Entertainment Starts with the Story of Young China

After reading Chapter 20, I originally planned to shut it down and not talk about it, but the more I thought about it, the more I wanted to say it. The writing style of this book is okay. There are currently no poisonous points of subduing one's wits or forcing pretentiousness. The beginning of the book itself is very good. Young China said that I had never heard of this song before. After reading the article, I went to listen to it. I felt very good while listening and reading. It is already in my playlist. But I have a few points to say (I have to say... 1. The character design is very good, a music producer's time travel, this is the point where you can write a copy without being suspected. But internship, and then let a substitute participate in the show? Emm... No matter how big the company is, it is impossible for you to sign an intern contract, no matter what, it will be replaced by a trainee contract. Including the plot of the company boss, there is not much comment. 2. Battle, this thing is very common Yes, but first of all, the protagonist is a person who has zero training time, and secondly, he takes a creative route. Such a persona is usually based on vocals (or rap), so the problem is that the person who is fighting is the strongest among the group of people, and he chooses such an original route with zero training time. This is a problem. No one will like to see such a battle. Fans are all admirers. You can be handsome but not powerful. You can't have the strength to pick someone who has no strength or who specializes in a completely different direction to compete in PK. The lead singer chooses the vocalist PK, and the rapper chooses the rapper PK For example: in Chuang 4, the C position is ly. If he wants to compete in PK, he will definitely not choose 4 Mika, because he is a dancer, and Mika is partial to vocal or even has no dance foundation. The program team and fans want to see a strong showdown, not a strong one. Use your own strengths to attack his disadvantage. Of course, if the character itself is released for everyone to criticize him (like Bingqing Yujie and Candy Super Sweet) 3. It's still the same battle, the protagonist has just acquired piano skills (he has it, but returned to his current body, that's probably what it means) and then the challenger arranges a piano character to forcefully bring out the protagonist's piano skills. This plot is a bit... Let's not talk about the plot, let's just talk about the male character. Are you sure about the piano battle in the group audition show? Zyf, the seventh member of Chuang 3, can only dance ballet. Plus, it's a plus for the male and female team to have these abilities, but if they only have these abilities, it doesn't matter. His character is like a piano prince. It's about being the strongest among the challengers and also being a great player at the piano. Is this a bit outrageous? The plot is even more outrageous 4. I don't object to Young China saying that this song can be sold, but there are four judges: a top player, a diva, and a member of a girl group. Who do you think is better than selling to a girl group member? To be honest, this song is not suitable for girls to sing. Is it OK to sell it to top players (Brother Lu or Little Pride), or to a member of a girl group? Currently in the girl group, do you think she is suitable to sing this kind of song? Even if she has 10,000 fans who like her, she won't allow it. It's not that girls can't sing this kind of popular song, but the song itself is much better if it is performed by a male singer. There are many popular songs suitable for girls, but the girl group members... I don't know what you think. Even if SHE is from the mainland, their style is not suitable for this song at all That's all I want to say, I don't want to complain, I really wrote so much for this song, the starting point and the character are very good, the queen is a reborn person... I didn't say it... But it's really weird that you average 5 chapters and one poison. I only wrote so many because you recommended this song. It would be great if the author is willing to think about some changes to the plot. Last sentence: Thank you to the author for recommending this song! From a fan who has followed n episodes of the talent show!

In the seventh chapter of Night, putting blue and white porcelain on a talent show is really a waste, doesn't the author think?

At the end of the chapter about the cast and crew, the heroine said that she could allow the male lead to have a kidney transplant and become a cast and crew with someone else. Squat down and tell me, Shen Nong, this article is a harem article? PS: Why doesn't the author do a good job in demining this kind of problem? Steal readers' money? So short of these three melons and two dates? Or a poor reader? You write your multi-girl novels, and I read my single-girl novels. The two of them are not intertwined. Hello, I am hello, everyone. Isn't it nice to be harmonious? (I was disgusted by the ending of this chapter and felt cheated) The author wrote about five thousand years ago and is very imaginative. The character of the protagonist is patriotic and positive. As a result, come here, the whole three views are not correct. The character of the protagonist completely collapsed. It is also inconsistent with social values. You're blatantly going against Operation Qinglang.

Having copied so many masterpieces from ancient times, I still feel that the protagonist written by the author is just a flow. He is at the top of his game at best. Neither his status in the literary world nor his status in the literary and art world has improved much.

Volume 2, Chapter 19, Chapter 20. What does it mean to attack Chinese people? So you are not Chinese! ? Maybe you want to borrow someone's famous quotes to show off, I am a Chinese, I am a Chinese, who are you attacking? Reported, no thanks.

I just saw this book. I originally wanted to read the book reviews first, but the book review area was blocked by a person named "Youchu Liuxiang". I don't understand this behavior. If you want to post pictures, can't you post them in one post? If you have to post one picture per post, is there a serious illness? And there are already several people saying that they were dismissed by the book review area. Didn't the author or the operator manage the book review area? That's it, farewell

I read the beginning and the general table of contents. It's 99% similar to a book called "This Star Wants to Retire." This is embarrassing. Who is the copywriter?

I was pushed back by Ye's use in Chapter 7. You... Oh, I don't want to talk about you anymore. I ran away.

Let me just say it, I think the author can finish it quickly and start a new book. If you don't have the background setting of five thousand years and make up five thousand years by yourself, then no one will agree with the five thousand years you made up without the background of the pan-Chinese cultural circle. Without the culture inherited from the Spring and Autumn Period, without the suffering of the Han nation, who can resonate with the five thousand years you made up? If the time and space of the protagonist does not have the corresponding background, I am afraid that I will not be able to appreciate the splendor of the five thousand years you made up.

The old cliché of pretentious and slap-in-the-face writing is mediocre, but this five thousand years really hit home for me. Many times, I hope that one day I will describe the glorious five thousand years of the Chinese nation to people in another world in another world. To mention one thing, I hope I can write about the great sages of Buddhism, Taoism and Confucianism.

I just want to subscribe for five thousand years and have no interest in anything else.

It was okay before it was put on the shelves, but not after it was put on the shelves.

The book I read first and the star I'm reading now, how come it feels like a book? ? ?

I found that the author deliberately downplayed Wang Zhe as a director. In fact, I feel that his character is quite good, but when it comes to confrontation later, he becomes invisible. Also, if there is something wrong in your mind as you are swiping the screen, you are still a naive person, screw you.

To put it bluntly, this book of yours and your last one are just skin-changing. If it weren't for Five Thousand Years of Expectation, I would be almost unreadable. The plot arrangement becomes more and more boring the more I read.

I chased them for a while, waiting to fatten them up before killing them. And guess what? Hey, it's free for a limited time😁

If you don't pay some price, don't write this book.

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First time

You writers have written about everything in the entertainment field, but you have never written specifically about the small screen. Yes, when will the small screen stand up? Shivering and cold. The author wrote a book specifically for the small screen, but also for the big screen.

Apart from the fact that one soul travels and one is reborn, the double time travel routine is a bit novel, but the plot outline is also too rigid. Many places deliberately violate the logic of reality for the sake of plot. The protagonist is also awkward. In his previous life, he was a top music producer in his thirties, but in order to advance the plot, he did a lot of things that went against his personality. His behavior is not as good as that of an ordinary college student. If this had been a book written in 2001, I would have thought the plot was good. If it had been a book written in 2011, I would have thought it was okay. It would be too embarrassing to write like this after 21 years.

I came from the old book to support you, come on

Standing on the head of the sofa, high-end bench.

I hope that I can bring Hoyomix to play with me when I get involved in symphony music in the future. It seems that Qi Ji has no idea of ​​getting involved in the software industry. If he can't become a god, he can at least bring the music of teacher Chen Zhiyi.

It's too little from the previous one, so I'll check it out when there are more updates.

I got the red envelope, I'd be so sorry if I didn't come😁😁

Halfway through the chase, why is the system gone at the end?

Having a reborn woman is a bit of a drama.