, don't listen to my aunt's nonsense!" "Goodbye..." "No!" "The message has been sent, but the other party refused to accept it." From then on, Sheng Tang's QQ signature was changed to"It's just a frown, but it's a concern."

It is inevitable that the ending will be bad. The water fantasy plot begins in the middle, and the Dragon King slaps him in the face for more than ten times in a row. I came to watch Urban Love.

Afternoon tea time

It has been fully booked, and I have given you the monthly pass for this month. I hope you can write it smoothly and the protagonist's relationship goes smoothly 🙏

The author has no writing skills, and the plot is extremely dragging. Anyway, everyone except the protagonist seems to be a fool. Every few chapters, someone pops up who looks down on the protagonist, and then it is so-called pretending to slap him in the face. This kind of plot is like feeding people a piece of history, swallowing it, and then giving them a bottle of milk. After it is over, some people feel that this kind of plot is very satisfying... The most poisonous part is not Senior Sister Liu's aunt, but her grandfather, the protagonist's teacher. Seeing his daughter humiliating his close disciple, he had to try to smooth things over. The protagonist said he knew Director Ding, and even doubted him, saying that if the protagonist lied, he would be severely punished. I bet this is a plot that a normal person could write. The previous article focused on describing how powerful this old man was, but in the end he was just like a mute watching the protagonist being humiliated all the time, and it was all over him. The protagonist already drove a million-dollar luxury car, and Senior Sister Liu's parents said they only rented it. So I went, and I couldn't even finish the meal without skipping a beat. A divine author, a divine plot. Read

This book is well worth reading. It is an urban harem story with clear emotional lines. It is a relaxing and enjoyable book to read, and it is also very funny. It is the kind of book that makes a smile naturally flow out of the corners of your mouth when you read it. There are also very funny parts that can make you laugh. It is not a brainless recommendation, but it is also slightly slow-growing. I started to recommend it after dozens of books were put on the shelves. As for the book reviews, some people said that the protagonist The plot of the security guard is a bit mindless, but in fact, this is not that big of a deal. This book is meant to be refreshing and relaxing, and it is really fun to read. It does not require you to use your brain to think about what the protagonist should do. If you don't believe me, you will definitely be attracted after reading the first two pages. The author is also very fast. In short, it is a book worth reading. Come on, author!

Book in full, don't let it down 🙂🙂🙂

Personally, I feel that the author has a good ability to control words, and if he persists, he has hope of becoming a god. After reading Chapter 200, I felt that the characters of the female characters in the book were well written, which is very good. Chen Hansheng's book can become a god. I think there are just a few points. The female supporting characters are vividly written and the plot is very exciting. I personally hope that the author won't be too abusive when accepting those women. I feel that in the end, except for the mistress, the others were quite abusive. In addition, I would like to talk about what I feel the author did not do well. The plot concept is a bit taken for granted. I will talk about the selling books I have seen now. Such a big school is being sold by a gangster with no background. Selling guidance books is a hugely profitable thing, how is that possible? The start of Chen Hansheng's express delivery was much more natural. After all, express delivery was an emerging industry at the time, and once it became large-scale, the goods were sold directly. I hope the author can do well in conceiving the plot, and it would be great for Chen Hansheng to write about business wars.