The Sword Immortal Is No Immortal

The first aboriginal, no one is watching the aboriginals now The second major thing is that there are too many things, one after another, the ancient prose tells twists and turns, the ups and downs, the information is too dense, the aesthetic fatigue, need a time to breathe The third protagonist is always being taken away, beg others to save him, without the halo of the protagonist, he would have died long ago

The writing is too dense. It works well as an outline. I just need to drink some water. It makes me inexplicably tired.

I feel that the protagonist's adventure is really full of ups and downs. In the early stage of cultivation, he had to deal with such a bunch of big guys in the later stage.

It's magical, but it looks a little tired

The events are too dense, too compact, and the connections are short. It feels like everything you have to do in a day can be done in two or three hours. I have only read Chapter 16 and there are so many twists and turns. Before I finish reading any story (event), the next one comes right after. It can't be said that it's brain-burning. Before it starts, it's time to move on to the next story. I feel like this is more like an outline, but the text is too compact.

After reading more than ten chapters, I want to know if the protagonist can survive after participating in a duel with top bosses when he has just started training. He feels that everything he encounters is a situation of no life or death...

The protagonist is too passive, the plot is too dense, and the map changes frequently. Some bosses appear very suddenly. This book is well written, but it is tiring to read. The author's style is very similar to that of a nerd. Slow down the pace of the story. If not many people will read it, I read novels for leisure after working all day.

The content is too dense, and it feels tiring to read, like a passing cloud, without any deep impression. The content still needs to be detailed and appropriate, just to make it easier to read. Now the whole book is focused, and there is no overly relaxing content. The protagonist is tired, and so are the people watching.

This arrangement is really good. Reading dozens of chapters feels like reading a book with a thousand chapters. It's just that the protagonist himself has never had a chance to express his thoughts.

The natives are pretty good. No need to travel through time