The Fortune Teller in American Comics

I want to expand the world system layer by layer, but the result is that it becomes more and more complex. The system becomes stronger, but the strength remains unchanged. Wherever I go, I am beaten, and I always end up fighting back. I keep repeating this process. I have written so much that I don't know what the meaning is.

Salted fish and cabbage, everyone has his own merit For me, I accidentally found a book that suits my taste Please come on, follow the author's outline and think, and continue to create I will continue to support it

The plot is rubbish, I feel like I am about to die every time. The plot is also disgusting, like a lone star, full of bad luck. The emotional route is so many and tragic, and Goldfinger is so powerful. It is simply disgusting to the extreme. Didn't I say that today's novels are all so bad?

It feels like the protagonist Bai has traveled through time and has really become a child. Even his thoughts have become that of a child. He has no ability but still does things. He knows that the Marvel and dungeon worlds are dangerous and he is not careful. He deserves to be played with.

I was so happy for nothing, I thought it was Jhin.

So I settled a task and got nothing from the system!

It's a bit abusive. The system of seeking death at the beginning means that the protagonist tries to die, but then the protagonist doesn't go smoothly. Everything ends up being chased and slashed by the protagonist. First, the Skrulls chase and slash, and then the Kree team chases and slashes. The fairy tale world was magically modified by the author. It's almost over. I was tortured by the consciousness of the world, and was chased and slashed by the witch. After leaving the dungeon world, I was immediately noticed and designed by the powerful. , And then he was chased and hacked by Mephisto, and then he was seriously injured and ran into a small town, and was chased and hacked by a vampire werewolf, and then he was stable for two years, and played hide and seek with the killer for two years, and then it was outrageous. During a picnic with his classmates, he encountered other people sacrificing demons, and then needless to say, he was chased and hacked by Leviathan again. Seeing this, I can't stand it. I don't know whether the protagonist is causing disaster, or the protagonist is too arrogant, and the plot is too repetitive. Any trivial matter will eventually turn into chasing and killing the protagonist.

After reading more than sixty chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore and the plot didn't advance. Personally, I don't know what the plot is, but there are so many plot characters that I don't know what it's about? The author is enjoying himself

No wonder no one is watching, the plot has been changed to a mess, everyone doesn't like it, it will definitely be a eunuch

How long will it take to write the plot of the human cubs?

Do you think this is the Marvel you can read? You think this plot is the Marvel you are familiar with. You think this is really readable. You think it is just your imagination.

If it doesn't work, just cut the book. Your writing style is really too retro. The protagonist of "Tiansha Lone Star" is no longer popular. People come here to read novels for fun. No one will sympathize with you if your photos are off the street.

The naughty child system will no longer be involved in the plot, but it will still be a naughty child!

Has this author actually seen the movie? Why do I think he's just wearing Marvel skin...

Haha, the protagonist's own power has been swallowed up by an unknown system, and it also claims to help the protagonist grow. The system wants to stay in the protagonist's body, but does not want to compensate the protagonist. For the power the protagonist needs, it issues some inexplicable tasks. This system must come from the abyss.

I originally thought it looked good, but after reading it, I found that it had been changed into a mess. Fury himself had never died, and he even created the Skyward Sword Bureau to play in outer space, but it was changed. I can only say it is poisonous and I can't stand it.

If you can time travel or not, what else can you write?

Um, first of all, this style of novel is too much like playing a game. Pig's Knuckle is like a thoughtless account. Anyway, it's just playing. I'm not afraid of death at all. It's actually uncomfortable to read. Even if it's a death-defying system, Pig's Knuckle has to think about not really dying. But this book gives people the feeling that Pig's Knuckle is like playing a sandbox game.

I didn't even finish the first three chapters and was immediately persuaded to quit.

I would like to ask all the book friends here, I saw the fortune teller come in, is it related to Jhin? I see that the reviews for this book are not very good.

It's boring and childish. If there are no American comics, you won't even click on them. This category should go to fairy tales.

Is this a work from several years ago? Why are there still fools adopting the style of torturing their masters these days? This style is completely unpopular now! Going to work and school on weekdays is tiring and miserable enough, so wouldn't it be fun to read a novel? The protagonist you made is miserable, either tortured or abused. Who in the right mind would like to watch that? It is recommended that the author research the market carefully before writing, and do not post this kind of rubbish. No readers will buy it, and your efforts for writing for a long time will be in vain...

I read more than 60 chapters and couldn't stand it anymore, but I didn't see anything about Marvel!

I was so dizzy watching it, especially when I was dancing

It's a good idea, but I can't stand it.

It's hard for me to comment, I don't know what I'm writing about 😐