Siheyuan: I, Xu Damao, Have Completely Turned Black

Isn't Xu Damao a good person? Lou Xiao'e only got together with Shazhu after they got divorced, not to mention when they got married. You really haven't watched the plot, have you? My mother, how awesome is Qin Huairu? That's your rubbish. He's awesome, but I don't think he's that great. You haven't seen how powerful those white lotuses are in reality, have you? Qin Huairu is nothing in front of them

Good guy, the author is here to disgust people! You succeeded!

The author has a problem with his thinking. At the beginning, his wife did nothing and divorced her. You brought in the subjective thoughts of a time traveler. Besides, the reason for the divorce is yourself. And before the divorce, you went to find Qin Huairu. Qin Huairu didn't know what to do with it.

I don't know if it's a comment posted by a troll or something else, but this is just this book and this writing style?

What the hell is this? It's so annoying.

What do you think? It's a random arrangement. Lou Xiao'e never did anything extraordinary before her divorce. Instead, Xu Damao was messing around outside, and even stole other people's jewelry for takeout.

Was this written by a robot? Talking about a studio is an insult to the studio

Let's not talk about divorcing Lou Xiao'e, but you still teach the little bastard about pig's feet. Go and see how many people the bloody romantic little bastard has killed. How did you write this? ? The little bastards would pick up people at the entrance of the compound. In those days, there were sentries at the entrance of the compound, all armed with guns.

Not even the original Xu Damao, at least the original Xu Damao had his chicken stolen and was compensated 5 yuan!

This Siheyuan: Shazhu's Leisurely Life is almost exactly the same. Many chapters are directly copied, especially the chapters by Zhou Xiaobai. I don't know who copied whom.

Various sentences are unclear. This is the first time I have seen an article of this level. The expression ability of a kindergarten class

Lou Xiao'e only got together with Silly Zhu after her divorce. Well, it turned out to be inexplicable. The courtyard doesn't owe Xu Damao anything.

It's very special. I can say it. Can you change the words? Have you graduated from elementary school?

The sentences are not fluent, it feels like a primary school student's composition

How many "can say"s appear? Although the threshold for online writing is low, if you want to earn royalties, you must at least practice your writing. Fluent sentences are the most basic requirement.

I came to the comment area to ask Shen Nong to test the poison, but after reading it, it was nothing. Everyone was talking about the original work. If you like the original work so much, why would you come to read the fan fiction? Fan fiction is not the original work, nor is it a sequel. Fan fiction is a secondary creation based on some characters and some storylines in the original work. Is it necessary to be so serious? Why do you have to compare it with the original? If the fanfic can surpass the original work, then it is a purely literary creation, and it is not a fanfic, right?

I read 6 chapters of rubbish. If you don't call the police, you'll just be rubbish.

Even elementary school students can write better than this. That makes no sense.

It feels like... It's basically... Can be said like this... Because it's basically... Can be said... I'm speechless, Luo Liba is so embarrassed.

It looks really tiring. Is this the level of writing? Is there no threshold for starting?

The three views are notpositive

It's not a good thing in the first place. It turns black? Turns negative into positive? It becomes better? Nonsense.