My Silly Little Girlfriend

He Yuwei's character design is quite good. She doesn't necessarily get involved in the love affair between Lin Beicheng and Jiang Shu in this era. She just works silently behind the scenes and fulfills her previous wish.

The author failed to control He Yuwei. This character obviously has the memory of the heroine in the previous life and could have written more, but it just sucked like this. What a pity!

Cherish every author who writes sweet articles

Female author? It gives me the feeling of an ugly duckling. We brought in a male protagonist, but it feels like the author brought in a female protagonist.

I can only say that there is no need for female authors to compete with male fans. Is this obsession? It's so hard for girls to write things that men like to read... Really, I read your first book last year, but it seems that my grades haven't improved yet.

I come first and do whatever I want🙂

I was disgusted when I saw it later. When I was a child, my house was set on fire Later, I was threatened again, almost openly threatening my girlfriend's safety. I didn't dare to ask my parents for details. I just don't understand. What's the point of writing nonsense and ruining things in daily dog ​​food articles? Does it promote the plot? It's useless except to disgust readers.

Let's evaluate it objectively. This book is indeed not as well written as the dozens of chapters you cut out of the previous book. The rhythm of the previous book is better than this one. Before this book was put on the shelves, the writing was actually good and not considered poisonous, but after it was put on the shelves, it became a bit strange. First of all, the pace is too slow. It is too slow no matter what time it is. It is not right to be in love all the time or deal with urgent matters, but also to be affectionate in various ways. Furthermore, the cleanliness of falling in love has a cookie-cutter feel, and it becomes boring after watching too much. There is also the issue of title. The male protagonist can call the female protagonist by her nickname, but don't call her baby. Once the relationship is truly established, she will call her this way. I feel... It's too uncomfortable... Regardless of reality or novels, it is really awkward to call the heroine baby in almost any situation, or is it more intimate to call her by her nickname. Baby, it is more like used when coquettishly coaxing the other person. Rhythm is a big problem.

How should I put it? The author's writing style is very stable. There is no need for three golden chapters. The first two chapters can lure people into the trap. The emotional line is decided to be pure dog food. It depends on whether the business will be written crookedly later...

The writing is okay, the plot is average. What I can't accept the most is that the male protagonist is a person who has traveled back in time. Why is he so unsure of his wife of ten years? ? Thinking every day that your wife doesn't like you is really a sign of insanity. Is it because the novel completely forgot about the time-travel setting? There is also the plot of meeting your mother-in-law. How many times have you seen her in your previous life? Are you so nervous? That's ten years.

I have a small opinion. When I read Chapter 25, it was all kinds of dragging. It was obvious that I could confess, but all kinds of dragging and all kinds of psychological uncertainty. My head really hurt when I read it. Is there anything like this in the previous life that caused you to have this question? Delay the pace on purpose.

I feel so tired after reading one chapter for ten minutes 😒 Go to sleep💤

The heroine's surname is Jiang? Jiang Baigui? Looking forward to it

Single heroine yyds, stallions and so on, go to hell!

Maybe the author usually reads sweet stories on female videos, but this is not the case for male videos. The character Chen Fan in the early stage can be said to be extremely toxic. If this point alone is not changed, at least half of the readers will be lost. If the sweet stories are not sweet, they will always do some sexy tricks to persuade readers. I can't stand this book. I hope the author will read more sweet stories from the three giants of male videos, and stop thinking about arranging villains to promote the plot. Come on, download this book.

The other plots don't matter. The strangest thing is that after rebirth, you also know that your wife has always been secretly in love with you, and you also love your wife, but you still push her to the limit and play ambiguously. The male protagonist still feels that the female protagonist doesn't like him. Is he eating all the previous settings? I can't understand it at all... It's not sweet at all

Can you stop me during such a wonderful fight? Your vote is gone!

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Congratulations! Feifei is on the shelves! Congratulations!

Sweet love stories must have grudges between wealthy families. Is it really worthy of being written by a girl?

Such a good novel, but He Yuwei appears in the middle, which made me feel awkward reading the rest of it.

Although He Yuwei is a poisonous character, we can't just change her major to prevent her from appearing. You can write a little about her psychology to let her release this memory But Feifei has already written it very well, come on✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It feels so awkward, well, I am reborn with only memories and no experience.

Wow, the author is actually a woman😍😍😍

The level is not good and the sentences are not fluent.

As a woman sitting down, she can actually write this kind of thing😰😰

Good night (☝｀˘ω˘)☝

Damn it, it's less than half a million? You're more salty than me

The early poisonous points are a bit discouraging, but a little more attention can attract more readers Come on, author

Happy New Year's Eve ✩°̥࿐୨୧