After Traveling Through the Book, I Picked up the Villain

Comprehensive evaluation: It is a rare Xianxia product that pays attention to layout, and is very beneficial! ! ! Share some thoughts on this article First of all, let's talk about the highlights of this article: 1. The character of the protagonist. The protagonist of this article has a calm personality, an online IQ, and a very big-picture perspective! As far as the current environment is concerned, there are mostly fast-food style novels, and the plots mostly highlight the protagonist's strength or the protagonist's various cheats. It is rare to see a protagonist with rich experience and a sense of the overall situation. The protagonist of this article is a leader of a sect, and his magnanimity and way of thinking are fascinating, which is a highlight. 2. A grand world view. The time point selected for this article is that the protagonist has been the head teacher for many years, and the protagonist is not "playing", but has continued to develop the sect over the years, and there should be a lot of "hidden chess" left behind. At the same time, the two great conflicts in the Eastern Territory a hundred years ago and a few decades ago should have left a lot of foreshadowing, and there are many places that can be explored. 3. Detailed writing and compact plot. The author's writing skills are very sophisticated, and the plots are compact and interconnected. Every time you read it, you will still find something interesting to read, and you don't have to worry about the article being too "watery". All in all, there is nothing toxic about this book so far, and it is very comfortable to read. 4. Characterization of supporting roles. The setting of this article is not unusual. The protagonist is the "villain" in a novel. The highlight is that the author's portrayal of the "protagonist" in the novel is very good - the "protagonist" is not a tool for the plot, but a person who can think and change. In addition, the other supporting characters written by the author are all flesh-and-blood people with their own characters and stories. Then there are some shortcomings of this article: 1. Selection of supporting roles. There are many supporting characters in this article so far, and they may all accompany the protagonist for a long time. The author wants to portray supporting characters with flesh and blood, but some problems inevitably arise. First of all, the heads of the Nine Xuan Sects have similar personalities. They are all firm supporters of the protagonist, and they are a bit lacking in personality. In addition, there are too few female characters in this article. Female characters often have distinctive personalities and have personalities that men do not have. They play an important role in promoting the plot and readers' experience. Even if it doesn't write about emotions, it can't be without important female characters. Finally, the role of the "protagonist" is relatively small. It is a bit unreasonable that the "protagonist" has not had any opportunities so far. Moreover, the first-person description of the "protagonist" is somewhat lacking. Without descriptions from multiple perspectives, it is difficult for the supporting characters to be more three-dimensional. 2. Fighting plot. At present, there are relatively few battle plots in the article. Whether it is a personal battle or a big battle, the battle process is also very fast. Personally, I feel that a little more combat, opportunity, and growth of the "protagonist" can be added to enrich the characteristics of the "protagonist". The above are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it PS: Can you mention the update speed? It's not enough at all

It's quite good. It has the flavor of the imaginary world of cultivating immortals. Come on, author!

Jiang Lian, I spent a lot of money to draw it. Does it match the image of the protagonist in your mind~

Touch a cat and Boss Jiang (if you can't draw anymore, leave it alone)

I always feel like the author went to the wrong website. . .

There is actually something you can watch in Daily Detoxification

First break the sky, then the dome, the father and son rise up in Dongxuanqing Enter Jiuxuan, step into the purple sky, command and command Yu to be called the headmaster Zong Fengjuan, promote the genius, the power and fame are so powerful that the demons Washing away the old worries, opening the new door, appearing in the shadow and passing by, shocking the ups and downs Consider the holy land, calculate the immortal gate, and seek the great Xia Dynasty Looking at the snow in the north, sitting in the south city, Qingming Jiuyou first transformed into a god Yan Yuantai, Duan Shura, Qi Hei transformed into Shizhuo After many years, the tribulation wind has passed, and all the great emperors worship me

I took a look at the early stage, and Xiao Yanzi, who was still at the outer gate, was fighting with Du Duzi. It seemed that that was the only battle damage, right? He had no choice but to continue to contact Jiang Lian. Although there was nothing wrong with it, after all, it was the JPG he picked up (I couldn't draw it anymore, so I couldn't refine it because I couldn't draw weapons and then practiced again)

I personally prefer to read dark novels, but this novel is very interesting. The protagonist traveled to the world of immortality and became the leader through a series of operations, and prepared to retire in the sect. The protagonist devoted himself to developing the sect for better retirement, but then a villain came, the son of the protagonist in the previous world... In this novel, the protagonist made the sect prosperous and had infinite possibilities. But what attracted me was that the protagonist took over as the leader. After operating the series, I saw the demeanor and courage that the righteous leader of the world of cultivation should have; in contrast, as the leader of the righteous path, there are countless conspiracies hidden under the bright surface. It allowed me to see a vivid Jiuxuanmen in the world of cultivation. Where there is light, there must be darkness. The protagonist is brave and strategic, and strategizes. Even though the Jiuxuanmen is prospering on white bones, this is more real... At present, this novel has a large fantasy structure, and the protagonist is also not small. The protagonist is authoritative, not useless, not reckless, and has an IQ. There is no plot of giving one's own credit to others or letting others pretend to take the credit; there is no plot of making wedding clothes for others; there are no plots of those terrible marriages and children; there are no terrible fiancée's seven aunts, eight aunts, younger brothers and sisters..., A heartwarming novel about cultivating immortality.

I'm so annoyed, why did it end like this! ! ! I want to see Xiao Yanyan rebel and take down his master 😭😭😭

Gentle "elder brother" (artist: Aoyama Oriliu)

Why do you keep this postscript? ? ? ? ? Finished? ?

The title of the book is "Xiaobai Wen", the plot is "Xiancao" (the climax has not yet arrived), the writing is "Xiancao", you can eat it with peace of mind, if you don't come back and kill me, I personally tested Shen Nong.

I thought the title of this book was a romance novel, Danmei, or something like that, which made me miss such a good novel.

I knock! I thought it started by changing the map, but it ended?

Reward the author with 1 million words. I started reading this book around the end of February, and then started to read it at about 180 chapters. The game between the parties Yan Lingxiu, the demon fetus, the apprentice Shen Qiong The friction between Shen Xu, Shen Wen and Yan Lingxiu, the radical Buddha cat, the mascot as a foreshadowing of the demon world Zhu Nanyou, the bottom pillar of the middle building, the persistence of loving the sect Jing Qiong Chic and refined Blood knife serves as an introduction to attack the Shifang Demon Sect Zong Qing Yin Luo Blood Slave, Granny Yan pretends to be injured and deceives the Shifang Demon Sect The rise of the Great Xia Emperor for hegemony, Du Yun's chatterbox Instigating rebellion against Yun Ce Three Saints Sect The Demon Lord Blood Demon Young Master opens up the potential foreshadowing of the demon world I hope the author can write at least 700,000 more reasons Two This is the author's first book. 1.7 Million is equivalent to close to 2 million [most people will automatically round up, and will also judge that it is close to 10 or round up] I think it can become a milestone. At the same time, I can practice my writing to be more incisive (I think the current story progress is at most half of the whole story, and the ending needs at least 700,000 words) Most of the characters are very full ( Motives and behaviors are also in line with the characters. The behaviors of different characters are contradictory, motivational contradictions, foreshadowing and mystery in Shen Potian, Ming Yuan), but (personal intuition) the writing style needs to be improved to gorgeous, so that it is perfect like icing on the cake The story frame is bold, the writing style is the bridge, If the story frame is wonderful, the writing style cannot be equally wonderful, it will become a good work, on the contrary, if the frame is empty and the writing style is gorgeous, it will become a middle-to-lower work, So the author is already halfway successful. He only needs to add more writing to add the finishing touch The author does not need to feel pressure. It mainly depends on your own situation to judge whether to continue writing this book. If you can't afford to eat, it is okay to finish it. Just like the stock market needs to stop losses, the author also needs to add a mouthful of food. No need to force it. Come on.

Damn it (⊙x⊙;), you can read it now with a free reading coupon

For inspiration in the new chapter, here's some Jiang Zhangjiao emoticons ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

This book is very familiar. I always feel that I have read it somewhere. It must be a fan of it? It's so familiar, but I read that book a few years ago, and I've long forgotten what it was called. I even suspect that the author has a vest

In fact, Jiang Lian treats Duan Qing much better than Yan Lingxiu. He personally trained Duan Qing. He saw himself in Duan Qing and seemed to have more feelings for Duan Qing than Yan Lingxiu. And Yan Lingxiu was raised by his fellow disciples most of the time. The two of them had not really gotten along for long, and Jiang Lian went out to practice. He might as well have been with Duan Qing day and night for a month... Will Yan Lingxiu be jealous?

Good book, I gave it a monthly pass. To be honest, I caught up with the latest chapter from the first chapter last night. The most attractive point for me is the protagonist in the author's work. This feeling is the leader of the right path. The leader of a faction, making friends from far away and attacking closely, maximizing the interests, and leading the entire sect to the top. After all, as a super leader, first of all, what you have to do is to become bigger and stronger, seek greater benefits, absorb talents, firm goals, and develop steadily. Instead of fighting for a few pieces of XX herbs all day long, XX Lingbao shook the whole sect and fought with people to the death, beating the young and the old. It made me feel less like a super leader, but like a workshop director, or the leader of an unemployed gangster who has been stationed in an Internet cafe for a long time. It's 2022, and not everyone likes to follow Megatron and Optimus Prime, leading a group of boys to either charge or countercharge all day long. I want to see this. I want to see the cultivation of immortals. I want to see if special forces roam the world. Big cheers for the author! Keep your pace! Great book!

By the way, the book is quite good, and it doesn't feel unpopular. Why are there so few reviews?

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It's actually finished (stunned), but since it's finished, let's wait for the new book! ! I like the teacher's style⸝⸝ ᷇࿀ ᷆⸝⸝

It's not enough. Why is it over?

This is actually finished! ! ? ?

Alas, what is supposed to come will eventually come.

Emmmm, after two or three months of reading it in one day, it is still not suitable for reading serialized articles. . .

Is this the end... It's so painful... I want to read similar novels about cultivating immortals...

I would like to ask how to view bookmarks (scratching my head)