Building an Entertainment Empire, Starting with the Stand-Up Comedy Competition

The subject matter is good, but the book is very boring. It's like the kind where you've been waiting for the protagonist to appear and blow up the audience. In the end, it uses several dozens of chapters to describe passers-by, other contestants, judges, and even the decoration. Then the protagonist appears in two chapters, and the judges say, protagonist 666! Then go on to describe something else! Then after twenty or thirty chapters, the protagonist appears for a while and then jumps to another place, which is very boring. We clearly know who the protagonist is, but the number of appearances of the protagonist is less than that of the sweeper!

The author made the wrong mistake. He just brushed aside the casual contestants in one stroke. It was boring to write about the contest scores of the contestants in several chapters without mentioning them. It would be better to write more about the audience's reaction when the protagonist tells the joke, the reactions of the judges, and more interactions to set off the atmosphere and make the joke look more funny. In this way, the protagonist's length will be lengthened and more attractive! Of course, I am also talking nonsense. Maybe the author has other considerations. I look forward to the follow-up 😁

Thirty into eighteen. It took you more than 20 chapters to get the protagonist? Also extremely boring. Brother, is this a group drama? But it doesn't look like it.

It's so scary, the water is like this, I've never seen it before...

You can also be featured in daily recommendations, which is really poisonous.

♀√You dare to speak and speak, you also dare to think and write. Why are you so ordinary but so confident when typing on the keyboard? This is the first time I've seen a video of a man washing eggs

Hurry up and streamline the role of passerby A, move it forward faster, end this chapter quickly and develop other areas. Every chapter you write now is an introduction, and there is no sense of involvement. If you continue to read, you will not be able to write "Eunuch".

Wow, you may not even have 20 out of 80 pictures about the protagonist. If you write about other people's talk shows, I haven't watched that show or something. Even if I say you don't care about innovation, then you can copy some more funny talk shows that are not this show and give the protagonist a few shows.

It's too watery, and the protagonist has no sense of presence

Erect a monument. When I saw Chapter 11, reward selection, I didn't want to read it. Because he felt like an old fool, the author forced him to jump up and down!