Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Being Coveted by the Saint

Speechless, it's chapter 18. The junior brothers who fought in the previous chapters have all become Nascent Souls, and the heroine has become a god. But you told me that the main character who is the hope of the sect is still trying to break through the middle stage of Qi refining? He doesn't even have foundation building, is this such a pressure on his strength? The Demon Sect has raised an actor, and after raising resources for more than ten years, pigs have to build foundations, right? Why do you want to find a Qi practitioner to be an actor? Aren't you afraid of being slapped to death? And if you don't tell others how fast it takes them to become gods in ten years, then you tell them how fast it is for the protagonist to refine Qi and level up in one month. Convinced.

I'm so fucking speechless. Every time I write a plot about the two people interacting and flirting, I was looking forward to the next chapter, but I didn't write the next chapter and just skipped it. It's so disgusting. It's the most disgusting story I've ever read in a novel. Can it be changed? The more I read, the more I want to curse.

Whether it's praise or criticism, the author is thick-skinned and can handle it, as long as it's not mindless criticism.

Why do I feel like I'm asking the saint to calm down and follow up?

Is the protagonist too useless to consider strengthening? You have to rely on the heroine for everything, and you can't be a soft-boiled person. You are too good to be useful, and your relationship with the heroine has not made any progress.

The books my junior sister read made me laugh to death. They were so ridiculous that I liked them.

Withdrawn, the author will pay attention to the basic logic chain next time he writes a book.

The cultivation system is a bit fierce. If you are less than 20 years old and reach the realm of divine transformation, does it mean that the lifespan of a cultivator is about the same as that of a mortal?

Let me talk about my feelings after reading Chapter 8: It feels smooth and fast, as if I was tied to the outside of a high-speed train traveling in a straight line at a constant speed. In fact, the innovation point is not bad: real-time prediction of cheats + beautiful girl cheating, as long as it is not poisonous, it is basically a normal book. But after reading eight chapters, I felt like I was not reading a novel, but reading a novel outline. There is a serious lack of detailed description, psychological description, scenery description and background introduction. Even if I worry that I won't be able to attract readers at first, at least I'll introduce the levels of cultivation later (such as becoming a god at a young age), and other issues. And after reading Chapter 8, I haven't formed a concrete and distinct impression of the characters in the book. Personally, it is still a problem with the author's writing skills. He is not proficient in writing. If the author really wants to develop in writing novels, I suggest he write more. I am still very optimistic about the future.

I think the results will be better if I classify it as a light novel.

Don't poke or rub, nourish one hand and another

To be honest, the plot is basically the same routine. What's more annoying is the kind of fictional protagonist who has no real strength at all. It's true that if you read too many stories like this and you can guess the routines, you can write a relatively good novel yourself. This kind of subject matter is really not popular right now. Tired of seeing it.

I got it from the daily guide. After reading a few chapters, there's nothing too bad about it, but the male protagonist is a bit weak.

After reading Chapter 3, I regretted coming in.

I have read Chapter 63 and would like to say a few words Personally, I feel that the author's writing is a bit bland and cannot scratch the itch. Just speaking in human terms is not enough. The plot has little ups and downs, and there is no sense of substitution. Otherwise, why would there be a market for Xiaobai's articles? Some of those who came to read this book wanted to see the sweet love between the saint and the devil! Others just want to feel the pleasure of being chased by a saint. There are also some that I don't know what I want to see. But I want most of them all. Some people feel that there is no prioritization, either sweet love mixed with some fighting as an adjustment, or fierce fighting mixed with some love as a buffer. It's pretty good to have written that one, but the author also wants to write a sweet love story and a fierce battle, so both hands must be grasped, but neither hand is strong, which is a pity! Overall, it's a good book, but it's a bit bland! I like salty food and can't eat it. Only those who have written a book know that writing a book is not easy. Come on, author! Persistence is victory! Awesome!

Harem? Author, I feel that the women who appear are pretty good😁😁😁

I just read one and haven't finished it yet. I like this type of book. The demons are not necessarily bad guys. They just have different cultivation methods. It's normal for good and evil to not like each other when they fight. The plot needs to be developed. I don't like the kind of books where the demons are always bad guys and everyone shouts to fight.

At first glance, the characters in the book are created by the author himself. They are a bit thin and silly.

Come on, author, you have to hold it back in single-player, it's quite good.