In the Age of Magic Cards, I Have a Mysterious Game Console

The author himself is the number one fan of his own books

The IQ of this book is online. It is inevitable that a new writer will make some mistakes. Let me share my opinion. 1. Is the attitude of the two cards towards the protagonist towards God? If the miko is just a little greedy, the swordsman completely regards the protagonist as a tool god. If you don't pay attention to it later, it will be a huge poisonous point. Reading this chapter, it says that the author has also realized it. Just pay attention to it later. The protagonist's strength cannot be left behind. 2. The swordsman has already been in the early stage. It left a deep impression on me that the protagonist is treated as a tool. The author should change it. The plot is okay. It would be much better if she deletes her complaints about the protagonist, gives the protagonist a more respectful title, beautifies her utilitarian behavior, and adds some psychological clips of her devout faith in the protagonist. 3. The miko is more like a willful child (of course, in this chapter, someone said that she is green tea, which is true). In essence, the protagonist is used as a tool, but she feels much better than a swordsman. The author adopts the opinions in this chapter, which can change the reader's impression in the future And... Come on, update

He has not gained the memory of the original owner, and he did not start from a young age. How powerful is the protagonist in order to adapt to this changed world?

Doesn't the protagonist still have a fixed deck direction? It feels like the strength is entirely supported by the strength of those single cards. In fact, there is almost no deck linkage and blessing. The undead itself is very weak except for the strange moves and the background board. When can I switch to a deck with linkage?

Dragon Lady

Please collect it, please recommend it, and please don't keep books QWQ

The biggest problem with this book is water. Some things can be included in the works without having to repeat them all the time. In fact, Harmony is still not updated fast enough The duels in these few times are all based on the same routine. Start with the Undead Bones, and if you encounter restraints, use the sister card to kill instantly. The deck of the main character cannot be changed at the moment, but the deck of the supporting character can also write colorful points. Many secret realms can be completely passed. The card player just wants to play cards, and the cards can be obtained by sleeping. Also, I have never understood the mechanism of card playing. (Except for the second title and chapter 28, where there is a card draw, there seems to be no other duel) and it doesn't feel like a turn-based system. Both sides are operating at the same time. It's a bit like unlimited card throwing, so it's stuck. The meaning of the group is gone. Just use a high-intensity girl card to kill you instantly. As long as I can throw it faster than you, I will kill you instantly. The deck will only bring one card that can absolutely kill the opponent in an instant. It will be a king bomb at the beginning and a slap in the face with the ultimate move. The only limitations are the realm and the ultimate move. What! You have a shield and a face protector. My hands are faster than yours and I will use the King Bomb first. If you don't have it, the shield will be useless. What! If you have a passive shield, a slap in the face will trigger the shield. If I hit you with all my strength, you can't help but lose it. Although I only have one card, you just can't beat me. What! The deck must have 40 cards. Did you see that I have 39 whiteboard cards? Chapter 28 said that whatever cards are marked can be drawn. Personally, I think it is necessary to open a single chapter to explain the card-playing mechanism to readers like us who can read everything at a glance Finally, I would like to update it soon, the new year is over. How can I buy a car or a house, serve as general manager, serve as CEO, marry Bai Fumei, and reach the pinnacle of life without 100 chapters every day?

I'll try it first. If it's toxic, I'll delete it. If it's not, I'll keep it as a reference for future brothers.

The world view feels very hopeless. The protagonist has cheats and great luck in lottery, but he is only slightly better than his capital classmates. It feels like there is no chance for common people to grow up.

I just saw chapter 116, and the latest chapter is 130➕. It seemed pretty good at first. I read about a hundred chapters in a day or two, but then I couldn't stand it anymore. I feel that there are several points that affect the reading experience. The first is that there is a lot of recurring content, especially the protagonist's card attributes, which are posted over and over again. For the public chapters, forget it. The paid chapters are still repeating, which is a bit of a waste of words, and it is quite annoying to see them over and over again. It is recommended that when there is an update, just list the updated content. The complete attributes can actually be recorded in a single chapter. The second is the author's sentence fragmentation. There are many sentences in the text that have very uncomfortable sentence fragmentation. Several words in a sentence are followed by a comma. The first chapters were fine, but after about 80 chapters it started to happen occasionally, and from about 100 chapters onwards, there were more and more such interruptions. Until the chapter I just finished reading. "There are always sentence fragments similar to my sentence like this." It can be said that it greatly affects the reading experience. The third thing is that the author is always accustomed to supplementing the content with narratives like "by the way/by the way" when writing. There is always a sense of incoherence when reading. The most difficult thing for me to understand is that the author's early content did not show much of the problems I mentioned in points 2 and 3. On the contrary, as the content of the novel is updated more and more, I feel that the author's writing style is getting worse and worse. It always makes me feel like the author has been changed through the back door. To sum up, if the author's writing style was the same as the chapters I read now, I might give up after reading a few chapters. The subject matter is interesting, but I hope the author pays more attention to his writing style.