The Outcast: Starting as a Deliveryman

Not bad, it doesn't torture the protagonist. Isn't the point of reading to have fun? I am very pleased

The first chapter is riddled with flaws. Does your "second uncle" not know you're an ordinary person? Does he live on another planet? In a world with an underworld and a heavenly court, how could Maoshan martial arts be lost? Did the underworld explode? A transmigrator who doesn't know the plot? Then what are you even doing transmigrating? And you even have a "virginity mark" like Zhang Chulan?

Add it to your bookshelf and keep it; you can slaughter it in a few years.

Good grief, I scrolled down and found out there were so many flaws! How did this new book even get a strong recommendation?

This is the first time I've heard of the "All-Knowing Gang" hunting down people who quit. That's ridiculous.

🔥, I feel like this is the latest chapter. I won't comment much on other things, but I have to say that I feel the protagonist has some other plans for Biyou Village, mainly Ma Xianhong's plan and the cultivation furnace. According to the current worldview, a world of one person is one of millions of worlds, but it is a world with confidence but no power.

This is ridiculous! They just insert a main character into the original story, and I don't even know the plot! How can this be considered fanfiction? 😅

If it's a time-travel story, why doesn't the protagonist know about the All-Access Link? If they don't know the plot, why is it a time-travel story in the first place?

Honestly, this book is terrible. The protagonist's storyline is too short, making it impossible to immerse oneself in the story. The entire narrative follows the same plot, with abrupt pacing jumps. The plot twists feel forced and lack originality. The story could easily be sued for plagiarism.

You're no good as a Taoist priest, trying to perform spirit combat? The Ten Rules of Taoism state: Those who practice the true Dharma should not preach heretical doctrines such as celestial illumination, possession, summoning generals, spirit possession, or water-based practices. They must not use misleading or heretical words to corrupt the faith.