Create Myths Starting from Pirates

The author avoids lightning~ 113-----117 is poisonous, skip it directly and it will not affect your reading. ………… ………… ………… This paragraph is the product of emotional problems. Others are fine.

The character in the story of Master Xuanling is very powerful, but I feel that you wrote it too hastily and did not express the tragic feeling too much. If you expand it in detail, this story can be amazing...

I have a suggestion, if the author writes this kind of story, the protagonist needs a clear goal! It feels very strange when I look at it now. I just don't understand what the protagonist wants to do. What are his needs?

Seeing that the first chapter talks about cause and effect, and the memory of the original owner is causing trouble, it really makes people quit. I believe there are many people who don't like this.

You wrote it wrong. As for Hawkeye, he has not yet become the world's swordsman. You directly wrote that he has become

A sandbox creation novel in pirate skin

Can you build a system for yourself and play with it?

I feel that the author is so lonely. He should use love to generate electricity, that's right

You should write down what benefits pig's feet bring to the group members, otherwise they will become money-spreading boys. Another thing is to grasp the frequency of pig's feet appearing. There is still something to write in the front. If the strength is too strong later, it will be difficult to grasp.

Author, why are you writing more and more messy and messy? And write a parallel one, what the hell. At least write the only one. It's getting more and more chaotic,

I was moved when I saw that there was no heroine and no ambiguity. I clicked in to read the first chapter. I didn't praise the pirates. I fell in love with it. I liked Luffy and the others, but there was indeed someone who escaped from prison... It was not easy to finally see an author who has a positive outlook on life and writes about pirates. I used to read Become a Pirate fanfic (but I only watched Pirates), but I didn't like Akainu because of the incident between Robin and Ace and the actions of Akainu's hawks. But some authors are really too good at the Black Navy, especially the Black Akainu. I hate him too, but I have to admit that Akainu protects civilians in the overall situation, and is just a hawk. And what that author did to Akainu really disgusted me (I won't say it, I don't want to say it, it's very disgusting), and I suddenly turned to being a fan of Pirates (except for a few) and a fan of Marine Road because of these two pirates. I especially hate those who join the Navy, but later plan to quit the Navy, causing the Navy's reputation to be damaged. If you don't like the Navy, don't use the Navy as a stepping stone if you have the ability. It's understandable if there are extenuating circumstances. Some people are ready to betray the Navy before joining, or just after joining. It's really annoying (that's what the author is like). Seriously, this is the first time I've hated a series because of one author. After I became a fan of the navy, I found that there are cute spots everywhere. Ahhh, I like the navy so much. I am very surprised!

I think it's okay, the main character is pretty good, don't ruin it

There is no sense of disobedience in replacing the black-hearted slave master with the black-hearted jbz. Using slave owners is a bit inconsistent. Aren't modern social animals signing a life-saving contract? Instead of voluntary substitution, this ability can be used in the world of cultivation. It is the death warrior. When fatally injured, it is randomly transferred to the death warrior.

What have I been doing in the last few chapters? Is the protagonist in a parallel time and space having a brain twitch? I suddenly don't know what to say, and there is a group in a parallel time and space. Isn't it confusing enough? The group members are also very similar. Although they are different characters, their characters in the group space have no characteristics. It feels like it has suddenly changed from a book that can be read to the most common chronicle book.

Chaos. I don't understand what the theme line is or what the purpose is. I just keep changing the world and then jump to the next world. The protagonist seems to be graffiti, just paste the paint on it. There is no theme. I can't understand it.

Why is it all a routine, the group members kill the enemy, those who look up to the group members, the BOSS comes to the door, and those who look down upon them, the subordinates come to the door, and then they themselves come. After the group members eliminate the BOSS, they get rewards and establish a new order.

Author, do you write about a super-god world?

I watched it as soon as it was updated, and then there was someone who was faster than me. Are you sure you didn't skip it after watching it?

Just to make a fuss, lest the author thinks I have forgotten you.

In the end, only this book remained until the end

Author, are you still there? You can't be a eunuch anymore, can you? The book is very good, don't give upah

Speechless, I saw your book while browsing the bookshelf, and wanted to come in and take a look, but it was gone In the end, it still made me feel a little uncomfortable like other books.

Is it a chat group or a myth creation?

I always feel like I'm in a mess, with no beginning or end.

No heroine is missing, or is there no heroine?