My Empire Simulator

The writing is really good, but the updates are too slow.

What I say is my personal opinion only. First, I heard that it was written by a P Club player, and the charm is increased by 10 Second, there are two schools of writing this kind of historical writing (or fictional historical writing), one is the ultimate whiteness, and the second is the ancient rhyme. I don't think the author wants to take the path of a novice in his writing, so I speculate that he wants to express an ancient rhyme. This is actually very difficult, because it has to be close to the way the ancients spoke, but most of the words must be spoken in vernacular. It is crucial not to be obtrusive. This article is a bit abrupt, so my suggestion is that the language should be as concise as possible. For example, if "turn your head" becomes "turn your head", it will be more suitable for this article. There are also various titles and etiquette, it is better to be perfect. Thirdly, the issue of world view presentation seems to be insufficient at present, because it is an imaginary world and has a somewhat specious feeling, so it needs a detailed introduction. You can add a prologue before the text, or directly add a setting collection. In short, come on, the author, I hope the P club players will succeed in their part-time job.

This kind of book needs to be abundant to make it readable. Otherwise, you will read one chapter and it will be full of data, and then you will forget about it the next day.

When I wrote about Myanmar and Xinjiang, I disappeared. I guess I was dragged into collecting my kidneys and selling my blood.

I am so blown away by this book. There are only a few P club books like Qidian in the entire Qidian, I hope they won't be cut off

The author is a second-generation rich man who doesn't like the money of writing a book. It's no use urging you

The author is no longer here, please show some mercy🕯️

It's just Eunuch on the shelves, there's not even a single explanation, what the heck.

None again! ? None again! Why did it change like this after it was first put on the shelves? Why?

It's a bit outrageous that there are only two updates on the shelves.

That's it? Isn't it going to explode when it's put on the shelves? Who can see this? The readers next door saw it and thought we looked down upon it! Ten chapters to come! Ten chapters per person.

It won't be on the shelves for a day and then disappear.

(╥╯╰╥)งI promised that it would be released soon, but it will only be here for two days without updating.

I wiped it and saved it for two days without watching it. After watching it, I found out that it was cut and I vomited blood.

After deleting the bookshelf, I can only say that I subscribed to 4 chapters in vain.

I kept raising it, but then I lost it 😭

Whether one is alive or not, biography is the last word. How can anyone be alive and have a biography?

What's up? What went wrong? Why not update it? Falling out with the editor?

Little exclamation point, have a good trip. I'm so lucky to be writing a book with you.