Two-Dimensional Comprehensive Comic Story

Hello everyone, I am going to make a comment. It is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. If you criticize it, you are right. First of all, I personally think this novel is good and worth reading👀, at least it is much better than the previous novels written by the author. The author has made progress that is visible to the naked eye In terms of plot, it will not be like the author's previous books, where a character is conquered in a few chapters, the pace is fast, and then the protagonist's character is introduced. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is too high. It can be said that he is the strongest among the protagonists in these generations, and he is the ultimate evolution of Digimon. I can only say, Teacher Su, you are so powerful, I would like to call you Su Haihuang. (Teach me JPG) Specifically speaking, in terms of the plot, when the protagonist conquered the dumplings, I felt that there was something indeed. It was true that he had maxed out the PUA skills. However, when I watched it, I was afraid that I would suddenly learn it in vain. I was a little looking forward to it and a little scared, 🌿 Then there is the aspect of the protagonist writing novels and drawing comics. I think there is no problem, and I am looking forward to what novels and animations I will copy next. However, I feel a little bit taken for granted about the plot of making animations. Animation production is not child's play, Koro Of course, making animations is a dead end! I suggest that Teacher Su quickly publish a book to teach how to fall in love. Of course, I don't want to fall in love, it's just a friend of mine who wants to fall in love. Here I want to carry out a private goods entrainment, Amway two series: "Asuka-chan's Sailor Suit" "Changing Dolls Fall in Love" If the author plans to add new characters in the subsequent plot, I strongly recommend adding them. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo yeah, yeah, yeah, I am Asuka 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵. Finally, I hope the author can perform stably in the future. My review was written before it was put on the shelf, so it is naturally not comprehensive, but at least so far, I think this novel is worth reading. The plot of the novel is only partially unfolded now, and I hope the author can take it a step further after it is released. PS I only clicked in because I am a book reader. If it weren't for the many positive reviews in the comment section, I probably wouldn't have clicked in. (After taking my picture, you can send it as soon as possible🤤

This pig's feet are very good at flirting, and the level of emotional intelligence is obviously not at the same level as the author's previous male protagonist. The author must have tested it himself, and he wrote so six

I feel that the plot is quite fast, but it is also very good. If the emotional development and detailed descriptions can be written in more detail, it will definitely be better. I also want to remind you not to write too much about the heroine. Otherwise, in the end, the portrayal of each character and the psychological description of each character will be difficult to write, resulting in a bad ending, easy to end, and even eunuchs. This is what I have concluded from reading many novels about this aspect. Come on, author, keep updating. (The above suggestions are personal opinions and are for reference only. If you don't like them, don't criticize them.)

Hey hey hey first

First of all, this can be said to be the best Harmono fanfic I have ever read. Of course, I don't seem to have read a few 😅 Secondly, I don't know what the author's general framework is. The title of the book is a comprehensive manga, but now it is all Harmono. It can basically be defined as a Harmono fanfic. If it is a comprehensive manga, I don't know how the author cited it. But I think it's better to finish Harumono's story first, and then start the manga. Writing the manga now feels like trying to force it into the complete story, and I hope the author can control it well. Then, this must be a harem theme, right? The comprehensive comic must be a harem theme, right? Probably... If not, just one or two female protagonists, that would be interesting 🪖 Personal opinion, if it offends, then, hey

It took me a while to read it. It can be said that it is much better than the author's previous two books. Both the smoothness of the story and the visual sense have been greatly improved. Good luck, author.

Yukinoshita Yukino: Things like feelings are really unreasonable. One cannot, at least one should not. Yukino, Yukino, why do you feel a little sweet in your heart? Could it be that this is also a rebellion against the family? (Trying to convince myself) Yuigahama Yui: It's ups and downs, falling in love is really hard. However, I have no regrets. It was great to take that step and meet Su Yujun. And Koyuki and Yumeko. Miura Yuko: How painful it will be for Su Yu-kun at that moment when someone you like introduces him to someone else. What on earth did I do? I can't hurt him a second time. Shizuka Hiratsuka: Smoking, drinking, violent tendencies. Refusing a blind date is the ultimate stubbornness. Meeting these children may be a kind of salvation. Family? That's fine too. Yunoshita Harano: The world is a prison, what can you do if you escape from your family? Xiao Yukino, as long as you stand behind your sister, I will bear everything for you. Even at night. Hikigaya Komachi: My brother's friend is a good person, Komachi, I can rest assured. Please wait until I grow up. Su Yu: The broken-winged Seraph is in the world, declaring loudly in the center of the world that I want them all.

The 👴 running between three families is exhausted

Embarrassing is just one word, I only say it once.

Haotulou

Yukino

Yukino is more popular than Dango?

When did Mr. Dai get together with Caijia?

What I wrote earlier is quite good, and the peaches of daily fandom can be eaten as much as you want. Later on, I felt that the protagonist was just a walking hormone, flirting everywhere, and some of the original characters who liked the protagonist. The image was not distinct enough, and it only left a general impression on me. Later on, there were many female protagonists and original female supporting characters, and the protagonist kept picking up (and flirting with) some female supporting characters. Although he tried his best to portray the protagonist as a responsible scumbag, it felt like the protagonist was just playing with the feelings of some female supporting characters, which was a bit broken. Finally, when I saw the plot between Kousaka Kyosuke and his childhood sweetheart Murata Manami, I felt that the protagonist was too scumbag, and it would be a pity not to be a little yellow hair. Even though he knew it was a misunderstanding, he had no special feelings for Murata at first, but just for fun, he just watched the misunderstanding caused by him gradually become serious, and Kosaka Kyosuke was forced by the protagonist's power (Kosaka Kyosuke's imagination) to forcibly end his feelings for his childhood sweetheart, and push his childhood sweetheart to the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is like a villain who takes advantage of the situation, and this emptiness of doubt is caused by the protagonist.

After reading this book, I still have some feelings. First of all, comprehensive comics were not very popular at the beginning, and the number was very small. However, comprehensive comics in the entire novel world are actually relatively tepid. There are some high-quality ones, but very few. This one has advantages and disadvantages. First of all, I read the author's two comprehensive comics. The plots are really similar. I feel like they are two books with different templates. Speaking of this book, it is too repetitive. The early stage is okay, but in the middle and late stages, it is a stallion novel. I will stop it when I see a beautiful woman. Although it is very satisfying in a short period of time. , But I feel a little tired after reading one or two hundred chapters. I personally feel that even for comprehensive comics, you can't do this. There are excellent starting points for comprehensive comics. There are a few books in the light novel column that can be found in the rankings. They all have two or three female protagonists. I think Reading variety comics is about love and daily life, focusing on depth rather than quantity. Of course it is not impossible, but it cannot reach a high level and cannot achieve good results. For example, "My Girlfriend is a Bad Miss", I think this variety comic is very good, but it only has three female protagonists.

I'm speechless😓Can't you change the name of the protagonist? The last book was called Su Yu and this book is also called Su Yu. Is it so difficult to come up with a name for the main character?

Come on, everyone send pictures to each other to create some atmosphere in the comment area. Not angry at all now😭

I wanted to say how could such an awkward plot happen, but it turned out to be Xiao Longjun, so it's okay! There are fewer and fewer people writing in two dimensions from Qidian. Please support QuanDing!

Meow Meow Under the Snow

How many heroines are there? Don't have too many, three or four is enough, four at most. Too many bad plots will lead to bad endings. I really don't want you to write too many female protagonists. It's not easy to add too many female protagonists in emotional and daily stories. Firstly, it is easy to ignore some characters if you fail to take care of the whole. Secondly, there are too many pitfalls and it is easy to bury yourself (collapse). I hope you will adopt my small suggestions.

On April 28th, I took a day off. It's the first time I've taken a leave of absence since I started writing. Not Kavin, just want to be lazy for a day. V(◦'ωˉ◦)~♡

My erotic heroine is indeed Harano

To be honest, I have only watched a little bit of Shumono. I have watched some short videos on Bilibili. It seems that Yui is still good-looking. What about Yukino? It is really hard on A. Especially when I watched a short video where Yukino and his group went swimming. Almost all the girls around looked straighter than Yukino, the hero. I wanted to laugh. And Yukino was very envious of Yui's weapon.

I touched Yukino, hey hey hey

Sashi-chan😌😌

Author, why does the protagonist still pretend to be reserved? Can't you be more frank? Except Yukinoshita Yukino, Harano and Yuigahama Yui. You haven't made any substantial progress at all with other women. . . Why are you still pretending to be reserved now that you have reached this point? I want the author's explanation. I have subscribed to this point, and I really want the author's explanation. Can you give an explanation to the book fans who support you? Well.

Uh, why can't you even guarantee one update a day now? What happened?

No, where is your update? Well finished

Does any book lover know if there is a comprehensive manga with Yukinoshita Harano as the heroine? Asking for books!

Are you really not going to change the ending of the giant in this book? After all, the ending is notoriously shocking. . .