Hogwarts Survival Simulation

I hope that the protagonist will kill all the centaur conservatives, because the centaurs want to kill the protagonist. If the author does not write this, but passes by this matter, this is a very poisonous point and will be very uncomfortable to read. Many people will definitely abandon the book.

So far, the writing is pretty good, especially the idea of ​​Lockhart's transformation. It can be said that the writing is quite beautiful. Watching him go from a negative character to being able to sacrifice for others is actually quite satisfying. In short, compared with other fan fiction, this book has some of its own ideas and is worth reading.

There are a bit few branch plots outside of the supporting characters and key plots. Now it seems that Hermione must be the heroine, because no girl except Hermione has a role. In fact, the only named women who appear on screen are: Hermione, Ironclad Hannah, the protagonist and Hermione's mother and Mrs. Weasley, Professors McGonagall and Sprout, Mrs. Pomfrey and Mrs. Hooch, and Ms. Ravenclaw (please let me know if there are any omissions). In addition, there is only one candidate for guessing the person who took the diary, so it can only be him. Except for Lockhart, Iron Triangle and the protagonists, everyone else lacks plot. If you look for it, only Hagrid has a slightly more plot. Malfoy only has a suspected plot but lacks a direct plot. The characters outside the focus of the field of view can be slightly assigned to the plot, otherwise the main line will be too obvious and direct.

Thanks to the book friends for their comments and suggestions. The author probably started reading the Harry Potter series of books in junior high school and read them over and over until high school. I used to always fantasize about what it would be like to travel to the magical world, and now I have a chance to write out the story in my heart. I believe that every book lover has his own magical world in his heart. We may have some differences on different issues, but I think friends who like Harry Potter must also love it in their hearts and look forward to the shining points of human nature: kindness, bravery, love and sacrifice. I also hope that the regret, pain and injustice can be changed. Although the author has limited abilities, he will try his best to present his thoughts to everyone. Finally, I hope you will support me a lot, please collect it, vote for it, and read it😊

The overall plot is still very good, but I feel that the author's desire to write out the plot in his heart is a little stronger. It might be better if the pace is slowed down a little, with more daily descriptions and detailed descriptions of the characters. Currently Hermione is 100% the heroine, but we can't force a cp just because the author likes it. Can we describe the scenes between the characters so that readers can feel the sweet and sour taste of love, which makes people want to eat it.

The genre is not bad, the beginning is very good, but it feels like it starts high and goes low. I originally thought that the golden finger was just a simulator and Ravenclaw's time magic. It was a bit boring to reveal the origin of the golden finger in advance. In addition, the protagonist does not have his own characteristics. He simply joins Harry Potter's team and then takes care of him like a nanny. The plot is still the same. There are no changes except for the addition of more people. His skills and knowledge are also very average except for the few skills learned on the simulator. In the end, a Gryffindor test was suddenly created, and then his combat power increased instantly. In short, the writing is okay and not toxic, but it would be better if it was more interesting and distinctive.

Am I the only one who thinks Granger is awkward?

I found that many book friends were a little confused as to why the protagonist didn't ask the teacher for help. They felt that it was a bit foolish not to ask the teacher for help even though he was about to die. I didn't write this clearly in the article. In fact, the protagonist is not a fool. Of course he tried to seek help from the teacher in nearly a hundred simulations, but these simulations still failed. This is because the plot has changed. The troll does not necessarily go to the bathroom, but may appear anywhere to attack the protagonist. So even if he told the teacher that Hermione was indeed out of danger, he would still die. He can't tell the teacher, I know this troll must kill me, please always protect me. Of course he also tried to do nothing, but the plot still changed. So the protagonist's idea is that instead of facing various new situations, it is better to confront him in the bathroom according to the plot, so that he is prepared. Of course, I have to admit that this paragraph does not describe the cause and effect clearly, but just put it in the previous simulation. This is my problem, but the protagonist is definitely not brainless 😔

Since elementary school magic, there is a simulator at the beginning of school, and I am so good. Let's not mention anything else. Trolls, simulated a hundred times, and died every time. Can't you bring a professor, find Dumbledore, and be assigned to Gryffindor? Is it really a no brainer? There is a way, just use the stupidest method. In order not to change the plot and plot, you have no brain.

Looking forward to the day when classmates call them "Little Grangers"

This is just one article, is it enough for anyone to read?

In fact, all admission items can be prepared in advance, and wands from other producers can also be used. Go to the entrance early to occupy the front carriage. The branch will be affected by the wizard's wishes, thus completely avoiding interaction with the relevant protagonists.

I think if the protagonist can levitate so much, why not levitate the troll?

At first I thought he was Hermione's brother or brother, but what happened? ? ? ? ? So disappointed, sir

Wo Ri, is it so exciting? Is the new routine so exciting? With so many possibilities, are you really not afraid that the writer will go bald just thinking about it? ?

Hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, update it soon, it's so good, I read it all in one go.

The author has opened a new book~ This time I should be able to finish the book normally without having to cut it again😂 Interested friends can take a look. If you like it, collect and vote for it and read it three times in a row~ Thank you for your support! The author will work hard to show a better story! Please collect it! Please vote! Please read it!

For the first time, I hope the author will be more knowledgeable and write the eighth chapter directly from the twenty chapters of other novels 😰

Before reading the fanfic, let me first ask, who is the heroine?

Are chapters 55 and 56 repeated?

The author is looking for a supporting role Haverts Mixed-blood poor Dark brown hair Wand·Black Walnut+Snake Nerve: dexterous and quick response Passionate and yearning for freedom, likes to party, and a master at adapting to the situation. He can be used in all major colleges; the working emperor, a second-hand trader between the college and Hogsmeade Village, can provide help to the protagonist. Knowing the world but not sophistication, hating hypocrisy and pretentiousness, very popular Conflicting personality, not excluding black magic, worshiping the strong and helping the weak. I like alchemy and magic text research, my intuition is very accurate, and I am a little genius in language classes and astronomy. When I am alone, I feel lonely and lack understanding (I need a love). I value friendship and am a bit arrogant I get three recommendation votes every day