When Chaldea Appeared in Marvel

Currently reading Chapter 48, I found three major problems 1: The article said that runes are carried by gems No matter which FATE series or each rune-capable heroic spirit uses gems as a medium, the gems are used to carry the Tohsaka family's gem magic. The author confused gem magic and runes. 2: When fighting Happy, use Bajiquan to hit his jaw to defeat Happy As Bajiquan, most of the moves in our images are straight punches. If it hits the temple and other places, I don't think it is unreasonable, but saying it hits the jaw with Bajiquan gives me the feeling that Bajiquan is confused with free fighting again. 3: The last thing is the style of writing. I personally feel that the protagonist is too novice, and there are some problems with the writing. At the beginning, Chaldea is introduced to Lu Dan to ensure the survival of humanity. After Chapter 1, a mission is issued to attack the gangster's hometown. A gangster's hometown can give 30 holy crystals, the same price as hatred. Are those gangsters capable of threatening the survival of humanity? The style suddenly dropped.

Tell me what you think! I feel that the overall direction is very clear, but when it comes to other supporting characters, there is a feeling of a third-rate RPG game with a plot, and there is no sense of involvement. The portrayal of other characters is not particularly good. I feel that I can only see the surface, just like reading a book and only seeing the book but not the content. It is difficult to remember the story of the protagonist and others. The few times I watched the dialogue between the protagonist and Ah Fu, I felt that I didn't remember anything. It can be seen that the author should want to write a feeling of home, but it is too superficial. I feel that the author should think more when writing.

In fact, I like this kind of protagonist very much, because I want to be such a person, but I can't do it, so I can only rely on virtual works. The game FGO has moved me countless times, which led me to the idea that shouldn't a master be someone who can pay for others? But this is very unreal and can only be an ideal, but I really want to be this kind of person. And it's not that there are no such people, it's that such people are rarely seen, so I want to pay attention to them. I've seen a lot of selfish protagonists, but every time I didn't feel it, and I couldn't feel happy about the novel, because I was thinking, should I really do this in this situation? Is there no other way? Many authors will describe the protagonist's choices as absolutely correct and others as absolutely bad. I once thought that if this kind of protagonist met that kind of person, he would lose a lot if he helped him, but that person would survive, and that person would not harm the protagonist but could not give him anything. Will this situation help at all? In the end, I came to the conclusion that I would not do it, because it would not be beneficial and would harm my own interests. We can't force him to do this because this is what ordinary people think. But since it's a novel, why can't it create a protagonist who thinks about others?

He is a very cute and innocent protagonist! A very rare trait in the online literary world! A little shy, even a little low on self-esteem, I feel like a 14 or 5-year-old junior high school student. The plot that could be called a poisonous point in other novels actually makes people feel cute. The writing is not excellent but it makes people feel friendly. All in all, in my opinion, it is a work worth reading. I dare not say it when school starts, and it should not stop during the holidays. By the way, the author is not a junior high school student, right? 😜 In addition, Holo is a very good Master!

Final image This is the final look. Both the expression and appearance are exactly the same as the expected male protagonist, but the figure is a bit too slender. It would be better if it was just a little bit calmer! Just like Son Wuhan's muscular body when he was a teenager, that would be perfect! Of course, this is not bad. After all, in terms of face alone, I think he is the most satisfied and the one who most resembles my protagonist.

Original avatar Is it cute? Astolfo is indeed the best!

😎😎 The conception, three views, and plot are all very good Although I don't agree with the author who always maintains this book with emotion

This protagonist is too shy, I feel very embarrassed

I haven't read it yet, but when I saw the mission of robbing a bank in the United States, I was wondering if the author's philosophy of humanity is only for the American people? Because if robbing a bank can be considered a humanitarian mission, banks are robbed every day around the world, and there is no such mission. So what the author calls protecting humanity is actually just protecting the United States.

The first is that the heroic spirit is too bad, the second is that the description of the gender and orientation of the protagonist is too neutral, and the third is that even a small thing can be intimidated by human beings. You can just write it as a daily task. If it is poisonous, it is actually okay, but this book does not fit well with me.

Original avatar Ma Xiu is the best! Number one in the world! No one doesn't like little eggplants!

Speed ​​Fencing

Wow, senior! ? Why did you run in front of me during the battle?

The Flower Marries Nero Special!

If you really traveled through time, summoning the heroic spirits should not rely on luck like the game, but should be like the anime, requiring a response from the heroic spirits. Logically speaking, judging from the protagonist's performance, there should be many heroic spirits willing to respond to the protagonist's call. Normally, the group of heroic spirits will probably have to fight for this first, and whoever wins will respond. This is what the heroic spirits in the Hall of Valor are like. Apart from having fun in the Hall of Valor every day, fighting is their biggest hobby.

After reading dozens of chapters, let me share my personal opinion I like the three views of the protagonist, they are very upright, but the Madonna's is a bit too much, but it is a minor criticism at most. I believe most readers should be able to accept this. However, with the Virgin, the protagonist's IQ or personality are a bit wrong. I always feel that the protagonist takes everyone for granted and treats everyone as kind-hearted, lacking determination, and does not understand his own importance. Whether it is the early or later stage, Fujimaru Ritsuka does not have the protagonist's natural lack of vigilance towards everyone and plain kindness. Knowing that S. H. I. E. L. D. Might be Snake Shield, he arbitrarily exposed all his information when he only had one heroic spirit on his side. He didn't understand his position when fighting Monk Evil, and the director of Chaldea and the only Master rushed forward? ? I never thought that if I died and Marvel appeared because of me, there would be some conflicts between the Butterfly Effect and the previous characters. The most speechless thing is that I was even treated by S. H. I. E. L. D. I won't comment on the heroic spirit's combat power. After all, the world view is different, but the protagonist has not positioned himself properly. He is a pure devotional protagonist, which is very hollow under the vague writing style. It is easy to have a dissuasive effect on novices and veterans. The author didn't feel it when he wrote it, but when we readers read it, the protagonist's character is very strange. I hope the author can read it a few times and correct some of the bad points to improve the shortcomings. Currently, the more I read, the less I can stand it. Maybe it's because I don't want to read toxic books recently. I hope the author can work hard and see you again.

Regarding the parents section, which some people say is toxic, I have some suggestions (a message to the author) Since some people think it is toxic, at least it means there is something wrong with the plot. Before the protagonist's parents suddenly appear and recognize their relatives, there is no description of the parents at all, not even any foreshadowing. On page 44, it suddenly appeared, and the part about the parents struggling to find their son was omitted (maybe not at all?). In reality, how difficult is it for parents who have lost their children? The answer can be found in Andy Lau's movie "Lost Orphan". The protagonist used almost all means available to find his lost son, used all his resources to find the child, and even ended up traveling half of southern China to look for him. And the parents in the article are one! Point! Shop! Pad! Without! Have! The protagonist's career starts, and suddenly these two people pop out of the five-star hotel in glamor! There was no foreshadowing, so these parents made me feel as disgusting as those relatives in reality who suddenly pop up and wash your blood after tens of thousands of years of not contacting you just after your career has started to improve! The author just said in a deleted post that parents are the subject of the first part. But you have an orphan image of the protagonist in front of you I think it doesn't matter what the author wants to write, but what I want to see is a family interaction full of warmth, parents full of love for their son, not a vampire who jumps out after hearing about the child's development. As a reader, I spent twenty minutes typing this long paragraph in the hope that this book would be well written. If you are only willing to write a book for yourself behind closed doors and think what I am saying is bullshit, you can delete this post and let's get over it, but I hope the author can listen to the opinions of readers. There are a lot of trolls at the beginning, but can you put the readers who also hope that the saplings will grow into towering trees like the author with dreams are put in the same category with them?

Looking through the character list, the male protagonist is actually bisexual. What a magical sexual orientation. Looking through the comments, it turns out that the male protagonist is still a weakling. It's really amazing.

If it is the Marvel Cinematic Universe, Xingyue's heroic spirit may still be a threat, but if it is the Marvel Comics Universe, then Chaldea and the entire Xingyue are pressed to the ground and rubbed, so the Marvel of this book is the movie universe

Original avatar picture, you read it right, he is Holo's dad (ಡωಡ)

Original picture of Siegfried, tell me loudly whether Brother Fei is handsome or not!

I haven't read it yet, but the character bar breaks the defense immediately The heroine………… With a bunch of heroines, readers will assume that you are a harem And 99% of the heroic spirit system is harem style The author replied that it is a single heroine It is also quite desperate First offend the readers of single heroines, and then offend the readers of harem novels, and incidentally offend the readers of gay novels

To be honest, at first I thought the protagonist's outlook was normal, but then the more I watched, the more strange it became. How the hell is this normal outlook? This is a virgin bitch. Your grandfather has assassinated you and your parents, not just once or twice, but he almost succeeded every time. In the end, grandpa gave it up and refused to kill the killer. He was sent to prison. You didn't follow the no-kill principle. The soldiers before didn't see you not killing anyone. Really, if a passerby is killed, you will kill the murderer, and if it comes to your parents and yourself, you will just send him to jail. You already know the person behind the scenes, but you don't hurry up to deal with it. You still live a leisurely life. Saying the word Holy Mother is an insult. It is almost like a holy mother bitch. You put yourself and your loved ones around you in danger at all times. Is this your kindness? You are so kind to the enemy that the person who kills you will not have to die.

Sir, did I read the heroine correctly?

Why are there four wrong characters mixed into the heroine?

The Mind Stone invaded the Chaldean system to form Ultron, and then Ultron decided to exterminate humanity in order to protect humanity?

I didn't expect that it would be 3 years so soon. I don't know where the author has gone.

Wait, you are a soul traveler You have some feelings for the parents of this body Just like a stranger

If you can't stop Zishu from snapping his fingers, is there a way to change someone else to do it a third time?

Although I haven't caught up yet, I'm done spreading flowers🎆