Dragon Clan: Start by Summoning Eri

This author's novels have their own unique style, and those who like multiple female protagonists should like them. From the evaluation of Konoha Love The character creation is quite good, there are almost no weaknesses in this aspect, and it is quite stable, and the emotional rendering is extremely good. Let's talk about the plot The plot shaping is actually good. I feel that the author can write quite well in terms of plot, but it is too hasty. The author writes too hastily. Every plot foreshadowing can clearly make the readers feel, eh, it is another good journey, but as soon as the substitution begins, you find that, holy shit, this plot is coming to an end? It makes people feel extremely uncomfortable. At this point I must criticize the author. If the author has to make a choice between the heroine and the plot, you should first ensure the shaping of the plot, that is, you should reduce the heroine, and then enrich the plot shaping of the heroine. Instead of running away after teasing, and then there is basically no description of the heroine. If you write like this, you will not be able to retain readers. If you just like a character and then no longer love it, you will feel that you have been deceived. As for the setting of Gao Wuwen's upgrade, I won't talk about it. The setting cannot be said to be confusing, but it can be said to be full of loopholes. Of course, it is still novel. ………………………………………… As far as I can make an evaluation, the author's writing style is okay and the plot is excellent, but the writing is too hasty, the book starts too hastily, and he runs away after finishing the shot. He obviously has good writing skills and superb emotional rendering ability, but he cannot make the best use of them. If he can slowly calm down and write a novel with a complete world view and rich plot, he should have an extremely bright future. Instead of just chasing hot spots and playing gimmicks like a street guy, because I think he has the talent to be a great person, which is a bit exaggerated, but it is definitely not his upper limit now. {"NickName":"Xueyue Zuixin","UserId":187440101}

The Minotaur plot started directly afterwards, which was a bit disappointing.

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This book is okay for the first sixty or seventy chapters, but then it falls into a rut. What is the protagonist thinking about integrating abilities into combat? Is this something that no one in the past would have thought of? It's not something particularly difficult. Moreover, Eriki is indeed strong, but she is only strong in one thing, and that is her word spirit. Other than that, there's really nothing great about her. Later on, it felt like it was just trying to show off, and it was written that both the protagonist and Eriki were awesome.

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Xia Mi

It's very efficient, all the character cards are out!

Although Lu Mingfei is a defeated dog, which is a bit annoying. But after watching Dragons (I saw 4), I felt a little sorry for Lu Mingfei, who lost a lot and even traded his life to Mingze, but the little monster, senior brother... Seemed to have nothing to redeem him. I hope this article can be kind to Ming Fei.

Hualiyi

There are two female talents (add more female leads 🙂😰😍)

I feel that the author is obviously deepening the bond between Chu Zihang and Su Xi, and breaking the line between Chu Zihang and Xia Mi. This deepens the relationship between Xia Mi and the protagonist. . . I don't really want to have a harem, Eriyi deserves the best. I don't object even if I open it, but I feel a sense of separation.

Why don't you recruit more heroines 🤔 (Come on, more heroines, I want to watch Shura Field 😆)

I haven't watched Dragon Clan, but I've seen someone say "Xia Mi". Is that female character the heroine? If yes, can you not let the heroine have close contact with other men? If she is not the heroine, can you not describe her beauty?

Author, you are not going to do anything. Jörmungandr is the dragon spirit and Xia Mi is the human spirit, so Jörmungandr can form cocoons but Xia Mi cannot, right?

Xia Mi is perfect except for her breasts

It's too romantic. Is this a romance novel? It seems that there is no middle-class taste like Dragon Clan. I feel that Lu Mingfei's ending is more satisfying than the protagonist. So who is the protagonist?

It's too romantic and novelistic. . . . . 😅

Before the four this time, can you add some detail to the eight 😏🌹

Just look at the name🌹

Well, I want to ask book friends, does anyone know that Xia Mi said that she needs someone with the mark of Odin to fall in love with her? Then, before Xia Mi met the protagonist, did she have any relationship with Chu Zihang? π_π

How about this one? Her temperament is also quite hard to find

Please improve!

The writing at the beginning was good, but the writing got lost in the middle. I suggest you just read the first 150 chapters.

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Okay, okay, let me tell you why it feels so familiar. It turns out that Douluo was also written by you. I have to say that the author definitely has a side job.