Infinity Starts with Pirates

The protagonist is a bit Loubi. Has he not been beaten enough by the world? I can't even express my joy and anger. Moreover, with the advantage of knowing the plot, the protagonist cannot even deceive a ten-year-old Luo, which makes people doubt the protagonist's IQ.

Daily poisoning, Shennong is already in the rescue room

Can you please stop being too poisonous? Chapter 23, regarding the issue of life return, the protagonist almost blew himself up again. It's obviously a problem that can be avoided with a little bit of brainpower, but it has to be disgusting and makes people speechless. I'm very curious, how could the protagonist, who is not very smart, have been lurking in the Don Quixote family for more than a year without being exposed? Is this the so-called manifestation of the protagonist's growth?

JOJO seems to be very popular, but in fact it has a small audience, especially for novels. Therefore, it is really not recommended to write a substitute class

The protagonist is too big, and it feels like it is easy to break through the ceiling of the pirate's combat power. The improvement is too slow and the protagonist feels too useless. Where is the lurking brother Ming at the beginning? The IQ of the protagonist in the article is actually successful. Whether Kyoka Suigetsu is strong or not depends on people, not everyone is Aizen. Aizen is strong because he is Aizen, not Kyoka Suigetsu. He achieves Kyouka Suigetsu, not Kyouka Suigetsu, and achieves Aizen, like the White Bearded Golden Lion, it is their ability that makes them, not their abilities. The strong are stronger in their own abilities. The protagonist is turned upside down. He relies on abilities everywhere. I feel that the protagonist is a waste without ability. Such a protagonist has no charm.

Just by the name of the protagonist, food and grass can turn into poisonous weeds

Did you know that there are only more than 800 people in the Vatican, but this book has 150,000 words. If one day the author asks Vatican people to copy the book, then on average each Vatican person will have to write 187.5 Chinese characters. Oh no~ you don't know, you don't care about the author, you only care about yourself.

The hook is too big, this book basically has no future at all, the lottery system itself is very exaggerated, the infinite substitutes in the back, the mirror flower, the moon in the mirror... Etc., And the lottery will continue! It can be an infinite superposition of golden fingers. How do you write it later? Not to mention what happens next, many of the skills in your hand are magical and the protagonist is completely invincible, so what's the point of other plots! And the lottery system is still adding gold fingers continuously!

If there are only six skill slots, why not analyze some more powerful fruits? I'm not trying to be original. I don't think originality is bad, but I just don't talk too much about the powerful fruits of the original work, okay? Multiply, slow, gold, flutter, swallow, shake, freeze, thunder

Is the author planning to correct the loopholes in Chapter 4? Isn't the person with the confusion fruit ability analyzed earlier dead?

I haven't watched JOJO, so it's best to explain a few words about the stand-in's abilities, such as whether it will be seen, whether it will be harmed, whether the stand-in will be restrained by the sea, whether the stand-in can act separately from the protagonist, whether the protagonist can use the ability analyzed by the stand-in, and whether the ability can affect the protagonist himself. Many things are not explained clearly, and the stand-in is very small, so I hope it will be clarified later. There are also some minor problems, such as the fact that the navy enters the Grand Line through the Upside Down Mountain, the division of swordsmen, swordsmen, and great swordsmen. The character design is not very clear. You can mention the protagonist's occupation in his previous life and his current goals, which will greatly help to flesh out the character image. It is mainly written that the analytical ability is fine. I hope that the avatar can be integrated into myself later. The avatar always feels out of control and has great limitations. According to the current plot, the ability belongs to the avatar, which means that the main body has no ability at all. Even if it analyzes natural fruits, it cannot be elementalized. Analyzing animal fruits cannot strengthen oneself. It would be great if a fusion ability could be opened later to integrate the avatar into oneself. At present, the advantage of avatars seems to be only the function of independently developing abilities, but it can be solved by casually writing skill cards, ability development cards, enlightenment cards, and thinking acceleration cards. (Personal thoughts only) At present, the ability of the avatar has been strengthened nearly ten times, and I don't see any difference. There is no need to worry about the ability division of the original avatar. The focus should be on increasing the depth of analysis (for example, you can deeply analyze devil fruits or ability users who have not used abilities and imitate them, and then you can go deep into analyzing the laws of devil factors), and increase the scope of analysis (such as adding more analysis objects, starting from analyzing devil fruits) To be able to analyze combat experience, talent, physical skills, swordsmanship, and even all things) From the title of the book, it should be Infinite Flow. In the later stages of Infinite Flow, almost all abilities tend to be single, but the combination of abilities before singleness is a major attraction. Currently, there are 6 skill slots, and the upper limit of abilities that can be used at the same time is two. I hope to see some interesting ability combinations, such as Flower Fruit + Childlike Fruit, Explosive Fruit + Momo Fruit. So far, there are no major problems. There are some minor problems but they do not affect the quality. Among the books I have read, the quality is above average (thirteen years of book age). I hope the author can stick to it (to be honest, I was very panicked when I saw that the author had just published a eunuch). If you feel that you can't continue writing, just change the map. It's okay to be more rigid, which is better than eunuch.

Updates are too slow, the story is not that exciting, and there is a high chance of eunuchs.

Speaking of which, are people with animal fruit abilities very suitable as mounts?

Fast forward to Luffy rescuing Nami, and the protagonist gives Nami a heart-wrenching blow. Get Bengyu

It's a pity. I thought I found another refreshing book, but it's a pity. There was a fan of Spring Man in the past, and the logic and reasoning were very good. It was a pity that the character design written by the author of that book was too deep, and he was not sure about it. It was too arrogant, and he was assigned to the 404 mine by the river crab master.

The name of the protagonist proves that this book is not for mortals. I am here to complain and haven't entered the palace yet? No need to go back, I won't come again

I didn't see where the protagonist was for more than a dozen chapters.

From Impel Down to the Multiverse is well written and develops on the scientific side.

Isn't it because the split fruit is not afraid of being slashed? Here's another one who's not afraid of blunt blows