The Detective Conan Killer Queen

I feel like the protagonist is described as very weak. He can't be dealt with by himself, and he can easily escape from his hands. There is no sense of oppression at all. The use of the substitute ability is very poor. Obviously the substitute ability and the panel are very strong. A female kidnapper can easily injure the protagonist with a pistol. Ordinary pistol bullets, Killer Queen can fly away with her fists. It is also said that Gin's sixth sense predicts the first bomb and jumps out of the car in time. You can also see that the first bomb is purple on top, you know. . . It can only be said that the use of the stand-in ability is poor and the weakening is too severe. I feel that the greatest use of the stand-in is to draw comics. The other settings are okay. I hope the follow-up will be more exciting

Why do you want to use a man as the heroine? It's so perverted.

The writing feels so-so, mainly because there are obvious problems with the character design. I have been forcibly imitating Yoshikage Kira. It feels like a tiger cannot be an anti-dog. I want to imitate, but I can't be the same as Kira. The character of the character itself is also covered up. It is too high or too low There is also a problem with the plot design. If you directly join the gang, what if a dozen other people have guns? Obviously a case of imbecility

If possible, please be sure to make the protagonist's image closer to Kira Yoshikage

When the protagonist writes comics, he just reports his ability as a stand-in, which is equivalent to directly telling others about his ability as a stand-in. I don't understand where the protagonist's confidence comes from? So boldly telling others about my stand-in ability, and I feel that the protagonist's stand-in ability is completely inconsistent with the panel attributes. I don't like the setting aspect very much, and I can't say the rest. After all, I really don't watch it very much, but there are some things that you can see what happens later just by looking at the beginning. This feeling is like going to the toilet and it will smell bad at first, but after using it for a long time, it will not be that smelly. The first part does not suit my wishes, and I will not lower my psychological standards later.

I always feel that the enemy is getting farther and farther away from Ke Xue after he has a double 😅 I thought it was about solving crimes with superpowers or committing crimes with superpowers, relying on superpowers to compete with the black organization or Conan FBI, but now it turns out that it is a confrontation between superpowers. It's decided. Although it's a battle of wits and courage, it doesn't have the flavor of science anymore. It's completely a set of urban powers with Conan's skin Since the world is a Conan world, I think it's more to my taste to use Conan's world view as the main one and the substitute ability as the supplement.

I thought the protagonist was the one who committed the crime, but I didn't expect that he was the one who solved the crime.

That is, if you have a self-created substitute, you can leave a message to me! Alias: Hexagonal panel: Ability explanation: Use your brains! ! !

I saw Chapter 48 and ran away. It feels like the protagonist is about to become another person, and he is always being shot, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Maybe it's because I haven't watched JOJO? Is this the case for Yoshikage Kira in the original novel?

The writing is so messy, I feel like only the author himself can understand it.