Yinfu Daojun

This is a good book, mainly because of its excellent writing and its plot, which is considered good so far. I have been reading books for nearly twenty years, and I am really indifferent to Xiaobai's writing. It is rare to find a book with solid foundation. I hope the author will not give up casually. Writing a book is an expression of one's inner sense of the real world. Finding a book that suits your taste is like finding a confidante. It is still extremely difficult. It is inevitable that among readers there will be those who lack social experience and blindly pursue stimulation and psychological venting, which are so-called enjoyable articles. Reading too many enjoyable articles will inevitably go against the original intention of opening a book to be beneficial. I also hope that the author will not try too hard to cater to the readers' tastes for the sake of performance. He will write with feelings and words that are meaningful. He is not just complaining, but expresses his own thoughts. If he changes the style or even the theme at will because of a few comments from readers, he may become a puppet in the pen.

Let me talk about my personal reading experience: This book is on par and well written. There is a small drawback, that is, relatively speaking, the plot of this book is too compact. It is understandable that the protagonist looks at this era from the perspective of future generations and the advantage of a prophet. All kinds of disharmony are clear at a glance, and then the branch plot is triggered all at once. However, it is quite reasonable. There is nothing wrong with the branch triggering mechanism, but it is too rushed. According to normal web writing, if you have written these four or five branches in more than ten chapters, are you serious? Are you sure you are writing an online article? 1. Obtain a treasure 2. Mountain temple zombie 3 Black Eye incident 4. Animal making incident 5. Weird drama events to be triggered. . . From the discovery to the resolution of these things, you actually have only these ten chapters. The protagonist actually missed the opportunity to show off and let the plot develop... Uh 😓 He is really not a qualified starting protagonist!

Huaping Guliang, please change it. Really, it's too offensive to the IQ. I haven't written about the background of the monsters yet, so forget it. But the protagonist has already experienced the monster incident, and yet he still reacts like this. I can't stand it anymore when I see the rest of it! Keep it in your collection and see if you change it. If you don't change it, then we can only meet again by chance.

To be honest, if you don't write a book well, you might as well find a class where you spend three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet. Even if I have votes in my hand, I don't want to vote for you. Can't you try harder and use some snacks? At any rate, I have collected 20,000 pieces! Don't you think it's a pity to abandon it?

As long as the protagonist is in the city, he has to solve crimes and encounter monsters and monsters. Isn't this too deliberate? ?

Finally, I came across a novel that is unsystematic, serious about spiritual practice, and has a good plot. The characters are well created. The sister and brother-in-law always remind me of Xu Xian's sister and brother-in-law in "Xin Bai". Come on💪

Modern people think that ancient people are too stupid. Work-for-relief does not work in disaster years. If you let others work, you must make sure they are full. The amount of food consumed by the workers is several times the amount of food for people who can only keep themselves alive every day. Moreover, they are prone to trouble when they are full. There is not enough food to eat. In ancient times, disaster relief is just to prevent the victims from starving to death. The food provided by 10,000 people to work-for-disaster relief is enough for 30,000 victims to survive.

The writing is very good and very exciting. The only thing I don't understand is that there are endless monsters and ghosts, and there are some great people in the world, but as a government agency, they are helpless and do nothing. How can the people live? How does it exist? There is no countermeasure to control the force. Existence like fart. This kind of court should be eliminated and disappear.

The frequency of meeting monsters is too high. The protagonist can take the initiative to find monsters because he wants to improve himself. This feels more reasonable. I just want to know how hard it is for ordinary people to live in this world.

With so many monsters and monsters, as a unified dynasty, without a department specifically to deal with such things, without the world's most powerful force, how could this Great Qi Dynasty be established? There is nothing written in the book, only monsters and monsters. . .

I just found this fairy tale novel that I can keep reading, but it looks like I'm going to cut it again.

With this frequency of encountering evil spirits, wouldn't it be possible for ordinary people to die dozens or hundreds of people a day?

Another eunuch, cheating on the first booking? If you still have a conscience, even if you change it casually, aren't you cheating money?

. . . Neither the county magistrate nor the county lieutenant believed that there were ghosts. Is it reasonable for a country man to directly name the ghost?

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The author's writing style is really good, but the plot may not be very attractive. The score of this book is considered acceptable, after all, it only has 200,000 words. It's such a pity for the eunuch. What kind of job does the author need if he has such writing skills? Writing a book well and persisting is definitely better than working. How great it is to be a professional writer

Yysy, none of the characters are very smart Yazi...

There are so many settings, and they are not good enough. Just pick one or two points and write them for your needs. Now you are biting off more than you can chew. There are too many restrictions. This will not work, and that will not work. Killing is not killing, releasing is not releasing. Taoists still go to do the work of Confucianism, and are not afraid of the army attacking mountains and temples. This is greed for perfection and seeking perfection. Do you know what it means that it is difficult for an upright official to stop household chores? A typical idealist, with an upright and perfect personality, who wants to do everything and can do everything well. You are not a human anymore, you are a saint.

I won't read a new book until I finish it, that's it. Just charged 1000RMB

I have been busy these days and have not read chapters 14-27 of the book. I thought I had read chapter 1 of this book wrong. .

The writing style is good, why don't you write orthodox fairy tales instead of Liaozhai prose? What's so good about it?

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