Martial Arts Alienation: I Have Several Sets of Skill Columns

After reading a little bit, I felt that I was a little bit jealous, about meeting Liu Xuening by chance, and then Liu Xuening told the protagonist about the setting, about the alienation of the divine presence, and finally being hunted down. The protagonist also wanted to save Liu Xuening. I just mentioned that I met a black-hearted businessman and was not deceived, but I had 100% trust in Liu Xuening. I really don't understand. The most important thing is that Liu Xuening is obviously a 3% alienated person, why is she called a divine person? And how does he know that the alienated person can become a demon, and the person who comes from God must be a god? Where did the name "The One Who Comes from God" come from? Why are there fewer people coming from the gods, and every bit is more poisonous?

After reading Chapter 5, let me briefly talk about a few points. First: After reading the first chapter, you will know the tone of this book. Everyone in the world is the enemy. Pig's feet are robot types and have no relatives and friends. After all, all relatives and friends are the kind of people who want to eat the meat of pig's feet. Secondly, the protagonist's golden finger is to get alienation points by killing alienators, so in Chapter 5, when I see an alienator and see a warrior in Chapter 5, I just shoot him in the head with a single shot. I just want to say that I'm sick. Third: The author sets a profession with 30 points, and you can open a new profession only after you click it. I want to say that the setting is unreasonable, just like a person who knows a little bit about everything but is not good at anything. How many people like this will have one person who specializes in one thing?

I blindly guess that this book can be a eunuch and jump. The training system is too complicated. Even if the author comes up with it, I don't think he can grasp it. It's so messy. When I saw the latest version, it had no main line at all and it felt like it was pieced together.

Not true

How about making the cover yourself?

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Damn it, the heroine is out after more than ten chapters

Author, when writing about people, you should at least describe their appearance. Every woman is beautiful, pretty, beautiful. Which part is beautiful and which part is beautiful? You have to tell me what she looks like

Come on! Invested. Hehe, we are all good comrades.

The villain's dreaming skill can be mastered in more than ten chapters

The system is too messy and has already collapsed in the future, and there are also many and very confusing realms. Warriors have different realms, aliens also have levels, divine beings have different levels, and magicians have several levels. There are too many systems, and each system has a different level. It is completely unclear who is better in the end. I feel like I am endorsing rather than reading a book.

The idea is very good, but maybe the writing style of a newbie is not good and it feels a bit confusing, and the plot cannot be controlled.

Poison, pig's feet and artifacts were all weakened by the villain's words. What is an artifact? The things used by gods are called artifacts. They are equal to gods in terms of class. Even gods can be weakened. So isn't the villain invincible? ?

Can't write without women?

After seeing it on the shelves, I felt pretty good. Well, it just felt too harsh when I encountered all kinds of taunts from the enemy. The description of the friend, especially the heroine, was okay.

This is originally about the world of martial arts, but why do you feel that the Alienated God's Arrival is the mainstream cultivation system? Others are auxiliary systems, such as magicians, immortal cultivators, and modern weapons. It's too messy and has no features at all, and the system features of each system are completely missing. What are you talking about?

When I read Chapter 66, I couldn't stand it. The female supporting character challenged the male pig to a dog licking challenge and was killed. The two elders took revenge and challenged the two elders. The plot was forced to add B. The main reason was that they speculated about how good the pig's feet are as a weapon. Or did they say it in front of a group of people? Is the plot so difficult to connect?

1 You need to remember the color of the dehydrator

It doesn't matter whether it's the immortal way or the martial way. This idea is a bit silly.

Giving away bullets is a bit off-putting. Maybe it's because I suffer from a lack of firepower.

I watched a few of them, and the main character is too nosy.

It's hard to describe the beginning of this first chapter

Silver City

I would like to recommend a book called "A Riding and Cutting System with You"

The killings are so casual, I feel like the author might be a child. You can kill many people, but you must have your own sense of right and wrong. Randomly killing people without much of a reason is a little too scary.

So he's a eunuch? I got the daily virus guide, and then I found out that the update was two days ago.

Searching for Aleister, I found it, outrageous

There were too many illusions written at the end, which directly discouraged many readers. In fact, everyone's realm is not weak, and there are many people in the same illusion. It will be difficult to maintain the illusion, and the golden elixir of cultivating immortals is said to be inviolable, so these illusions are difficult to affect.

The setting is quite novel, but it always turns into an illusion, making my head spin.