Fantasy: I Can See the Progress Bar

No one is because this book has too many loopholes, logic problems in many places, and the background is time travel, but it gives the impression that the protagonist is a simple and cute native who has never experienced anything, but there are some contradictions in some places. In general, this book is only suitable for reading without thinking.

It's not good to watch. The plot is very cliche. The hot-blooded boy starts at the beginning and you already know what he's going to do.

The writing is okay! Why is there no one?

Should I say it or not? I do have perseverance.

This grade is too bad. It shouldn't be.

There are so few people😰

At first I thought it was a world created by the author, but later I actually moved things from Journey to the West. In the early days of Qi training, I started to come into contact with things at the Taiyi Immortal level. Looking back, I saw that the protagonist was only at the first level of Qi training, and the gap was too big.

I'm really speechless! If the city is closed and no one can leave the city, isn't the city secretly connected to the outside? I kept saying that my sister and I couldn't leave the city.

I feel like this book is okay, but there are a lot of typos. Next time it's better to take a break after writing and then proofread it before publishing it.

I really admire it. There are more than 500 photos. After 400 photos, you only get into the small business. How can you make money? I should read the new book after I finish writing it.