The Alchemist of the Hong Kong Crossover World

The "golden finger" (cheat code) setting is terrible, and the protagonist's personality is frivolous! Also, the protagonist, a 21st-century youth, seems like a country bumpkin in the city when he sees Hong Kong in the 80s and 90s—what the heck! Has he never been to a big city? Didn't he have internet access? Or did the protagonist live in a remote mountainous area before his time travel, where there was no internet?

This "golden finger" (a cheat system in the game) is such a rip-off! It demands materials through an equal exchange, yet it requires gold?! And that's not all; it also extracts elements from the body?! Is this still an equal exchange?! Another major flaw is that the original owner still harbors resentment...

Okay, so the protagonist later becomes Li Wenbin's henchman. Whenever there's trouble, the protagonist is called upon and always comes running, even giving him protective charms and such—treating him better than his girlfriend. But what about the protagonist's uncle's family, all police officers? Don't they take care of the protagonist?

Vivian Chow

Having read this far, all I want to ask is, what part of this feels like an alchemist story? It's a complete rip-off, a bunch of movie plots used to pad the narrative, and then it turns into a cultivation novel, a fantasy world? If you really can't write anymore, just end it! What a waste of time.

No wonder it's still so obscure; the plot is far-fetched, the characters are inconsistent, and the writing is rough. It's toxic from every angle, truly hard to swallow.

The protagonist's personality is so awful; how can someone with such a pig's brain be a protagonist?

Upon seeing the phrase "Love Fills the Courtyard," I automatically gave it a thumbs up and left.

I read a few chapters; the writing is poor, the premise is terrible, and only the subject matter is somewhat interesting. No wonder the comments section is full of criticism.

There's a reason why the author's grades are poor.